yeah this 1 here was just somethin that i had to get out, kinda like therapy if u know what i mean. good look on the review. actually made this in a trailer at 3am down in phoenix with police choppers hoverin. had to edit some shit.
In that case, my apologies!!!!! great job, its not everyday you hear such a on point freestyle!!!! My bad!!
yhea man, got alota ish goin on to right now, but lemme know when u get round to that one, leave me a lil verse on it, that beat so hardcore it would b a nice one to match are styles on...
feelin this one too, kinda got that eminem flow on this... my gurl agree... that track is hella catchy and you get going great on it!!!!!!
FreeStyle:
Freestyle rap is an improvisational form of rapping, performed with few or no previously composed lyrics, which is said to reflect a direct mapping of the mental state and performing situation of the artist. It is non-scripted, non-rehearsed, uncut, and the rawest form of hip-hop. Artists will often refer to places and objects in their immediate setting. Freestyle rapping forces an individual to think on the spot, describe their surroundings, and, to a certain degree, rap uncensored from what is inside. It is similar in this sense to improvisational music or acting and draws comparisons to improvisational jazz in particular.
hahaha, soory for the long dictionary definition, but thought i'd drop it on ya, since i reallllllly don't think this is freestyle... i know alot cats that free, me bein one, and in my opinion this isnt one...
Im not trying to rain on your parade, im lovin the track, and i also know a couple cats that write down a rhyme in like 10 minutes and call it a freestyle when its done and recorded, in my opinion, that is not...
Keep up the Good Work Homie!!!! I'm a lil over My head right now but as soon as i free up a lil, i really wanna werk a beat with you, i think are styles and voices would work well together...
Any werd on "the hype" from N18th??
Lemme know!!!
actually my dude, that was a freestyle. i looped the beat on audacity and let loose. i did do some minor editing(removed about 30 bars cause they didnt fit the beat time) didnt prewrite any of this 1. i pretty much freestyle most of my songs. ive got a pretty extensive ryme catalog in my head.
thanks for the review and im glad yall like this 1. yeah, i got that hype beat. no chance for me to get with it yet, have had alot going on, will do asap.
Yo sick verses, but fitty sucks, i dunno why u made dat hook sound ike his, but i like your own original shit more, if i wanna hear fifty, (which I dont, lol) i'll listen to his album...
No offense meant, i think you prolly the sickest MC i heard on here so far, well, in my opinion, your shits real, so just do you!!!
thanks for the honest review. much appreciated. i thought it had a familiarity to something, i just couldn't pinpoint it. I actually have a copyright to the lyrics to this, i filed in 2002. didn't really grab a melody for it till i heard this beat. definitely didn't take it the wrong way. i spit what i feel. i always take honest reviews for what they are. alot of people drop a review like "cool song" which doesn't help anyone. i dont know bout u but i need someone to tell me if one of my joints sound like somethin all ready done, hell, i want people to hear my music and say, dam thats B.O.L.O. not, is that a ____such and such remake?
more info if u will,
is it the melody of the chorus? the lyrics? or both? i still dont know what song of fitty it was cuz to be real, i really dont listen to mainstream hip hop that often.
Doooope im feelin this one is hellllllla dope!!!! this is the kinda shit im on, werd guy, should peep my ish lemme know what you think!!! Dope shit tho, definatly faved that ish...
Yo you should enter the next MC comp next month, check the hip-hop competitions in the competitions forum..
homie nice flow right off the bat u came right back u comein wit a bat and lay them push over boy straight on they back its ok u got on the attack now all i can say is wow let me through u this freestlye cause im young richard bling make u go seenile and my flows run forever like the nile but nice beat gave me something to eat while i work on some new heat! peace young richard bling
thanks, i appreciate the feedback. it was done pretty quickly and didnt really have time to mix it when somethin else popped into my head. soon as i run out of songs knockin in my mind id like to remix that 1.
the beat IS bangin, u got that right. as for the lyrics, not for everyone i guess. check out a few of my other songs. hard not to like "tight" or "be me". thanks for the review.
sounds rough raw live like u strive like u said u might drive by why cause that track so dope and so fly aint no lie figured id text freestyle my comment maybe ud read it and apprecieated for the moment now i wish 2 white boys like us would get a track and get own it duce. young richard bling! comment my song please thnx.
on tight by DannyBOLO
on tight by DannyBOLO
i love the way u rapped on this.
u managed to do the screaming emotional shit better than i did.
lol
keep it koming.
