Sacrament, this sounds awsome, you production is really booming, the build up is great, but honest opinion this is the intro to a masterpiece yet to ##### written, your setting up for a masterpiece of epic proportion, from the sound of this I know you have it in you some 8 minutes piece, I have a couple they're a lot of work but worth it, really great job. Peace Love and Freedom to come from BC Quebec.
GrandPierre, il y a un autre Quebecois. His name is PixSamplxZ. His tracks are cent percent !
Pour mon track "Bees", le fin c'est pas bon. Je recu beaucoup de suggestion, which I will do when I have time. Mais je n'a pas beacoup de temp - merde.
hey dude ... the intro was execellent .... and the guitar bit was awesome ... u gave a good intro...i like it ... i felt it like a fusion beat... good one bro... keep rocking ...
Hey Raj. Thank you for listening to it. Actually, you gave me incentive to listen to the fusion at this site. I'm still new here and have not heard many of the genres listed here. Thanks again Raj.
Hey Spiv, thank you for the review. I intended no insult to any landlord anywhere. As usual, I was having fun. I must say here that it is our fault about the rent check - selective memory especially when money is involved - LOL
Later dude.
Hi Mrbc...A good ear at work here I can see...I think orchestral pieces offer a huge soundscape and big bold brush strokes work well when balanced with delicate passages..there's a definite percussive direction introduced during this piece..I'd be looking to follow that for an end run and outro...cheers planet
G'day, sorry for the delay in responding - been taking care of personal business. Thank you for taking the time to listen and for the review. I've listened to some of your tracks. Wow, I love your tunes and the sound of your base. Great constructs.
If the avatar is your art - again wow - Air brush ?
Thanks again
Thanks for reviewing my latest track, 'Funky Mix'.
Glad you enjoyed it.
So in return, here is my review of your latest.
I haven't done any tunes like Cinematic yet....altho I am fully equipt to do so. Working with loops is a lot of fun and I see you did a very nice job here of putting this one together.
I like everything about it actually. The piano part is cool especially. Nice and clean sounding. Fits in nicely with the overall picture.
I think you did a great job in putting this one together.
As far as making an ending, not excatly sure other than a repeating part that fades out. Sometimes, my tunes end abruptly, with a delay effect at the very end which is cool sounding.
Ah jeez Randy, please forgive the lenght of time for my reply. My memory is like a...err...uhm..what was I talking about ?
Thank you for reviewing this track. I am very concerned about the bees - they do a unique job, humans or machines cannot do what bees do, and they are disappearing. Somewhat worrisome.
Later dude.
Amazing stuff right here, for real .... This track is the first orchestral track I've listened too on this site let alone review and the funny thing is, Im open to other genres as its all music right ? - I pretty much make hip hop and chillout tracks, a few electronic and industrial tracks here and there as well and honestly, your profile pic is what entrigued me a little to stop by so I had to check this out and wow am I impressed. Its something about this track thats got me. Maybe the fact that the overall message you are trying to express is very deep and epic, it could be the overall feeling from the track, the vibe ... many things. On that note, Im fav'n this one and look forwarding to checking out some others. As for the ending, I have to agree with DJL3.
Holy smokes ! Thanks JD, I am astonished to have received the attention of a prolific creator and contributer.
I just saw DJL2 sugestion - 100 percent spot on. Once I get a moment ( and peace and quiet ), I will have a go at it.
I'm concerned about the bees, if they go, we will have to learn how to eat and digest plastic (notwithstanding my wife's cooking). Bees are an essential part of our food supply what with pollenation and all that - ah ##### hell, I did not want to pontificate - sorry.
The picture is a WW1 British tank - very first one to have arrived on the battle field - they never did much damage but it terrified the enemy since they never saw anything like that before in trench warfare. My grandfather was there.
I'm still astonished - thanks again
May the road rise to meet you.....
Thank you, DJL3, your suggestions are spot on. It makes a lot of sense and would fix the problem - damn you're good. It will be a bit before I can get to it [sigh], time constraints. Thanks again.
Thank you, I had a blast doing it.
I have not been a member long, but I am astonished at the level of talent, and the openness to share loops and tracks. The world would be a better place if they noticed more of musicians - we put to sound the soul of humankind.
Later dude.
First off, let me say I WISH I could program half as good as you.
What I hear on this is going to a double time feel with the drum loop & snare at some point... maybe change up the loop to a faster one for variety. Gaw, I'm not sure if I'm making sense. Definitely keep in the stutter edits. The music's great.
Wow, high praise, thank you, I just hope my head does not swell too much to fit through the door. Actually my head is a-swirl - i've listened to some of your loops and tunes - wow !! ( I left a review on your most recent.
I believe I understand what you suggested, I will not be able to do something about it for a while -I've got something new on the burner and am not as fast as I once was with technology.
Am I correct in remembering ( yes, I am getting old, forgeting, and am repeating myself, yes, I am getting old, forgetting, and am repeating myself, ) seeing an offer you made here somewhere to do guitar tracks - One day I would very much like to take you up on that - your are very talented.
Very funny song name BTW!
Play 2 now...
I can recognize some of the Mag loops ya used in this being a fellow user, but not that many of 'em. So is it fair guessing that this is a demo or teaser track, given it's short time? I'm kinda interested to hear how this would progress if ya did more to it. Later on!
