Wow, Steve this is exceptional. Looks like you have more than figured out Logic. The mix on this one is really nice. Seems like you have everything sitting right where it is supposed to be.
My compliments to Alexander, he just keeps getting better and better (and I didn't think that was possible). Loved your harp work by the way, outstanding!
This track is a 10, but all your work is flawless. The title to this one is great :)
Hope you and the family are well. Thanks for posting this one. Straight to favorites.
Hi Bear, thanks for dropping by and lending this one your ears. Alexander is now studying jazz sax & piano in Manchester and WOW his playing has just kept lifting higher & higher. I hope all is well at your end and it's great to have you back here brightening the place up.
Hey Slap!
Yes my friend you have layered in everything nicely.
I always blame my background and ears for hearing rock flavors in a track and this appeals to that and the genres you mentioned.
I have to give special credit to Alexander,I did love the video you posted of him and Jean Toussaint,great stuff for your son and anyone to be a part of and he proved himself A fine performer.
You have a great sense of the importance of a great stereo mix,I think it's been overlooked at times but it makes so,so much of a difference when you get those layers spread out and blended in the way you have here...I think it can make or break a production and you made it happen,though I'm not surprised,you are a true pro and I know you have a firm grasp on how the song should sound!
Well done Steve,
I hope to work with you again in this new year.My reviews say that sax and guitar work pretty good together :)
Hi Allen, thanks for dropping by and lending me your trained ears. I'm just about to post a complete remix of this track due to the comments left so far. I have digested what's been said ( and why ) and also changed the arrangement slightly too. I'm glad your enjoying my mixing attempts, I always feel as though mine are lacking a certain sparkle which I hear in other productions posted on the Loop.
I will return the favour and review some of your superior productions shortly.
My goodness, Slap, it angers me so that someone with such talent like yours is struggling with a 0. I totally understand about the struggle myself, believe me! You can download Izotope for free I think for two weeks.
Hang in there, brother! And keep on keepin at it. ;)
Listening to your songs after a long time! And here is another masterpiece by you. Great sax as usual...very lively. I really loved the energy of this track. Only thing I want to say is that it can be bit more longer and outro can be little bit more satisfying...but its just my opinion...overall great job done by both of you.
Hey Men....Whoa! totally riffed out,this is crazy cool....hell the bass line is wicked!...tres chic,it's about time some television network picked up one of your tunes for a cop serial or something..then you'd start getting the proper kudos your music deserves,and you'd be getting paid by the second as well! lol...ok as far as the sound,I know this is a rough mix..love the bass levels,not keen on the very high cymbal frequency,prefer the sheen taken off that a tad,and like one reviewer has already pointed out..adding something like a huge bass drum hit on the drum accents might add a bit more oomph...but these are purely arbitrary observations,I'm sure that when the song list for this album nears completion you'll have hit on the mastering template your looking for and the continuity will be seamless.....you guys do and always will....Rock! cheers Dave =7)
Hi Dave, thanks for the honesty! Mastering and getting the mix right are the things that some bypass for the sake of just getting the track finished and then fishing for complimentary reviews and praise. Those days are gone for me and have been for a good while, I'm wanting to get things right so the finished product can stand alongside the best and most expensive cds and not sound inferior. I will look into the hi end cymbal issue and the punchy bass drum comment. I will keep you posted!
Cheers, Slap...
What a tremendous sax solo, Slap. Love it! Also, what are those... trumpets? Nice.
One thing I've been tying on logic is to "mini-master" my main elements of a song. Ie, vox, guitar melody, maybe in your case the sax. I do that using either the Apple plug-ins or the the Ozone Izotpe plug-ins, which have great pre-sets for the price which is less than 300 for a big bundle.
Hi Evrim, I'm pleased you like the first draft of this song, the trumpets are in fact saxophones multi tracked to get that full sound. Thanks for the mastering software tips, I will pursue looking for a compatible one for my budget ( zero ) lol...
Cheers, Slap...
