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TheWritersPoet41

TheWritersPoet41

Always Writing Poetry
Greenville, SC, United States
Joined : 3rd Jan 2010 - 15 years ago
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Other users have posted 66 comments on tracks by TheWritersPoet41

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Orlando51
Orlando51 7th Mar 2014 22:19 - 11 years ago

on On Tonight ft Imajen by TheWritersPoet41
Simply brilliant!

Compliments and respect____Orlando
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 16th May 2013 17:53 - 12 years ago

on Misdirection Of Life ft Gizella by TheWritersPoet41
Your spoken words echo through ones mind and a reflection can be seen. You make good points in your poetry and got to say job done nicely. The music is also a good feature to this idea. Helps allow the travel to be felt while not being over powered. I discovered this by clicking the Random button and glad I followed through. A message universal and personal. Thank you for this share. Keep writing.
JohnBoutilier
Beautiful track, my friend.

Poasted it in the "An Apology" forum. Hopefully, you'll get some more plays and reviews.

Keep them coming, My Friend

John
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 19th Mar 2011 23:44 - 14 years ago

on The Struggle ft The Writers Poet by TheWritersPoet41
The bass could come back a bit, in my opinion, but other than that yopu've got a very good track here.

All The Best

John
djquickrick
djquickrick 5th Mar 2011 22:58 - 14 years ago

on On Tonight ft Imajen by TheWritersPoet41
Really nice. Break out the candles! nice production with it all! thanks for sharing..:)
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks Djquickrick glad you enjoyed it yes you know the candles and wine already in motion
Nequissimus
Nequissimus 3rd Mar 2011 15:06 - 14 years ago

on DoomsDay ft JFL by TheWritersPoet41
Nice poem, man.

The beat fits the mood of your words and the effects on your voice are good. Even though they are too prominent in some parts. But that's still ok ;)
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
I really appreciated the feed back glad you enjoyed it
lantern0121
i like it but its a bit hard to hear, bit over compressed?!?!?!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks for the review it wasn't mix and master until it was time.
AllenV
AllenV 18th Jan 2011 23:49 - 14 years ago

on Thoughts Of You by TheWritersPoet41
You've got the lyrics moving perfectly with the song,very smooth and I think that's what you were going for.
Very good!

Allen
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks Alot Allen I love the smooth sounds of slow music and good guitar play I'm glad you enjoy it friend
breo
breo 9th Jan 2011 11:15 - 14 years ago

on The Last Goodbye Ft ChrissG by TheWritersPoet41
This is a cool tune lots of space in there
RyckStylz
RyckStylz 18th Dec 2010 16:32 - 14 years ago

on Waiting On You ft Farisha by TheWritersPoet41
Nice groove and smooth. God bless and keep your grind on.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks man I appreciated this was one of my fav but it has a style of it's own. glad you enjoyed it
Becca
Becca 17th Dec 2010 20:28 - 14 years ago

on On Tonight ft Imajen by TheWritersPoet41
OMG this one I just can't get enough of, Really it just puts u in that lovemaking mood :) Very sexy and sensual and That voice whewwww!! LUV IT MARTY
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Lol I feel in love with this one when I hear it from Alpha2 I had to get it. This really puts you in a trance for sure. Thanks Becca continue to listen dear :)
Becca
Becca 17th Dec 2010 20:26 - 14 years ago

on Love Story ft Writers Poet and Imaijen by TheWritersPoet41
Ah Marty , this is one of my fav tracks from u. Its so beautiful amd put me in a Trance. I think I feel a new love story coming on one day. ;)
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks you Becca I really appreciated that I'm glad your love. Well I think a real love story is on the horizon for sure :)
N2G
N2G 13th Dec 2010 08:20 - 14 years ago

on Breath With Me by The Writers Poet ft Imaijen by TheWritersPoet41
My homeboy does a lot of poetry and is a pretty good writer... I see a lot of what he does in what you do... you have really deep lyrics... keep doing ya thang bro
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks big homie I love the spoken and what it bring with music. Be sure to check out my Jan 2011
oasisduke
oasisduke 11th Dec 2010 07:54 - 14 years ago

on Misdirection Of Life ft Gizella by TheWritersPoet41
..really enjoy what you do with my pieces..this one is no exception. Kudos to gizella, as well. You both captured the overall mood of the track.
Cheers!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks OD I'm tryin to do justice on your tracks and you know that i always love your beats it takes my spoken word into a different direction( Cheers) to you for allowing me to be apart of your work.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 11th Dec 2010 04:37 - 14 years ago

on Here I stand ft Imajen by TheWritersPoet41
Great piece, my friend, love your work.

