Some of the elements from the original track are cool its just that some parts that have been layered again seem to be clashing and perhaps the vocal is out of time. If I were you I would reconsider things.
Hey ntid..sorry for the late reply..that's the thing about music it's different strokes for different folks.Slap's sax is great stuff I agree!..cheers Dave :)
The structure is good and the sounds are good but the music seems to be clashing. I get an idea of what you are trying to do but unfortunately the notes and chords are all over the place i.e they don't work together. Try not to stress about the compression etc. and work on the music side of things. Im no expert but I can tell when something isn't working musically.
The compression I know about, it's not supposed to be like that at all and it's fixable.
But about the notes and chordes, that sounds really bad! I'm wondering if you listened to the original remix also? Or do you just dislike the melody either way?
Thanks for the criticism, that's what I need to hear!
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The compression I know about, it's not supposed to be like that at all and it's fixable.
But about the notes and chordes, that sounds really bad! I'm wondering if you listened to the original remix also? Or do you just dislike the melody either way?
Thanks for the criticism, that's what I need to hear!