Finally some real instruments!! I gotta say I love this....seems more rock/jazzish than funk...but I guess thats kinda what funk is. I love the name and the fact that your son follows you...haha...in hot pursuit! I liked what I heard, Slap... but I'm going to have to listen again when I get home through some Headphones to really give ya a good critique. But I gotta say I don't think I'll have anything for you other than get into the lead sax a little sooner. But I have a short attention span and I think the "Sax line" sets up the melody and the jam part perfectly! Maybe a shared lead...still chasing you but in a call back thing like he's right on your heels... (cause ya know he really is right there with ya Slap!)... but together.
Hi DJS, thanks for lending this one your ears. I have already noted the constructive comments people have kindly left, and I'm on with the remixed version. I am going to leave the arrangement as it is though as this is an album track and this allows some tracks to be long and drawn out.
some nice work... reminded me abit of some of junior walkers stuff ya know?
with a more modern twist to it kinda junior meets 80's duran duran with a little bit of funk from curtis in there as well...
it's very hard for me as an electronic artist to critic something like this because I'm always looking for something electronic I suppose!!..
I enjoyed the listen but for me you do need some kinda extra element in there as well as the blistering sax solos...maybe some bass runs like bootsy colins did in superbad or even a short drum solo just to elevate it upwards kinda like the thing James browns band did in his 70's heyday...ya know what I mean? anyway I enjoyed the listen thanks for sharing brother... keep 'em coming
The track is great and the sound is incredible. I tried the volume loud as possible and with different EQ ... perfect sound, does not lose one iota of clarity and strength. I wish I could play that well ...
I love the atmosphere in the beginning birds chirping, the police siren; then those drums kick in and you're hard on the sax man. This is an amazingly great track, love the little hook and once again the sax is fantastic.
I'm glad that I checked this out, great production, kept me grooving throughout and everything, you're very talented on that sax man. I'll definitely have to check out you're album when it's finished.
Faved
Hi Peres, I appreciate your praise! I have already adjusted the EQ on the pads which was Bear's criticism and I'm currently trying to boost the drums up slightly to get more drive.
I will notify in the thread when these adjustments have been made.
Steve, it has been way too long. You and Alexander are in rare form on this one. I absolutely love it.
I will be honest the first minute of the song pales in comparison to the rest of the track. I'm not so sure you shouldn't bump the volume of the pads just a bit. I know you wanted a build, but the pads seem almost too far back in the mix. Also seems just a tad thin on the bottom end but that just might be my speakers.....
But that is just nit picking on my part my friend. This one is radio ready as it sets. Not sure I agree with my friend Glocke on this one being predictable, haha. Nothing you do is predictable my friend (he needs to check out your video of you playing sax in the bathroom, hehe).
I hope you and the family had a wonderful holidays. We had a great time here for our first Christmas in the desert. Big change from the Oregon Coast. I'm still hanging tough (I think my insurance company would prefer I didn't, hahaha).
Anyway Steve, my best to all and tell Alexander he did a great job as usual on this one. Here's to 2011 being one of your best years ever.
Hi Barry, great to hear from you mate! I'm so pleased you have had a wonderful holiday with your family. I suppose the pad intro is me in a way trying to create a peaceful scene before it's gets shattered by this crazy car chase which was going on in my head as the song developed. I will look into doing several different mixes before I reach the final decision. After listening back again I'm feeling the drums need a bit more level in places also. Your thoughts are always welcome as is your friendship...
Im sitting here listening to this with my laptop speakers and it still sounds good! And this sax! I love the sound of them and it is just perfect in this song. You really did a good job here. And it sounds like you put down a whole lot of work into this. Im thankful for the upload! Im gonna press play one more time just because.
Hi Stalju, thanks for dropping by and taking the time to give this one your ears. I have spent a bit of time on this ( as I do all of my songs ), but the song dictates what's needed. Sometimes a guitar only will do, so as I continue on this album they will be more spacious tunes also ( sometimes these take more time as the instruments are more exposed and open). I dig your work by the way!
