Growing is what this site is about...to show growth for me is a result of all those whom have responded to my attempts of making music, and or my writing style,...To my Loop Fam thank you all.....O51 thanx 4 tha listen and your time....it's the time which is even more precious.....so I truly appreciate the effort of all those who listen, and or comment, 4 no comment is wasted in my effort 2 advance my knowledge of music!
This track has basicaly quite some potential... but if I'm completely honest I think that those double vocals do not work well...I don't know why, but my ears tell me so..:)
But as a musical concept and idea is not bad by any means..on the contrary...it's pretty interesting and inventive...
Took to different elements, not meant to be, and made them be...then added a third element me! Learning is an experimental task, this tracks throws the listener off a little but keeps them in the groove at the same time...which is basically my version of a sweet & sour candy! LOL
That's an emotional voice you have, sounds attractive.
I really like the piano and acoustic guitar that make the song.
I just read Bathers comment, I do really like your voice in this comment, sure it may not be in tune at some bits, but that's what makes the track touchy :)
First Thanks 4 listening, the vocal aspect is correct, I am not seeking 2 be a vocalist, I only need to be able to get the mood and feel across...I am here to learn the side of music I don't have production....the vocal aspect I could care less about. I understand by posting I open myself up to those responses, but they offer me no growth or enlightenment. Many have guided me in good directions, so I stroll through the shit to get through to the other side! But it's all good...I'm a Looper Fan!
Much respect, wasn't mad, just stabs taken when one can't see whose is on the other side leads to miscalculations. I love this site and the people on it, simply because we offer and learn from one another, and yes we take jabs at each other and it's nothing because we still have the music... So please help me with things I don't know, and I will offer you answers to things I do know.... peace and much success!
You are right about music does not have rules and yet it does. It is a paradox. You build up the energy, and I was looking for the release of energy with a great chorus that did not come, so it made me feel extremely frustrated instead.
Be careful not to use the "no rules" as an excuse of not deliver a great chorus, so you could make this a great hit song.
The road to hell is paved with excuses of not deliver a good chorus!
First of all the road to hell is littered with crooks and thieves, such as this nation is built. Assume not whom are what is opposite these keys, for you know not my successes or failures, only the tidbits I offer here. I never intended a sparring match, only to enlighten you...but yet, fear not never will my lyrical ability or my tact for song creation be challenged by anyone on this site or this lifetime. The biggest lies in life are always placed right in front of your face. I am here to learn things I don't know, not things I have mastered! EQ, Mastering, Keys to vocal rendering, etc etc
I like this one. i started to turn up the volume and really get into it, but I also got frustrated. It was like having sex with a beautiful woman and then right, where I would get an orgasm nothing happened. I thought this song would explode into a totally amazing chores/hook around 1:20. I was fired up and ready to go. But where is the super amazing chores/hook??
The singing needs to be worked on too, then this could be a hit song for sure!
Fortunately enough I realize music has no structure, and that you'll been spoon fed the commercial version of the process..
but please be advised I excel in many genre of lyrical penmanship..... I appreciate you listening and commenting, this site is about growth and not locking ones-self in a box!
August Rush: The first rule of music; Is there's no rules to music!
nice one! the only thing is that the vocal is too loud and the music sounds like a radio in a garage and the mechanic sings, but maybe is just me, but at the end this is a great song! really! :)
Cheers!
Missed your voice outchea. I see you're not relxaing and you're working hard that's good. I really love the feeling you involved on this track. kinda a lil bit different from your habbituel rolling. good progression.
I've always preferred this type of music..with this feeling of live singing, this music of the true feeling, emotions that can be felt...in situations like this I feel ashamed I do the musical projects I'm doing...but...we aren't all blessed with musical talent...but I know for sure I love music. Your song...it's simply beautiful. Hope everything will end up fine for you.
The true point of music is the shared experience, letting others know that they are not alone in the situations they face and often fall prey to. Life it's self is a shared experience, so to lighten or brighten ones day is the greatest of gifts!
Thanx 4 tha listen and Fav...
It's nothing wrong with being emotional, particulary not in music. Emotions can be translated into a great music, exactly as this song of yours proves!:)
Hey TD had stop by and see what you were doing over here. I was digging this one from the jump. Something tells me you have a powerful voice in the mid-range area but you're holding back. Not sure what mic u're using to record with but it doesn't sound like it's capturing your high freq's unless u rolled off most of it above 5khz during mixing. The Music track had nice highs but your voice was lacking the presence it deserves. I love workn w/vocals so contact me if u wanna know more. stylesmusic1@yahoo.com
Styles, man I appreciate the offer and I promise I will follow up on it, but this particular track is just me singing into my laptop, no external mic, and it seems to have captured my voice better than all the other tracks I have posted.
I think you still can sing better .
Or maybe it needs a better mix
I've heard some of your tracks and know you can do better.
The Instrumental is very nice and sounds great
Yeah, u r rite in that sense the vocals could be improved, but all my tracks are Freestyles, no written Lyrics, no rehearsals, I start the track grab the headphones and what comes out, comes out.....and that's what you get! It's not my intention to offer perfection are even attempt perfection on a site that's geared to gain knowledge, not seek sales...I do not aspire to be a professional vocalist, or to perform in public...my expertise is lyrically gifted! Being able to do what rappers do, in verse form, I do for the whole song!
:)
oooommm..i think you still can sing better .
or maybe it needs a better mix !
i can't reallize some words in it -maybe cause
i'm not american-
donknow but the same i heared is nice too .
i especially enjoyed your composed vocal melody more
than everythings.
:)
You're part right...certain parts of the country have different accents which some find difficult to grasp... but I will concentrate on accenting more. Thank you for comments and words of wisdom...
MAN,this is just awesome.The Guitar here is soooo addictive.You really uplifted the track and created a perfect atmosphere.Vibe is chilled,superb and love the effects on the track.Like the singing, real smooth.
You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
Ha HA...I love that anaology, and of course you're right...I'm not afraid of the learning process....thanx 4 tha listen...appreciate your time and thoughts!
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But as a musical concept and idea is not bad by any means..on the contrary...it's pretty interesting and inventive...
All the best____Orlando
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I really like the piano and acoustic guitar that make the song.
I just read Bathers comment, I do really like your voice in this comment, sure it may not be in tune at some bits, but that's what makes the track touchy :)
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Looper Fam
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Be careful not to use the "no rules" as an excuse of not deliver a great chorus, so you could make this a great hit song.
The road to hell is paved with excuses of not deliver a good chorus!
Classical music has structure too and nature: http://www.demilked.com/amazing-nature-patterns/
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The singing needs to be worked on too, then this could be a hit song for sure!
but please be advised I excel in many genre of lyrical penmanship..... I appreciate you listening and commenting, this site is about growth and not locking ones-self in a box!
August Rush: The first rule of music; Is there's no rules to music!
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Cheers!
Thanx!
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Finally someone gets it!
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Holla!
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Thanx 4 tha listen and Fav...
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Compliments____Orlando
Try'n 2 get it together!
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I think you still can sing better .
Or maybe it needs a better mix
I've heard some of your tracks and know you can do better.
The Instrumental is very nice and sounds great
All the best
Bathers
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oooommm..i think you still can sing better .
or maybe it needs a better mix !
i can't reallize some words in it -maybe cause
i'm not american-
donknow but the same i heared is nice too .
i especially enjoyed your composed vocal melody more
than everythings.
:)
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You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
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Love & Light,
Mykael
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