Thanx 4 lending your ear, the track was produced by LttleBrams....I added my skillz of riding the beat....my only other offer was a slight touch of mastering which only brightened his mix....LilB deserves the credit 4 that one..
I like your lyrics and i like the track but the clarity of the mic is a little overbearing. Have you tried putting a screen up in front of it when you sing? It kills off all those dynamics that you don't want such as the proximity effect (when you say p's & s's)
You clearly have talent and it's a shame to have unwanted mic effects spoiling the track.
Anyway, aside from that i enjoyed the track so thumbs up.
FR
Free, man 4 give me been lost in an ocean un-creativity...
during that peroi I could only sing into my laptop....yeah a late bloomer to making digital music, but not songwriting!
Glad 2 note have own my 1st mi 4 6 months now.....but, i feel i.e in even a deeper hole try'n to learn it's dynamics..
Thank's for taking time out to listen to my track...never was a singer never took lessons...but how else can a songwriter get his songs out....to hear a raw vocal of mine check out my other tracks...before I got a mike....
Well it wasn't an overnite feat, I laid a couple of eggs along the way..LOL (ok a lot of eggs, but this site is about growth and learning) I'm glad to be able to reach out to you in a positive manner....thanx 4 your time and your comments...peace
Smooth grooves coming at ya from tunedef. I've listened to a few of your tracks now and you sure know how to nail the R&B genre. That piano lick is excellent and you've done wonders with the vocal work. It makes me wish my singing didn't sound like sean ryder from the happy mondays (at best)
Really enjoyed this piece.
FR
Free the truth of the matter is people like yourself and others on this site have helped guide me in directions I didn't know of, or didn't consider....knowledge has no value unless it's shared! Keep do'n yo thang and together we'll keep the Looper flag fly'n high!
peace....and thank you 4 your time listening...
This is soo smooth. Damn. I was gonna upload my version but now I'm feeling intimidated. Great stuff on the vocals man, trust me I know it's not easy to get them as clear as that.
Peace
Glad you tuned in Zee, it's always good to know someone could be moved by something I've penned....appreciate the time given and the positive response...
What's up O51, The vocals r me...but it really took and interaction I had with Soundhound that forced to focus on vocals...he deserves the credit! But the track itself required a good vocal...Thanx 4 listening!
It's frustrating learning mike dynamics, while attempting to learn recording vocals and the necessary programs associated with it....but when you find the settings that fit your tone, it's so gratifying....in no way do I mean I've reached the mountain top, just all those whom have given direction, and not advice.....I've listened...and retaining!
To you mister I can say what I want..... I am learning the dynamics of recording, and although that track really wasn't professional, there's a reason....I'm not a professional....so far as not being able to hold a note,
Listen to my track Urluvgetsmehi...that's without a true mic, just singing into an old compaq onboard mic, so it's not that i can't...the question is what makes you think I owe you that? Are you one of those individuals whom cliams other peoples property as your own?
Regardless of the situation you are neither a highlight or downfall to my
Day...vut amusing none the less.....
I think that more needs to be done with the recording and mixing of the vocals. I'm not an expert on recordings, but I would try looking up some techniques on reducing the effects that a room has on a recording because that seems an issue in my opinion. Also, it is very difficult to make out what you are saying at times. With more work on the recording it will definitely be a better track. Good luck!
Yes . someone who knows...finally... I'm new to recording, just got my first mic months ago...although I'm not try'n to be a singer I do need to get my work across as best I can...just a day or two ago I found the room I was recording in was receiving too much reverberation from bouncing off the walls....yeah I know, no shielding, no pop filter.....but I never said I was some superstar, I'm here to gain the knowledge i,'m interested in not what others think I should have....it's silly to give blind recommendations without learning circumstances. Sometimes its simple!
Can't nobody be that out of tune, without wanting to be.... :-)
A suggestion if I maybe so bold, it is clear that you know talking sounds
way better then your singing...So why not just tell your stories by talking
because at times, I'm sure it is even painful for you to hear yourself sing... :-)
Track smokes Man Musically and I truly see your intent...Lyrics are strong..
Songwriters need not be singers just able to get the mood and feel across, but since you've sold over a billion copies, pay 4 me a coach!!! Yeah just what I thought A-hole...not time don't stop keep it moving slick!
TuneDef when you get a chance, please listen to a new song i just upload. Title:" I wonder what it would have been like" Let me know your thoughts on it.