Cheers, Slap...
oh yeah. :) sounds professional, also awesome sax solos! :)
So, but the problem it isn't a mind blowing song right now in my opinion.
the intro is nice, solid, but also a bit annoying. i waited for the bam in my face you know, the start when i say "boooah what the f******ck? greeeeat.". maybe a little drum solo would be good for catching attention. also when i listen with some different audio applications, it sounds better with a bass boost and not so shape bass, for getting the pressure.
then the sax part is cool, maybe a small fill from another instrument would be very interesting.
the break fits perfectly, maybe a bit sharper guitar (more presence) would give a more exactly tone picture. then cool solo, great mixed, this is perfect.
another hardcore solo, fine.
but it's like a story one after another. a contrast in the second part with a changed rhythm for example, would make it mindbolwing i think. rhight know it's nice but predictable. good for ambient stuff and so on, but not good for "what the f*****ck!!" :D
but in the end i'm just a nerd with a hobby, you're the pro, but i hope it helps a bit.
Hi Glocke, firstly thanks for taking the time to drop by and listen. Your review is just the kind of honesty and opinion I need to create an album full of great songs. This is the first draft of this song, and I have until April to get all of the tracks right before the album gets pressed. I will digest your comments and act accordingly.
Cheers, Slap...
The Slap man is back !!...and what a track you have here. I like the balance of sounds that support your sax playing without any sounds being out of place. A well crafted and catchy tune. I have yon cheapy laptop and have immense glitch-problems but after listening to this I am persuaded to go forth and obtain a macbook pro. Very smooth tune and sound.....
Hi Daniel, I'm glad you like the track! I still feel I have a few tweaks to do yet, mainly in compression ( something I am trying to get the benefits of and to come to understand ). I have a whole album in production at present and I intend to make it the best creation I have ever made. Tall job I know, but posting on Looperman helps me with the feedback I need to push forward with this masterpiece of modern funk.
Cheers, Slap...
Sorry Slap, haven't been by in a while but this track more than makes up for it!! Great funk happening my soul brother!! haha
No complaints from me, just sittng here tapping my toes and getting into the groove. Sweetness all around, Alexander was excellent, great track! More cowbell, where's the cowbell?!!
Hi Wayne, I'm pleased you like the track and your suggestion of a cowbell will be looked into at the next mix stage. The tracks I will be uploading from here on in and for a Saxobones album, so any positive comments / suggestions are more than welcome. I will pass on you message to Alexander. Cheers, Slap...
I love the trills and holds on the sax, very saxy (sorry for the terrible pun, but I couldn't help myself). The harmonica is wonderful, I wouldn't change a thing...
Hi Carmen, thanks for taking the time to listen to this one, and I'm pleased you think it's saxy lol... I will drop by and give your songs a listen at some point soon. The stupid schools firewall stops me from listening to looperman stuff during the day, which is a pain in the bottom. Anyway thanks!
Cheers, Slap... Good luck in front of Piers Morgan BTW, the guys a rude SOTB..
Wow, a masterpiece that brings me back to the theme songs of seventies crime shows like Baretta and Kojak... and I totally love it. Very, very nice. Wonderful tone and excellent musicianship.
I'll need to listen again.
/pmk
Hi Kikajon, I'm pleased you like the track, I love those funky cop themes also. Maybe that's where the inspiration is coming from, way back when I was a small boy watching The Streets of San Francisco, Kojak, Starsky & Hutch etc.. Now I look like bloody Kojak lol..
Cheers, Slap...
Hey slap another awesome production, your breath control is amazing on this one. I love the crispness and perfect pitch you get on your high notes.
I've had my eye on Logic for a while due to the limitations of Garageband and if it promises to do half of what it claims to I can only see the loop being graced with productions from out of this world from you. I concur with your comments on the mac as well, it does make for a more sane and pleasant experience.
Another epic production from you. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Spelljammer, I'm pleased you enjoyed this tune! I don't think it's quite finished yet in arrangement terms / mix, but it's almost there. I'm so pleased with Logic, the effect racks are unbelievable!!! You will love it .
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nice one.
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My compliments to Alexander, he just keeps getting better and better (and I didn't think that was possible). Loved your harp work by the way, outstanding!
This track is a 10, but all your work is flawless. The title to this one is great :)
Hope you and the family are well. Thanks for posting this one. Straight to favorites.
Bear
Cheers, Slap...
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Yes my friend you have layered in everything nicely.
I always blame my background and ears for hearing rock flavors in a track and this appeals to that and the genres you mentioned.
I have to give special credit to Alexander,I did love the video you posted of him and Jean Toussaint,great stuff for your son and anyone to be a part of and he proved himself A fine performer.
