Blues?? That certainly is the wrong classification for this track. I'm hearing more like R&B, and your vocal style on this tune kinda reminds me of a Keith Sweat-ish sort of feel.
Interesting track musically,
Man thanx, for the comment it is very much welcomed...
I don't really write to specific classifications, except for when writing Country music, other than that whatever comes out comes out...I let others define it!
All my songs are original lyrics, except "I Need You Girl", which is a Loop-fam mashup of several submissions including myself! I appreciate your time given to listen to my offering!
Thanx 4 stopping...but I am not a singer, I am a songwriter.
If you had taken just a minute to read other comments, you would've learned why it was posted....the sentiment! To judge one fairly it must be in there element...and in my element of writing....the song relays the emotion, and the growth of the character in understanding how naive he has been toward his partner! In keeping with the true purpose of the song's intent! I still appreciate you giving me your time and sharing!
I never got a chance to finish this because of a catastrophic hard drive failure..lost beats, songs, sounds, and apps! I found this on a old flash drive...so I posted it! I like what it says to the Ladies about a Special Day that's just around the corneronna search for that track and finish it, if it's still posted!
I appreciate you listening and posting!
Nice, solid beat and interesting vocals. I dig the ideas you put together. Somehow gotta get the vocals to fit in the slot more comfortable. The vocal dubbing space sounds like it would be smoother a lil closer together, less distance. Just thoughts, very cool concept and thanks for sharing. Keep at it! peace.
I agree...no longer have the laptop lost everything, decided to share where I was headed...in closer the field gap between vocals...what would you suggest?
Okk Agree with other comments. very good song you need to back down the gain on the vocals and eliminate or minimize the reverb if you can. When I first started recording I was so wary of my voice I used to try to hide it with verb and chorus but I have learned there are other ways to make you sound awesome on this song. If this is mixed and mastered properly you would have a very nice song..
Cru
Totally agreed gaining knowledge takes time and effort, plus the experience of hands on...first hand knowledge trumps all....there's no magic button you press and suddenly it's there...I have less than a
Year of recording...and have owned my first mic less than that. I appreciate and need feedback, but it offers me nothing if it's not gear to my learning curve...
Mate love this one, the feelings and emotions shine through track, great vocals too, thinking of the tracks I have reviewed over time, this would be my fav so far, love the soft feel to the instrumental, allowing the vocals to carry the feelings and the track...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Didn't realize I was having problems with my sound card when I recorded this track...cleared up most of the problems, but the clicks and pops are still populating my tracks...any ideas?
Still can tighten up the vocals, but never sung before this site! So I'm truly a work in progress, all the while try'n to learn the necessary apps and VST's! It's never work when it's something you love!
Thanx 4 listening....appreciate your time!
peace
I like the vocal sound. I think with a little creative editing and nudging the vocal tracks could be really unique. I don't really need to know the lyric precisely bc the vocals are acting as a synth in the mix to my ears. The backing track is a little weak imo bc there is no blatant musical hook to tie vocals with and very little punch in the track mix... But it's all pretty interesting musically. I think you should keep editing. "final edit" -lol, as if we know when to quit. :)
Slimm, I ran across the pella and couldn't think of anything to do with it...slowing it down gave me the odd feeling of going against the grain....and it is what it is...LOL The backing was simply I felt it was a lil too thin...your suggestions are well grounded Thanks 4 stopping and taking a listen...sharing your options 4 my continued growth!
Beautiful instrumental, can see why you wanted to add vocals to it, on the vocals stunning man, cant remember reviewing a track for you, then I am an old fart, so maybe I have, listening to you sing has a very soothing feel, very impressive for one take, will be back to check out more in the near future that's for sure...Fav'd...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...
Most of the time, there's no free moments to truly give my all, so one adapts to his or her situations, mine afforded me the ability to re-act to a tracks flow after a listen or two... Hopefully I can produce something else that warrants another stop.....
Thank you for listening....
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
Very likeable track mate.
Brilliant well done
Jamid
To invoke thought is truly what each song should inspire to do!
TD
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
Interesting track musically,
All The Best
D
I don't really write to specific classifications, except for when writing Country music, other than that whatever comes out comes out...I let others define it!
TD
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
peace
TD
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
TD
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
I love this!!!
Very nicely put together.
Who wrote the lyrics?
The voice has endless possibilities.
Well impressed.
TD
on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
Good Work TuneDef.
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on FREE WILL - I Cry - Blues-Pop mix by TuneDef
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thanx so much!
TD
on Upstairs by TuneDef
If you had taken just a minute to read other comments, you would've learned why it was posted....the sentiment! To judge one fairly it must be in there element...and in my element of writing....the song relays the emotion, and the growth of the character in understanding how naive he has been toward his partner! In keeping with the true purpose of the song's intent! I still appreciate you giving me your time and sharing!
on Upstairs by TuneDef
TD
on Upstairs by TuneDef
Very Nice
TD
on Upstairs by TuneDef
I appreciate you listening and posting!
TD
on Upstairs by TuneDef
on Upstairs by TuneDef
TD
on From My Heart -RnB Freestyle by TuneDef
Cru
Year of recording...and have owned my first mic less than that. I appreciate and need feedback, but it offers me nothing if it's not gear to my learning curve...
on From My Heart -RnB Freestyle by TuneDef
Mate love this one, the feelings and emotions shine through track, great vocals too, thinking of the tracks I have reviewed over time, this would be my fav so far, love the soft feel to the instrumental, allowing the vocals to carry the feelings and the track...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Thank you so very much!
TuneDef
on Tenderly by LilBrams Lyrics and Vocals TuneDef by TuneDef
Thanks TuneDef !
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Love & Light,
Mykael
Thanx 4 listening....appreciate your time!
peace
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on Think About It feat LilBrams - Last Call by TuneDef
Beautiful instrumental, can see why you wanted to add vocals to it, on the vocals stunning man, cant remember reviewing a track for you, then I am an old fart, so maybe I have, listening to you sing has a very soothing feel, very impressive for one take, will be back to check out more in the near future that's for sure...Fav'd...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...
Thank you for listening....
Tune D
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