Your spoken words echo through ones mind and a reflection can be seen. You make good points in your poetry and got to say job done nicely. The music is also a good feature to this idea. Helps allow the travel to be felt while not being over powered. I discovered this by clicking the Random button and glad I followed through. A message universal and personal. Thank you for this share. Keep writing.
Lol I feel in love with this one when I hear it from Alpha2 I had to get it. This really puts you in a trance for sure. Thanks Becca continue to listen dear :)
My homeboy does a lot of poetry and is a pretty good writer... I see a lot of what he does in what you do... you have really deep lyrics... keep doing ya thang bro
..really enjoy what you do with my pieces..this one is no exception. Kudos to gizella, as well. You both captured the overall mood of the track.
Cheers!
Thanks OD I'm tryin to do justice on your tracks and you know that i always love your beats it takes my spoken word into a different direction( Cheers) to you for allowing me to be apart of your work.
Yo fam, this one struck home to me. We started out doing spoken word. Your words are very deep and powerful. I can relate to the content. And the girl singing adds to the mood. Great spoken word fam! Keep writing.
Very nice. This track really is well done. I would bring your vocals forward in the mix. As Thethanx said, they really are the focal point on this so it would be nice to have them front and center. But that is minor nit picking on my part. Great backing track (kudos to Protege) and great female vox (props to imajen). I'd say this one is a keeper. Well done.
It's nice to hear some spoken word instead of just straight rap here on this site. I feel like your vocals could be a little less reverby and even louder. Your words are really powerful and totally make the piece, so I just feel like they should be really center stage.
It's very very cool though, You use the rhythm of the music wonderfully, and Imaijen's singing just pulls it all together. Great piece!
Thnkx Man I really appreciate it yeah we need a variety on here to much rap and hip hop for sure I love what i do and I have an coming soon so keep listening
nice track it all flows realy well the vocal could just be a little more clearer they sound a little distant from the track or maybe its just me :)) but its a nice sound well done best wishes D. :0)
As a poet, I appreciate your expression. As a producer, there's one problem that can't be ignored. There are no words spoken until :35 into a 4:44 long track. :35 is enough time for listeners to get annoyed and switch to another track. It's also enough time for a listener to leave you alone altogether. You wouldn't stand on stage silent for :35. Don't let a track play for that long before letting loose. Other than that, I enjoyed it. However, I appreciate the art and understand the effort put forth. The average listener doesn't care about any of that. They want satisfaction.
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Compliments and respect____Orlando
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on I Apologize ft The Writers Poet and Gizella by TheWritersPoet41
Poasted it in the "An Apology" forum. Hopefully, you'll get some more plays and reviews.
Keep them coming, My Friend
John
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All The Best
John
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The beat fits the mood of your words and the effects on your voice are good. Even though they are too prominent in some parts. But that's still ok ;)
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Very good!
Allen
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Cheers!
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Faved
John
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It's very very cool though, You use the rhythm of the music wonderfully, and Imaijen's singing just pulls it all together. Great piece!
on The Rebirth by TheWritersPoet41
Well Done
John
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