I liked this track - good feeling going that's laid back. The beat you worked with compliments it real well. The vocal was a little unclear and the scratching was a little too pronounced but it doesn't take away from the overall sound. If you did the lyric yourself... then big props!
Very nice! Good solid beat, I like how you change up between the snare and the clap - the piano work is great and gives a the track a nice 'anxious' feeling to everything. My only crit would be that the vocal is a little soft (for my taste) and there seems to be a notation conflict between the female sample and the piano in the chorus (once again, taste Otherwise - i'm really impressed. Hip-hop is tough to pull off but you don't have that problem!
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