B.O.L.O.
on freestyle N18th beat by DannyBOLO
yhea man, got alota ish goin on to right now, but lemme know when u get round to that one, leave me a lil verse on it, that beat so hardcore it would b a nice one to match are styles on...
1
Spit
B.O.L.O.
on freestyle N18th beat by DannyBOLO
FreeStyle:
Freestyle rap is an improvisational form of rapping, performed with few or no previously composed lyrics, which is said to reflect a direct mapping of the mental state and performing situation of the artist. It is non-scripted, non-rehearsed, uncut, and the rawest form of hip-hop. Artists will often refer to places and objects in their immediate setting. Freestyle rapping forces an individual to think on the spot, describe their surroundings, and, to a certain degree, rap uncensored from what is inside. It is similar in this sense to improvisational music or acting and draws comparisons to improvisational jazz in particular.
hahaha, soory for the long dictionary definition, but thought i'd drop it on ya, since i reallllllly don't think this is freestyle... i know alot cats that free, me bein one, and in my opinion this isnt one...
Im not trying to rain on your parade, im lovin the track, and i also know a couple cats that write down a rhyme in like 10 minutes and call it a freestyle when its done and recorded, in my opinion, that is not...
Keep up the Good Work Homie!!!! I'm a lil over My head right now but as soon as i free up a lil, i really wanna werk a beat with you, i think are styles and voices would work well together...
Any werd on "the hype" from N18th??
Lemme know!!!
1
SpitShine
thanks for the review and im glad yall like this 1. yeah, i got that hype beat. no chance for me to get with it yet, have had alot going on, will do asap.
B.O.L.O.
on aint i high yet by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on aint i high yet by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on If i could by DannyBOLO
Meach
B.O.L.O.
on aint i high yet by DannyBOLO
im loving the stuff you be dropping bolo.
ill flows.
lol, we shouldve just ripped this 2gether. lol
B.O.L.O.
on aint i high yet by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on freestyle N18th beat by DannyBOLO
the flow is nice, you really went with it.
the rhymes are krazy, i kant believe its a freestyle man.
damn.
we gotta do suttin PRONTO!
big ups.
yeah, im down for whatever. listenin to ur track "life" right now. shits tight. send me somethin, ill do what i can.
B.O.L.O.
musicbybolo@gmail.com
on cloud of my own, beat by dynamite by DannyBOLO
on Be Me beat by Just Clownz Productions by DannyBOLO
No offense meant, i think you prolly the sickest MC i heard on here so far, well, in my opinion, your shits real, so just do you!!!
Nuff Said! Hope you aint take it the wrong way...
1
SpitShine
more info if u will,
is it the melody of the chorus? the lyrics? or both? i still dont know what song of fitty it was cuz to be real, i really dont listen to mainstream hip hop that often.
thanks again for the honesty
hit me for whatever musicbybolo@gmail.com
B.O.L.O.
on beatin down the block by DannyBOLO
N18th killed it, as usual, but what else is new? lol..
Way to kill a track homie...
SpitShined
on as 1 by DannyBOLO
Yo you should enter the next MC comp next month, check the hip-hop competitions in the competitions forum..
Holla
SpitShine
on If i could by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on OH YEAH by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on beatin down the block by DannyBOLO
Excellent composition and some good
lyrics as well
x-_Bri_-x
thanks
B.O.L.O.
on If i could by DannyBOLO
Your flow is hypnotizing
When you rap, its coming from the heart and what you are feleing at that moment.
The rap industry needs to listen to your tracks so they will know that hip hop is supposed to sound like
Excellent Track
x-_Bri_-x
B.O.L.O.
on beatin down the block by DannyBOLO
to B.O.L.O.
B.O.L.O.
on man up (Dusthill beat) by DannyBOLO
on sometimes by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on in stereo by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on man up (Dusthill beat) by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on freestyle N18th beat by DannyBOLO
B.O.L.O.
on oh no here we go by DannyBOLO
and its with N18TH's beats..
You two would be a force to
be reckoned with if you wanted
to do something professionally