You have a great sense of the importance of a great stereo mix,I think it's been overlooked at times but it makes so,so much of a difference when you get those layers spread out and blended in the way you have here...I think it can make or break a production and you made it happen,though I'm not surprised,you are a true pro and I know you have a firm grasp on how the song should sound!
Well done Steve,
I hope to work with you again in this new year.My reviews say that sax and guitar work pretty good together :)
Allen
I will return the favour and review some of your superior productions shortly.
Cheers, Slap...
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Faved.
Haro
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Hang in there, brother! And keep on keepin at it. ;)
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Dan
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One thing I've been tying on logic is to "mini-master" my main elements of a song. Ie, vox, guitar melody, maybe in your case the sax. I do that using either the Apple plug-ins or the the Ozone Izotpe plug-ins, which have great pre-sets for the price which is less than 300 for a big bundle.
Hope that helps and hope you're doin' well.
Evrim
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with a more modern twist to it kinda junior meets 80's duran duran with a little bit of funk from curtis in there as well...
it's very hard for me as an electronic artist to critic something like this because I'm always looking for something electronic I suppose!!..
I enjoyed the listen but for me you do need some kinda extra element in there as well as the blistering sax solos...maybe some bass runs like bootsy colins did in superbad or even a short drum solo just to elevate it upwards kinda like the thing James browns band did in his 70's heyday...ya know what I mean? anyway I enjoyed the listen thanks for sharing brother... keep 'em coming
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I'm glad that I checked this out, great production, kept me grooving throughout and everything, you're very talented on that sax man. I'll definitely have to check out you're album when it's finished.
Faved
Peace,
Chris Mac
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I will notify in the thread when these adjustments have been made.
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I will be honest the first minute of the song pales in comparison to the rest of the track. I'm not so sure you shouldn't bump the volume of the pads just a bit. I know you wanted a build, but the pads seem almost too far back in the mix. Also seems just a tad thin on the bottom end but that just might be my speakers.....
But that is just nit picking on my part my friend. This one is radio ready as it sets. Not sure I agree with my friend Glocke on this one being predictable, haha. Nothing you do is predictable my friend (he needs to check out your video of you playing sax in the bathroom, hehe).
I hope you and the family had a wonderful holidays. We had a great time here for our first Christmas in the desert. Big change from the Oregon Coast. I'm still hanging tough (I think my insurance company would prefer I didn't, hahaha).
Anyway Steve, my best to all and tell Alexander he did a great job as usual on this one. Here's to 2011 being one of your best years ever.
Bear
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Stalju
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So, but the problem it isn't a mind blowing song right now in my opinion.
the intro is nice, solid, but also a bit annoying. i waited for the bam in my face you know, the start when i say "boooah what the f******ck? greeeeat.". maybe a little drum solo would be good for catching attention. also when i listen with some different audio applications, it sounds better with a bass boost and not so shape bass, for getting the pressure.
then the sax part is cool, maybe a small fill from another instrument would be very interesting.
the break fits perfectly, maybe a bit sharper guitar (more presence) would give a more exactly tone picture. then cool solo, great mixed, this is perfect.
another hardcore solo, fine.
but it's like a story one after another. a contrast in the second part with a changed rhythm for example, would make it mindbolwing i think. rhight know it's nice but predictable. good for ambient stuff and so on, but not good for "what the f*****ck!!" :D
but in the end i'm just a nerd with a hobby, you're the pro, but i hope it helps a bit.
greetings glocke
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No complaints from me, just sittng here tapping my toes and getting into the groove. Sweetness all around, Alexander was excellent, great track! More cowbell, where's the cowbell?!!
Wayne
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I love the trills and holds on the sax, very saxy (sorry for the terrible pun, but I couldn't help myself). The harmonica is wonderful, I wouldn't change a thing...
Step aside, Kenny G, here comes competition!!!
Cheers, Slap... Good luck in front of Piers Morgan BTW, the guys a rude SOTB..
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I'll need to listen again.
/pmk
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I've had my eye on Logic for a while due to the limitations of Garageband and if it promises to do half of what it claims to I can only see the loop being graced with productions from out of this world from you. I concur with your comments on the mac as well, it does make for a more sane and pleasant experience.
Another epic production from you. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Slap...