DannyBOLO

good shit. sombody must have really pissed you off. lol

nice n smooth vocals, tight

I Love it. Its like some "Brotha Lynch Hung" shit

just the beat

This is phat man, keep it old school.

Hey i like vox and lyrics coz u mixed and used very nicely,
nice Robotic/Alien effect over vox.
overall a great work.
Goodluck for the contest!
Peace
Rashid

yeah I have to agree with Zighn ..Its a great track but the vocals need re-doing... have you tried using acid pro? its all really cool programme. Invest in a Sure mic ( around $70 ) and then when your done recording ..there´s a cool Waves vst called L2 that limits everything but gives your track a full sound without all the distortion. Hope this helps my friend. all the best, mik

Very emotional, works great, it sounded very sincere, not like someone wrote down some words for you to say

wooow man, this is deep. i can feel the pure emotion. love the beats, the mild piano, the expression in the lyrics, and the way they convey your feelings ! all in all, great track.

this is a fantastic song.. its a nice flowing track very chilled. nice chorus and excellent verse. top job. mik

Hey Bolo good work on this one!
I like the Beat! LOL

I can understand why youve got this Track for a while! Isnt anybody wont to be his self? Im wit u!

Thanks

Ciko

Just Clownz Productions

Great work with the mix and the music. Real nice track.

i like this track but id suggest ud lower down ur mic level n phase it down to tha beat, that's in addition to the reverb... btw what stuff r u using? anywayz u got a banging flow, kp it up!!
One

Nice bass and piano

the beat is power...but the lyrics ^^....

being nearly 39 I remember the old school hiphop tracks this is really good..faved.. mik

the piano sounds fimiliar
couldve made the vox clearer
smoother transitions between the dream on and verses

otherwise good job

you dont need a better mic, naw you just need a producer like me! haha. great song! keep these ill matic joints comin out! it reminds me of freeway from philly.

Mos' ReQuest~

love the flow... collabo much? get at me!! www.myspace.com/josephschild

the only thing of squinching (did i spell that shit right?) is the mike quality... everything else is beautiful.

shit is killer yo..... post some more tracks..

yo, I dig you're flow. You should hit me up if you need beats cause I need some tight word choice.
Peace

Real nice flow
for real
no idea who made the beat but its hot

have no idea who made it but sounds fuckin great man,and yes is rea tiite, real g style, nice bruva, peace
mouko

real nice bro!, like the flow on this one,and the beat is fuckin nice great job
peace
mouko

i like the scratches it thight