the beat is very good and I love the breakdown parts but just for some advice (trying to be constructive here) try singing without going with the sound of the guitars and synth; it sounds weird and "childy". Not too sure if this is the genre for you but you should listen to some classic metalcore bands like Asking Alexandria, Attack Attack, Sleeping With Sirens, etc to get a better idea of how to sing on this kind of genre. Props though!
I like your sad little track!
The drums triggering to early are probally a side effect of the playlist grid pattern paint settings try setting the little grid cursor painter thing at the far right of playlist settings (right next to were it says playlst) in fruity to "cell" then remove the offset pattern (not the whole thing just the offset ones) on the track and put it back down this usally fixes it somtimes you can use the same function to mak the beats more movable change it up and such or when you get into some really elaborate stuff sometimes you have to offset whole sections off songs to get stuff to lineup right!
As a master of Metal and all things goth/Screamo (im a screamo vocalist) - I cant stand this track to me it unfortunately sounds like a mash-up of saturday night live, chav induced violence, mixed with fruity loops presets.
I want you to know that before I saw this ...
err
wait-- that came out all wrong lol
That I was a little put off, but the emotional content!
This was AMAZING.
but
vocals more forward!
guitars actually guitars!
drums where awesome! but i woulda mixed two kits...
Wow! Great track.. I love it.. Has an MSI feel to it, theyre one of my favorites. This is great, I'll be looking for more, so please keep em coming.. Faved. Please get at me if you post pella's..Jack Ripper
wonderful!!! i like the child-y twist to the track (no offense) and then the hardcore metal scream it has. truly, i get y AJ recommended it. it is catchy!! keep it up. the pauses were good too.
DextDee
Interesting song you have hear. i like your courage to do a screamo song. i might just do one myself (i have already done a couple of screaming acapellas.) i just gotta write something worthy of it lol. its an nice idea you got going in this track. all it really needs is a little more polishing and it would be great
Diggin the interplay between the drums and the basic ZombieNation-like bass you got goin on here. And I'm with Heym in that it'd be nicer if this was longer. Cool name for this BTW. Later on!
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
on Doom by SweetRampaige
The drums triggering to early are probally a side effect of the playlist grid pattern paint settings try setting the little grid cursor painter thing at the far right of playlist settings (right next to were it says playlst) in fruity to "cell" then remove the offset pattern (not the whole thing just the offset ones) on the track and put it back down this usally fixes it somtimes you can use the same function to mak the beats more movable change it up and such or when you get into some really elaborate stuff sometimes you have to offset whole sections off songs to get stuff to lineup right!
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
But i do give u dibs for trying.
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
I love the growl .. on about 1:oo to 2:00
YOU ROCK! k?
I want you to know that before I saw this ...
err
wait-- that came out all wrong lol
That I was a little put off, but the emotional content!
This was AMAZING.
but
vocals more forward!
guitars actually guitars!
drums where awesome! but i woulda mixed two kits...
You got it tho.
This is just undeniable.
Lyrics where the best part.
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
DextDee
on On Edge by SweetRampaige
on Infectious by SweetRampaige
on Infectious by SweetRampaige