You are right about music does not have rules and yet it does. It is a paradox. You build up the energy, and I was looking for the release of energy with a great chorus that did not come, so it made me feel extremely frustrated instead.
Be careful not to use the "no rules" as an excuse of not deliver a great chorus, so you could make this a great hit song.
The road to hell is paved with excuses of not deliver a good chorus!
First of all the road to hell is littered with crooks and thieves, such as this nation is built. Assume not whom are what is opposite these keys, for you know not my successes or failures, only the tidbits I offer here. I never intended a sparring match, only to enlighten you...but yet, fear not never will my lyrical ability or my tact for song creation be challenged by anyone on this site or this lifetime. The biggest lies in life are always placed right in front of your face. I am here to learn things I don't know, not things I have mastered! EQ, Mastering, Keys to vocal rendering, etc etc
nice one! the only thing is that the vocal is too loud and the music sounds like a radio in a garage and the mechanic sings, but maybe is just me, but at the end this is a great song! really! :)
Cheers!
Missed your voice outchea. I see you're not relxaing and you're working hard that's good. I really love the feeling you involved on this track. kinda a lil bit different from your habbituel rolling. good progression.
I've always preferred this type of music..with this feeling of live singing, this music of the true feeling, emotions that can be felt...in situations like this I feel ashamed I do the musical projects I'm doing...but...we aren't all blessed with musical talent...but I know for sure I love music. Your song...it's simply beautiful. Hope everything will end up fine for you.
The true point of music is the shared experience, letting others know that they are not alone in the situations they face and often fall prey to. Life it's self is a shared experience, so to lighten or brighten ones day is the greatest of gifts!
Thanx 4 tha listen and Fav...
It's nothing wrong with being emotional, particulary not in music. Emotions can be translated into a great music, exactly as this song of yours proves!:)
I think you still can sing better .
Or maybe it needs a better mix
I've heard some of your tracks and know you can do better.
The Instrumental is very nice and sounds great
Yeah, u r rite in that sense the vocals could be improved, but all my tracks are Freestyles, no written Lyrics, no rehearsals, I start the track grab the headphones and what comes out, comes out.....and that's what you get! It's not my intention to offer perfection are even attempt perfection on a site that's geared to gain knowledge, not seek sales...I do not aspire to be a professional vocalist, or to perform in public...my expertise is lyrically gifted! Being able to do what rappers do, in verse form, I do for the whole song!
:)
oooommm..i think you still can sing better .
or maybe it needs a better mix !
i can't reallize some words in it -maybe cause
i'm not american-
donknow but the same i heared is nice too .
i especially enjoyed your composed vocal melody more
than everythings.
:)
You're part right...certain parts of the country have different accents which some find difficult to grasp... but I will concentrate on accenting more. Thank you for comments and words of wisdom...
MAN,this is just awesome.The Guitar here is soooo addictive.You really uplifted the track and created a perfect atmosphere.Vibe is chilled,superb and love the effects on the track.Like the singing, real smooth.
You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
Ha HA...I love that anaology, and of course you're right...I'm not afraid of the learning process....thanx 4 tha listen...appreciate your time and thoughts!
Awesome Tune....not necessary to repeat what other's have said about the vocals. I can't wait, though, to hear those lyrics. This tune sounds like something straight up Macy Gray's lane. You are definitely a singer, from the little I could hear near the end. Well done so far!
This is lovely. Nice work. However, couldn't hear words clearly at some point in the track. If you applied some reverb in the vocals track you may need to lower it a lil' bit. Otherwise its really cool to listen to this song. Big up.
You're rite about the reverb...attempting 2 learn mixing, and mike dynamics. Your input is appreciated and thanx 4 tuning in...I only hope 2 get better!
first my ilolater respects to tallented DJ RYMZ for such a nice composition & elegantly arrangemenT , & then a great respect to your perceptional collab & lyriX .
& beside them all , I respectfully think U as singer are really good enough to sing with more aplomb & be sure about yourself that are the right person for best ( not a good one just )execution of yourself's nice lyrix & vocal melody composed . in music we say '' microphone doesn't lie '' , &
if U trust ( or also if U feel doubt about) yourself (more & still more than this ) in singing & expression of the words , listener will be influenced by your trust or doubT as a reflexive reaction in their mind .
many thnx or sharing your symmetric comprehension with colleague DJ RYMZ as this collab with us .best wishes.___Behnam
DeciBel, 1st thanx 4 the response, which I truly appreciate. 2nd everything u mentioned was on point, it's true the portrayal of the lyrics needs to be expressed with the utmost clarity. 3rd I need to acquaint myself with the dynamics of my mic and recording surroundings to afford the listener the best experience I can offer. I truly plan to aim honestly for those goals, which I believe are achievable by me....
Bathers, thanx 4 your time, I appreciate the fact that u enjoyed what I was able to offer, but it wasn't possible without the great track produced by DJRYMZ....hopefully I'll
get another chance to jump on another DJRYMZ hot mix!
Very different and unique track!
I especially love the instrumentals that are very enchanting and create a very special mood for the song. :) I liked it
DJRYMZ created a great track that I just felt, although, he he thought my style was unorthodox, he still liked what I done with his track. I offer my gratitude 4 u stopping 4 a listen.
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Be careful not to use the "no rules" as an excuse of not deliver a great chorus, so you could make this a great hit song.
The road to hell is paved with excuses of not deliver a good chorus!
Classical music has structure too and nature: http://www.demilked.com/amazing-nature-patterns/
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Cheers!
Thanx!
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Finally someone gets it!
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Thanx 4 tha listen and Fav...
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Try'n 2 get it together!
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I think you still can sing better .
Or maybe it needs a better mix
I've heard some of your tracks and know you can do better.
The Instrumental is very nice and sounds great
All the best
Bathers
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oooommm..i think you still can sing better .
or maybe it needs a better mix !
i can't reallize some words in it -maybe cause
i'm not american-
donknow but the same i heared is nice too .
i especially enjoyed your composed vocal melody more
than everythings.
:)
Tune D
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You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
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Love & Light,
Mykael
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Love & Light,
Mykael
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& beside them all , I respectfully think U as singer are really good enough to sing with more aplomb & be sure about yourself that are the right person for best ( not a good one just )execution of yourself's nice lyrix & vocal melody composed . in music we say '' microphone doesn't lie '' , &
if U trust ( or also if U feel doubt about) yourself (more & still more than this ) in singing & expression of the words , listener will be influenced by your trust or doubT as a reflexive reaction in their mind .
many thnx or sharing your symmetric comprehension with colleague DJ RYMZ as this collab with us .best wishes.___Behnam
Thanx a million
Tune D
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The vocals and the arrangment are very well matched aufeinender.
Listening to the tracks was pleasure :-)
Greetings Bathers
get another chance to jump on another DJRYMZ hot mix!
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I especially love the instrumentals that are very enchanting and create a very special mood for the song. :) I liked it
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