Man I appreciate you stopping to listen in on my ramblings and such...it's always a joy to discuss music with like minded people that's way I love this site...I am very new to capturing and processing audio, but I'm doing my best to learn...
What's up man. You know, in my life venture I have been in and out of a lot of studios. I have met many great musicians, famous and not so famous.
One good thing that I have learned from them, for example. You have 2 different people come in with their demos. One is professionally done and the other one is not. Which one do you choose?
I will choose the one that has the most feeling and meaning. I wouldn't care about the quality. That can come later.
This track you have here has a lot of potential. I love the melody and message. In time your mixing skills will get better. If you ever need some help don't be afraid to shoot me a private message.
Thanxx 4 taking the time 2 listen 2 my offerings, none of the beats I've covered are mine, I do create music also....I'm try'n to find my sound in the studio....here on the loop I tend 2 limit myself, simply because I've lost a lot. A few have offered true insight on capturing and rendering a clean vocal...but the majority just distance themselves instead of helping other, which is there porogative...hopefully my next offering will show more growth.......
RealP. thanks 4 the time given to this creation, your input is welcomed and valued. I'm try'n to get to a place on the engineer side where I can confidently help others got a good ways to go, but by getting feedback on my own miscues can reinforce my knowledge base to help others!
Growing is what this site is about...to show growth for me is a result of all those whom have responded to my attempts of making music, and or my writing style,...To my Loop Fam thank you all.....O51 thanx 4 tha listen and your time....it's the time which is even more precious.....so I truly appreciate the effort of all those who listen, and or comment, 4 no comment is wasted in my effort 2 advance my knowledge of music!
This track has basicaly quite some potential... but if I'm completely honest I think that those double vocals do not work well...I don't know why, but my ears tell me so..:)
But as a musical concept and idea is not bad by any means..on the contrary...it's pretty interesting and inventive...
Took to different elements, not meant to be, and made them be...then added a third element me! Learning is an experimental task, this tracks throws the listener off a little but keeps them in the groove at the same time...which is basically my version of a sweet & sour candy! LOL
Much respect, wasn't mad, just stabs taken when one can't see whose is on the other side leads to miscalculations. I love this site and the people on it, simply because we offer and learn from one another, and yes we take jabs at each other and it's nothing because we still have the music... So please help me with things I don't know, and I will offer you answers to things I do know.... peace and much success!
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You clearly have talent and it's a shame to have unwanted mic effects spoiling the track.
Anyway, aside from that i enjoyed the track so thumbs up.
FR
during that peroi I could only sing into my laptop....yeah a late bloomer to making digital music, but not songwriting!
Glad 2 note have own my 1st mi 4 6 months now.....but, i feel i.e in even a deeper hole try'n to learn it's dynamics..
TD
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Littlebrams
Peace
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Really enjoyed this piece.
FR
peace....and thank you 4 your time listening...
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Peace
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Still seeking knowledge!
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Compliments_____Orlando
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Keep up the very good work!
-RealProblemShuckers
Thanx LooperFam!
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Forgive me for being honest, I try my best not to lie for trivial matters
so I guess, I won't be commenting on any of your Music any more...
Have a Nice Day...
Peace.....TG.
Listen to my track Urluvgetsmehi...that's without a true mic, just singing into an old compaq onboard mic, so it's not that i can't...the question is what makes you think I owe you that? Are you one of those individuals whom cliams other peoples property as your own?
Regardless of the situation you are neither a highlight or downfall to my
Day...vut amusing none the less.....
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Thanx 4 tha listen, your feedback is justified!
Tune D
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A suggestion if I maybe so bold, it is clear that you know talking sounds
way better then your singing...So why not just tell your stories by talking
because at times, I'm sure it is even painful for you to hear yourself sing... :-)
Track smokes Man Musically and I truly see your intent...Lyrics are strong..
Peace....TG.
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really well crafted and very well sung!
Talented individual....
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One good thing that I have learned from them, for example. You have 2 different people come in with their demos. One is professionally done and the other one is not. Which one do you choose?
I will choose the one that has the most feeling and meaning. I wouldn't care about the quality. That can come later.
This track you have here has a lot of potential. I love the melody and message. In time your mixing skills will get better. If you ever need some help don't be afraid to shoot me a private message.
Peace.
Steve aka Choppy.
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Keep up the good work!
- RealProblemShuckers
Learning 4 a higher goal!
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Cheers___Orlando
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But as a musical concept and idea is not bad by any means..on the contrary...it's pretty interesting and inventive...
All the best____Orlando
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Thanx 4 tha Listen
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