Thank you for listening to it. It means a lot to have been noticed by someone who knows his way around ( wow dude - I read your bio )
About the name, well, it's like that around here - we have fun at home as best we can what with lately life's continual relentless assaults.
I am impressed by your observation - hit the nail squarely on the head. Much of my music is quickly done because of time constraints, and I sincerly regret that much of my music does not have much sublty, because I am still drilling through the technology. Considering having spent 20 years as a mainframe systems analyst, I am lagging badly - a bit embarressing.
I come from an era when you grabbed a guitar with a few moments notice and head to a bar to bang out a nights worth of mostly rock and roll.
A great starting environement but it does not help a lot with todays methods. At 54 years old I am still learning music - and enjoying it just as much. I am also stunned by the amount of talented people on this site that are willing to assist.
Thanks again. May the road rise to meet you....
Thank you for the review - it means a lot having just recently joined the site and have been noticed.
I did not want to say a lot about the bees since it is worrysome, and that this site ( so far as I have seen ) has been created as a celebratory, and a postitve approach to music.
Thanks again, be well, and may the road rise to meet you....
on I Said Put the Cat Down and Step Away by bcway
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
Pour mon track "Bees", le fin c'est pas bon. Je recu beaucoup de suggestion, which I will do when I have time. Mais je n'a pas beacoup de temp - merde.
on The Landlord is at the Door,He wants a Rent Cheque by bcway
on I Said Put the Cat Down and Step Away by bcway
All the best
raj
on The Landlord is at the Door,He wants a Rent Cheque by bcway
Later dude.
on The Landlord is at the Door,He wants a Rent Cheque by bcway
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
If the avatar is your art - again wow - Air brush ?
Thanks again
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
Thanks for reviewing my latest track, 'Funky Mix'.
Glad you enjoyed it.
So in return, here is my review of your latest.
I haven't done any tunes like Cinematic yet....altho I am fully equipt to do so. Working with loops is a lot of fun and I see you did a very nice job here of putting this one together.
I like everything about it actually. The piano part is cool especially. Nice and clean sounding. Fits in nicely with the overall picture.
I think you did a great job in putting this one together.
As far as making an ending, not excatly sure other than a repeating part that fades out. Sometimes, my tunes end abruptly, with a delay effect at the very end which is cool sounding.
Anyways, thanks for sharing.
Randy
Thank you for reviewing this track. I am very concerned about the bees - they do a unique job, humans or machines cannot do what bees do, and they are disappearing. Somewhat worrisome.
Later dude.
on Busy Unit # 3 by bcway
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
J DOT ~ 2006 | Unite the Music |
I just saw DJL2 sugestion - 100 percent spot on. Once I get a moment ( and peace and quiet ), I will have a go at it.
I'm concerned about the bees, if they go, we will have to learn how to eat and digest plastic (notwithstanding my wife's cooking). Bees are an essential part of our food supply what with pollenation and all that - ah ##### hell, I did not want to pontificate - sorry.
The picture is a WW1 British tank - very first one to have arrived on the battle field - they never did much damage but it terrified the enemy since they never saw anything like that before in trench warfare. My grandfather was there.
I'm still astonished - thanks again
May the road rise to meet you.....
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
I see what you mean about the end though. Perhaps a build-up, followed by a sudden stop with light violin(?) in the background perhaps?
on I Said Put the Cat Down and Step Away by bcway
I have not been a member long, but I am astonished at the level of talent, and the openness to share loops and tracks. The world would be a better place if they noticed more of musicians - we put to sound the soul of humankind.
Later dude.
on Busy Unit # 3 by bcway
What I hear on this is going to a double time feel with the drum loop & snare at some point... maybe change up the loop to a faster one for variety. Gaw, I'm not sure if I'm making sense. Definitely keep in the stutter edits. The music's great.
I believe I understand what you suggested, I will not be able to do something about it for a while -I've got something new on the burner and am not as fast as I once was with technology.
Am I correct in remembering ( yes, I am getting old, forgeting, and am repeating myself, yes, I am getting old, forgetting, and am repeating myself, ) seeing an offer you made here somewhere to do guitar tracks - One day I would very much like to take you up on that - your are very talented.
on I Said Put the Cat Down and Step Away by bcway
Play 2 now...
I can recognize some of the Mag loops ya used in this being a fellow user, but not that many of 'em. So is it fair guessing that this is a demo or teaser track, given it's short time? I'm kinda interested to hear how this would progress if ya did more to it. Later on!
About the name, well, it's like that around here - we have fun at home as best we can what with lately life's continual relentless assaults.
I am impressed by your observation - hit the nail squarely on the head. Much of my music is quickly done because of time constraints, and I sincerly regret that much of my music does not have much sublty, because I am still drilling through the technology. Considering having spent 20 years as a mainframe systems analyst, I am lagging badly - a bit embarressing.
I come from an era when you grabbed a guitar with a few moments notice and head to a bar to bang out a nights worth of mostly rock and roll.
A great starting environement but it does not help a lot with todays methods. At 54 years old I am still learning music - and enjoying it just as much. I am also stunned by the amount of talented people on this site that are willing to assist.
Thanks again. May the road rise to meet you....
on Lament for the Bees by bcway
I did not want to say a lot about the bees since it is worrysome, and that this site ( so far as I have seen ) has been created as a celebratory, and a postitve approach to music.
Thanks again, be well, and may the road rise to meet you....