Faved

John
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks fam for the review it's been a long road and now i'm finally here
jsin4
jsin4 11th Dec 2010 00:59 - 14 years ago

on A Hustles Dream ft Noemi Esocobar by TheWritersPoet41
Yo fam, this one struck home to me. We started out doing spoken word. Your words are very deep and powerful. I can relate to the content. And the girl singing adds to the mood. Great spoken word fam! Keep writing.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks fam for the feed back I will be release my first spoken word Cd within a month. I enjoy changing things up something that we all can relate to
ShortBusMusic
Very nice. This track really is well done. I would bring your vocals forward in the mix. As Thethanx said, they really are the focal point on this so it would be nice to have them front and center. But that is minor nit picking on my part. Great backing track (kudos to Protege) and great female vox (props to imajen). I'd say this one is a keeper. Well done.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks for review the track it's one of my fav and i will be the better quailty on here later
story29
story29 8th Dec 2010 01:22 - 14 years ago

on The Last Goodbye Ft ChrissG by TheWritersPoet41
I like this track sweety. I was told that we would be good in music together listen to my track please and tell me what you think.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks dear be sure to check out some on my other work as well.
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 2nd Dec 2010 16:52 - 14 years ago

on DoomsDay ft JFL by TheWritersPoet41
Really good poetry man! Nice production too! I like the effects you used on the vocals! Those beats suit this poem very nicely! Well done man!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks for your review it was nicely done by one of my closest friends.
Thethanx
Thethanx 7th Nov 2010 17:49 - 15 years ago

on Breath With Me by The Writers Poet ft Imaijen by TheWritersPoet41
It's nice to hear some spoken word instead of just straight rap here on this site. I feel like your vocals could be a little less reverby and even louder. Your words are really powerful and totally make the piece, so I just feel like they should be really center stage.

It's very very cool though, You use the rhythm of the music wonderfully, and Imaijen's singing just pulls it all together. Great piece!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thnkx Man I really appreciate it yeah we need a variety on here to much rap and hip hop for sure I love what i do and I have an coming soon so keep listening
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 1st Nov 2010 23:58 - 15 years ago

on The Rebirth by TheWritersPoet41
Great set of lyrics that are well spoken. I like the minimalist backing track and your use of fading.

Well Done

John
ruff_trak
ruff_trak 23rd Oct 2010 22:18 - 15 years ago

on I Pledge Allegiance by TheWritersPoet41
real talk, definately feeling this one and a mad beat from illthoughtz.
imajen
imajen 15th Sep 2010 07:02 - 15 years ago

on Breath With Me by The Writers Poet ft Imaijen by TheWritersPoet41
Wow this is an amazing track we did. I love it.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Yeah we sure did knock this one out :)
djdaddio
djdaddio 11th Sep 2010 14:10 - 15 years ago

on Dont Stop by The Writers Poet by TheWritersPoet41
nice track it all flows realy well the vocal could just be a little more clearer they sound a little distant from the track or maybe its just me :)) but its a nice sound well done best wishes D. :0)
EBRAD
EBRAD 31st Aug 2010 22:27 - 15 years ago

on DoomsDay ft JFL by TheWritersPoet41
As a poet, I appreciate your expression. As a producer, there's one problem that can't be ignored. There are no words spoken until :35 into a 4:44 long track. :35 is enough time for listeners to get annoyed and switch to another track. It's also enough time for a listener to leave you alone altogether. You wouldn't stand on stage silent for :35. Don't let a track play for that long before letting loose. Other than that, I enjoyed it. However, I appreciate the art and understand the effort put forth. The average listener doesn't care about any of that. They want satisfaction.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
hey thanks for the feed i really appreciate it a lot but i didn't compose the track but I will kept that in mine to the fellow who did it
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