This is a great sounding catchy track. Need a little more bass but I love the lyrics. Great concept mixing rock and hip hop because you are a natural at it. I also like the harmony in the chorus. great job bro
I would like to write some lyrics for this in the next few weeks and sing to it. Let me know and you can email me the MP3 or just have it for download on here. If you have any lyrics you've thought of let me know and we'll work on it. cheers man
Paul
aka Shimmy Shanks
I really enjoyed listening to this one. The vocals mixed with the instrumentals works very well. The female voice reminds me of an artist named "Alice DJ".
ImproveWithError is right about the drums. They just have to be smoothed out a little more when the loop ends and starts back up again. I am willing to give it a shot writing some lyrics and singing to this song in a Radiohead style. Let me know if I can be of any help since it said you needed a singer for this song.If you have your own lyrics to the song that would be great as well. Nice song though!
Thanks for taking time out to hear it matey - Just starting out on this little venture over heave at looperman - Hopefully will improve with proper reading up on the tech side of things - J
I like this song. One because it's catchy and two because you remind me of singing my own songs. Good vocals and you'll find me bouncing my head to this song.
damn the vocals are right on cue. She definitely has some amazing talent. I'm looking forward to more like this one. Great song! try some beats with it
makes me want to grab my harmonica and start jammin along side ya on the porch. Great job especially with just loops. Keep the foot tappin porch music comin!
ShimmyShanks
love the lyrics. got a great vocal range and it fits the style of the song. reminded me of some contemporary singers as well as some from the early 90's.the guitar solo is sick.good job!
even though this is a slow tempo R&B song I still totally dig the piano and the beat together. great combination. maybe a little less pause between piano sessions but I can see myself easily writing lyrics to this track. bravo
I like this song a lot. It has great breakdowns and transitions from chorus parts and guitar solos. You did a great job of putting this together. I might put some lyrics together for it and record a bit over it and post it. I'll let you know if I do
Hi Paul,
Thanks for dropping by. It was strange for a moment as we have a fellow at work with the same name and spelling, and I thought it was him. :)
Anyways, this was the only tune I put together of this style music (punk style). I intend to make a few more though.
I love working with loops and rearranging them, putting them together like a puzzle and hearing the results.
For instance, that piano part, I decided to place at the beginning of the tune as I felt it would set the song off.
I made note of your myspace page and will check it out, and will also review some of your tracks here and give you feedback.
You can put some lyrics to it if you want to. That would be cool.
Thanks again for your comments.
You might want to check out a couple of my later tunes. 'Canadian Pride' and 'Guitar Heros', these have a nice beat and a full sound that everyone strives for in recordings.
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aka Shimmy Shanks
The track is downloadable now.
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Thanks for dropping by. It was strange for a moment as we have a fellow at work with the same name and spelling, and I thought it was him. :)
Anyways, this was the only tune I put together of this style music (punk style). I intend to make a few more though.
I love working with loops and rearranging them, putting them together like a puzzle and hearing the results.
For instance, that piano part, I decided to place at the beginning of the tune as I felt it would set the song off.
I made note of your myspace page and will check it out, and will also review some of your tracks here and give you feedback.
You can put some lyrics to it if you want to. That would be cool.
Thanks again for your comments.
You might want to check out a couple of my later tunes. 'Canadian Pride' and 'Guitar Heros', these have a nice beat and a full sound that everyone strives for in recordings.
Thanks again Paul,
Randy.