CalifKen

I'd pick the second one as well. Quite a groovy track, you really get crazy with those synths! Very catchy bass line! Is that sample saying "So neurotic"? Funny stuff! Awesome track!

if i had to pick out off the 2 i would pick the second. i cant master for crap, i leave that to someone else. but if you really wont it to sound better i would turn all your levels down compress some off your sounds and go through you eqs and reajust them and remember not every synth needs to be eq'ed. It can just as long making your track to sound right than it does to wrighting it. Also liking the track, it's got a bit off an old skool sound to it.

Play 2 now...

(please disregard the last comment, was meant for someone else & I had it in the wrong tab, opps, my bad, brb)...

Vocally, it sounds like yer strugglin. Did you record this sitting down? Because often times that'll greatly reduce the strength of yer ab muscles. I'd recommend that ya try standing up and re-recording them. I do like their folk-rock stylings though.
Musically, I was diggin the piano work and classic strummed strings ya used on here (like an epic RPG goes to have dinner in an Italian joint or something). This could stand to be just a little longer I'm thinkin (maybe about a minute). Keep hammerin away at it mate. Lates!

wooow! this is a track to remember tha mixin is crazy in this one likin how it travels to one speaker to tha next pretty trippy mane!

A happy energetic 'city' feel. I like it. It gives a sense of movement, inner-visually.
Smoking Kitty - Berlin

hey i had a go at reading the discription but it was to long and i is drunk here goes the review i loved it when it dropped out to the bass and built again multi pul scattered cloud moments i aint doin the lighting on this track man,sorry i just read over that im talking sh it ... its really f kin good honest love ya emily xxx

Hmm.. This song a ton of potential. I see it. Anyway you'd let me do a remix / remake of this? Or maybe a new instrumental for you to sing to? Ridiculous amount of potential here. Awesome.

I am honored to be working on the vocals for this hot tune, Cali you rock!

i'm hiphop to the heart but when i get in my moods i love listening to tracks like these kind of takes me out my zone good job !

Hey Man! Nice work on this track! Very interesting and addictive!
The vocals fit the beat perfectly! Reminds me a lot of the sound of Depeche Mode! It's a nice heartfelt track with vocals full of feeling :)Nice work Man!

Hidden jewels man. I missed this one. What can I say Ken. You Da' Man!

WICKED MADNESS! Great feeling on this joint. good material!

RESPECT,
B.

Fuckin solid man. I feel the vocals need to blend a little more on this track as well though. I was definitely movin to it.

It's a pretty tight track bro. I agree that it could definitely be longer and I would like to hear a really solid breakdown somewhere in the middle or towards the end and really just explode after that. One great quality of a trance track is that it's like a roller-coaster you know? So basically drop it down almost completely with like a high-cut or something, and then just bring it up to KICK everyone's ass :D

I'd also like to hear more of the music a little more and the vocals just a SMIDGEN less. I feel like the vocals drown everything out. This is just personal preference though. It's my belief that with this type of music, vocals should take a back seat to the music.

Well done though. I always enjoy listening to your tracks.

Piggybacking on what Eshar said, I second the Beatles influence, and that the lyrics are great. Like the piano as well, good arrangement. My one critique would be that the vocals are a little off key. It's a great song though, well done.

Cheers
-Shaun

Dude! I love this track! I downloaded and I will be throwing some lyrics on it, give it a pop twist, you are really good man, make more music like this!

Hey dude. its always nice to hear some singing on a track!
you got a nice tone to your voice dude :)
I like it when it kicks in with the strings!

Cool tune dude! keep em coming :)

Chris

You are very talented. I think that is why I am so honored by your comment.
But I have to tell you, this song is sick. I adore every minute of it.

*Someone said this to me once, and I did not know what they meant until listening to this. I love how it is just chaotic enough to keep you guessing*
Fits that to a T.

dude,

a real nice feel to this, it gives out positive vibes man. the synth sounds are relaxed and rich. good one here.. keep em rollin in.

ash

Love the modern electro vibe you have. Congrats on the release of this, any news?

I dont here many song with vocals on the thechno genre of looperman but you mixed the vocals in nicely

Hehe, cool one dear friend. I was picturing how much fun you must have been having while making this number. Really nice synths, I really like the crunchiness there and quite the punch as well. Really booming in the system (earphones :)).

Very cool =]
Loved the Piano, thought the drums overpowered the vocals a bit though, but still good =]

This track is insanity...i had no idea where it was going and loved every second of it

Nice track Ken, like the vocal effects. some crazy sounds in this one!! Unpredictable and an imperfectionist! ;) lol

Wayne