Brilliant work, start to finish with just 2 or 3 minor misses and maybe a bass line would help, but a really fantastic effort, well done.
Best wishes and lets have more,
Mark/Larry!
Nice one, some real nice changes in style and beat, maybe a pad or two of synth sitar would have added to it ( but I'm probably in a minority with this view!)but really well put together and a good track.
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Mark/Larry
really nice for the fist take, haunting strings. maybe some light percussion variations, some deeper pads and a some piano keys might help, but it was good listening.
best wishes Mark
Hey Mark! (used to call you Larry..^^). As always I much appreciate your honest comment. Many thanks for advice while I'm still exploring some alternatives on this one and I think I got some additional ideas to apply here. In time we will see how it turns out. Best wishes, my friend___Orlando
I know it's full of defects as compared to Janis' legendary talent and voice, but I did my best to sing it with all my heart and I'm real happy you liked it as it is, Larry .
Merci for your warm comment :)
dear Larry , ''Top'' is your generous personality that recognizes value of exclusive collaboration & shares his worthy idea with me & us , far from envious reactions that I've used to see from some of our colleagues.we are both gratefull ,many thnx & appreciations .____Behnam + BrandY
Yeah actually it's not long because it's a sample...I was kinda afraid to release a full thang coz classic is far away from what i usually do. But i'll work it out fully if i get much fav on this.Thanks for passing by Larry
good effort, nice change in the middle. A little more bass and maybe an increase in the beat/tempo for last 40 secs might improve it, but a really good job, thanks for sharing.
Thank you for a really really nice track, good synths and melodies, maybe a few more beat variations and vocals would add to it...but that's only me...overall brilliant work!!
really nice track and I liked it, maybe a stronger bass line would help and a few beat variations ( but I am the master of putting to much into a track and spoiling it!!)but a really good job.
Thats Definitely one thing I forgot! The thing in this song that maybe sounds like a bassline is actually a Pad in Nexus from the XP Dance Pack Volume 3 Called the "MovinPad ARP" I Totally forgot that! But Thank you for your Input and I will definitely through in a FAT bassline this next one I'm almost done with!
Brilliant work and so melodic...didn't know if some percussion towards the end would have added to the mood, but that's me, I tend to throw to much in!!! but a real good track.
nice one, and certainly one that you could extend, I am learning fast that putting everything including the kitchen sink into a track isn't always the way, as this proves...great job Orlando.
A good start,a bit more bass and a few more drops would help, but it is a nice and catchy.. never be afraid to repeat the vocals, add a bit of extra beat and pads/seqs to it and you would be surprised what a difference it would make. A really good track and I really hope my comments help.
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it still needs more work to do
have no Ideas for the end yet :)
maybe fading out!!!
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