WongKiShoo

Awesome track, love the break down and build up around 1:30, haven't heard the original but this still sounds pro

I am liking the nice clean sound you have achieved on this, its more natural than my version. I think my only criticism would be that the last section feels like it all leans a little on the right side. It is probably a personal thing of mine though coz you have both the picked electric guitar and the strummed acoustic panned out there, those are two instruments I thought to be fairly prominent.

Nice work, clean and to the point.

Simon

Somehow this one is so "NEW WAWEISH" but everything is really nice. I didn`t know neither the original, but this should be the original! Cheers! :)

Really nice track!
Franco

I`m not familiar with the original...but this is just an excellent mix...can`t help notice the thought that went into the composition..with the really minimal sections...then the big beat parts (really like the drum kit) that carry a lot of subtle power....I`m glad I caught up with your version George...its REALLY well done in every regard so obviously even if I thought I knew anything about house music mixing I couldn`t dream up any way to improve this one....standing ovation from this old guitar guy......Ed

Yes I can see the progression. It's even better now ;) Nice job here!

Yes I can see the progression. It's even better now ;) Nice job here!

This is very relaxing but amazing. Nice chords and vocals with moving beat in backgroung... Good luck with finishing this project!

Sorry George but I am not familiar with the original as I don't listen to much electronic/dance music(except on the loop) so I can't give you any comparisons to the original. Maybe that's a good thing as I can give you more objective comments.

I see it's a wip but is this the actual length of the song? I thought house tracks were usually much longer? I do actually love songs at around 2:30, I feel you can pack in the right amount of goodness in that time. I gave this a bunch of listens and must say the mix is excellent on my headphones. Like the delay on the main rhythm synth, fills the space and doesn't overwhelm the singing. The vocal track is nicely mixed and you applied some great effects on them.

The song has a cool vibe, great beat, driving simple bass, I like that too. I agree, it IS sounding pretty damn awesome so far!!

Wayne

collab i mean :)

id love to collar with vocals :)

just saw this in your thread where you're looking for a singer and thought i'd check it out.
for what it's worth i think it sounds outstanding, it's full and rich yet light, powerful yet delicate, massive yet agile, it flows and pulls you along nicely to the pumping beat.
took me on a ride, nicely done.
and last but not least good luck and all the best in finding the right voice for this track!

Great track, very pop-dance sort of vibe going. But also chill . I could hear some nice smooth vocals over it in my head.

Very nice man, shows that if you really are looking for good music looperman is the place to be, because you and other artists around here really make this place special :D

Peace, XyIlent

Quality track, I hope you find the vocalist you need. I'm gonna put a link to a vocalist that I have used on releases and many others as well, she is always open to offers and very professional. Hope it helps.

https://soundcloud.com/gizella

Commercial or not, I like the sound. To be honest I would love to try my hand at something like this and see what I can do if anything but I don't have the proper set up to do this justice ha, but I did want to say I really like it though, a good vocal track will definitely make this amazing. Best wishes with it and more luck to you!
-Charlene

Hey hey..

wouldnt worry to much about the melody georgie my friend the huuuuge club track 'Tolouse' from a couple of years ago a chris brown track both lifted a straight sample/melody from a vengeance pack and had no problems so I wouldbt worry to much about it sweety ;)

Thanks for all the comments about the track guys n girls, was really chuffed with how we ended up getting it sounding. Still needs a bit or adjusting in the mid range its a little empty but untill we get a singer and see what frequencies we have left to play with its not really worth changing it.

Excuse me while I do my little happy dance at this! Haha. I'm so excited and glad I found about this site and the talent on it! I WOULD LOVE TO COLLABORATE! Check out my song. It's available on iTunes right now and its on my profile "Jonestown Massacre" most of the loops in the beat are made from loops on here! I wrote and produced it. If you like my stuff as much as I like yours we could make magic! LOL let me know.

You got something good going here. Very clubby and extremely danceable. Love the guitars.

You might want to throw a lead female backed by a "don't let her get away" male voice. Just a thought. Good luck.

- Memphis

Yeah you are right. I believe you need a female, soulsister. You need a real powerfull voice and :) for sure some reverb over it .... in my mind i already can hear her sing. .... If i would sing on this cool track :) then it´s the end of this song in this style :)

Wish you luck
joe

Your stuff is always a cut above the rest so i know i'm going to like it before it even gets going. Smooth as silk mix with an easy to listen to summer time vibe. I love the synth work and dig the choice of EFX. Nice breaks and good arrangment.
I hope you manage to find yourself a vocalist because this track is just waiting for it.
FR

Well, I actually like commercial stuff, at least some of it anyway. And I definitely liked this one. You really know how to make this kind of track sound right. And, the production sounds so good. I'd love to be able to make a track like this one.

A really nice production. Great sound. Be sure to let us know here if this does get released commercially after you find your vocalist. I don't monitor the charts but it would be really cool to see something from a Looperman member on Beatport, or wherever.

This is amazing! The instruments chosen, the kicks, percussion, and everything else tie in together so well. The bass is very nice. The guitar licks in the various spots are very gentle which complements the track oh-so-well.

My favorite spot is probably 2:22. Around here, you had just decrescendo the volume gradually, then increased it, having that smooth come-back sound. The keys (I believe is what I'm hearing) is powerful and great. The guitar plucks also come in quietly but comes out gradually.

Such a great track! I wish you good luck on finding a vocalist!

~Ookami

I like it. I'm not into the commercial stuff so much so can't really comment on what it needs but I agree with the others that said some female vocals would round it out a bit. Great production too.