DannyBOLO

Im still in awe of the talent. Great job old friend.

STILL LOVING THIS TRACK. i downloaded it forever ago and i keep it in rotation on the blackberry playlist. just a great piano beat that clears the mind. keep em comin

B.O.L.O.

i had to to listen to this joint again. actually gets better the second time around. i can see y ur proud of this right here. somethin about the strings and that drum beat that had me falling into it. no doubt, think u must of made a trade with the devil for this 1. perfect showcase.

blam, smack, pow, remember the first time i ever smoked bud, sht had me dazed staring at a wall thinkin bout life for an hour or so. this beat just reproduced that same phenom. smooth and beautiful. keep it movin

B.O.L.O.

had me waitin for that drum track to kick in, and it didnt disappoint at all. u got a knack for that there. keep it movin

B.O.L.O.

no clue what the lyrics mean but this is a bangin track. hard to keep someone listening to a track in a language they dont understand, but u achieved it. great mix. if u ever remix this joint in English and have room on it, hit me up.

B.O.L.O.

purty good track i do say there. good description. i like the feel of this 1

B.O.L.O.

THIS BEAT IS RAW. love the mix on this joint right here, good delivery. nice track.

B.O.L.O.

no problem, hip hop is usually pretty structured, 16 bar verses divided by 8 bar choruses. some people like to throw a 4 bar break in somewhere during the 2nd or 3rd verse. check out slickazzg on here, he uses that structure with alot of sucess. also check out the forums, alot of great advice on track production there

the basics are here, just got way too much going on with this beat, try starting with drum track or a melody, then drop another instrument in about 8 bars in, then another one 4 bars later, then pull one out and drop something else in. does that make sense? im not a producer but ive had success with that style. i tend to put way too many sounds on the track not realizing that i have to leave it someone open for lyrics. anywaqy hope that helps, i just saw u didnt have any feedback on it so thought id drop a few lines

B.O.L.O.

this is an inspirational and wonderful track. you real put together a piece of beauty with this 1. glad to have come across this. thanks for the upload

B.O.L.O.

ur gonna make it. lyrics are on point and u seem to have a good ear for a good track. keep bangin em out.

bolo

yeah, i dont know what it is about this 1, i like it, but something needs to be changed, cant figure out exactly what yet

i understood 3 words, but felt the whole track. this beat is awesome, one of my favs.

danny bolo

all around nice track. no doubt. got a rick ross vibe to ur delivery on this 1. came out good. get at me with an open verse sometime.

bolo

i like ya flow. nice punchlines and delivery. get at me if u got an open verse somewhere

B.O.L.O.

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BTW, MOST DEF FAV'D THIS 1

this is quite possibly ur greatest work homie. if u decide to put somethin down on this i'd love to spit a few bars with ya.

B.O.L.O.

i like the high hats or tamborine or whatever that is u got on here. good job

B.O.L.O.

im feelin the drum track and the whistle but i think the synth has is "clogged up" too much going on at once. it has potential though

B.O.L.O.

hell yeah, i like it. invest my dude, this has potential

B.O.L.O.

nice track right here. i see u my dude. hit me up sometime. whatever happened on that colab "if u want it back"?

B.O.L.O.

nice track, i like this joint here

B.O.L.O.