DannyBOLO

nice n smooth vocals, tight

just the beat

This is phat man, keep it old school.

yeah I have to agree with Zighn ..Its a great track but the vocals need re-doing... have you tried using acid pro? its all really cool programme. Invest in a Sure mic ( around $70 ) and then when your done recording ..there´s a cool Waves vst called L2 that limits everything but gives your track a full sound without all the distortion. Hope this helps my friend. all the best, mik

Very emotional, works great, it sounded very sincere, not like someone wrote down some words for you to say

wooow man, this is deep. i can feel the pure emotion. love the beats, the mild piano, the expression in the lyrics, and the way they convey your feelings ! all in all, great track.

this is a fantastic song.. its a nice flowing track very chilled. nice chorus and excellent verse. top job. mik

Hey Bolo good work on this one!
I like the Beat! LOL

I can understand why youve got this Track for a while! Isnt anybody wont to be his self? Im wit u!

Thanks

Ciko

Just Clownz Productions

Great work with the mix and the music. Real nice track.

i like this track but id suggest ud lower down ur mic level n phase it down to tha beat, that's in addition to the reverb... btw what stuff r u using? anywayz u got a banging flow, kp it up!!
One

Nice bass and piano

the beat is power...but the lyrics ^^....

being nearly 39 I remember the old school hiphop tracks this is really good..faved.. mik

the piano sounds fimiliar
couldve made the vox clearer
smoother transitions between the dream on and verses

otherwise good job

you dont need a better mic, naw you just need a producer like me! haha. great song! keep these ill matic joints comin out! it reminds me of freeway from philly.

Mos' ReQuest~

yo, I dig you're flow. You should hit me up if you need beats cause I need some tight word choice.
Peace

Real nice flow
for real
no idea who made the beat but its hot

i like the scratches it thight

I liked this track - good feeling going that's laid back. The beat you worked with compliments it real well. The vocal was a little unclear and the scratching was a little too pronounced but it doesn't take away from the overall sound. If you did the lyric yourself... then big props!

Very nice! Good solid beat, I like how you change up between the snare and the clap - the piano work is great and gives a the track a nice 'anxious' feeling to everything. My only crit would be that the vocal is a little soft (for my taste) and there seems to be a notation conflict between the female sample and the piano in the chorus (once again, taste Otherwise - i'm really impressed. Hip-hop is tough to pull off but you don't have that problem!