Cool track, very cool beat. The lyrics could be better but you probably know that. There is a glaring problem though. Listen to it, during the chorus ("she's my punk rawk chick") there's a gnarley discrepancy between the drums, guitar and vocals. They're not on, but i think you could get 'em to match up real easily. Listen to it, you'll hear what i'm talking about.
I like the way this doesn't try to pretend to be too serious. it sounds fun to me. I like the kind of thing happening here. I really like Beck and this reminds me of something similar to that kind of idea. Only more danceable and just fun
good ol punk rock. you definitely captured the feel of how punk used to be and the slight mis-timing of the guitar in parts adds to this rather than taking away. great !!
Great use of guitar samples and your vocals are really, really good. I guess my only crituqe would be maybe boosting the bass a little more on the track to anchor the guitar track. (I'm a bass player too) other than that, you've got what I call a "Power Punk Pop" thing happening, sort of like early (Green Day). Great job thanks for sharing, peace. D
For some reason I really like this song. My only complaint is that it's a bit short, but that can be remedied by pressing repeat lol...I really like how you used reverb on your voice.
Saw you as a featured and so I decided to right then check out your tune..
Pretty good for using a loop. Just a little bit of timing issues, but still overall nicely put together. Your singing is decent too.
I have a few punk-rock type tune loops that I bought. Sometime soon here I'll make them into something and maybe you can add in vocals to them if you'd like to.
Hey Randy,
thanks for the input. I only use garage band on my Mac so timing is sometimes hard to fix. I have been working on some new vocals to go along with tracks I downloaded from this site. If you write any kind of song I'm down to write some lyrics and do the vocals. just let me know.
this is cool because not many people attempt punk rock anymore. you definitly got the style going. cool. a few mess ups on the guitar but the voice is good
Hey Paul, nice quirky tune mate. Vocals and guitar are cool and fit well with the feel of the song.I think the songs length is fine...no rules here , just opinions.well done mate.peace & goodwill
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By the way, this is an amazing song. Damn sweet.
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but a bit softer
:-p
One suggestion is on the chorus guitar, it was a bit off (only by like a couple of seconds)
I like this a lot
definitely my style
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Saw you as a featured and so I decided to right then check out your tune..
Pretty good for using a loop. Just a little bit of timing issues, but still overall nicely put together. Your singing is decent too.
I have a few punk-rock type tune loops that I bought. Sometime soon here I'll make them into something and maybe you can add in vocals to them if you'd like to.
Nice job Paul,
Randy
thanks for the input. I only use garage band on my Mac so timing is sometimes hard to fix. I have been working on some new vocals to go along with tracks I downloaded from this site. If you write any kind of song I'm down to write some lyrics and do the vocals. just let me know.
Paul
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I like this....