Interesting intro to the track, different but I like it, nice when the bass starts to filter in, Since my genre is trance I find that this track is little repetitive where's it should/could have had some more variety in track currently at 2.35 mark and nothing has changed, you have a couple nice sounds there Sonny but track is a little boring, I don't say that in a mean way either but tracks needs change to keep listener hooked and wanting more, now at end of the track nothing seemed to change the whole length of the track, production wise track sounded okies in headset, I would find a couple of nice synths and layer over the top of track, you would notice big different in the sound and overall feel, just wondering if that's why track has had 124 plays but only 3 reviews including mine...will check out more of your more current work over next week or so...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
I agree with Modnex, the chior seems to over power the lyrics. hard to hear the voice. but the over all effect of the music is very powerful good piece.
Basically very well done, only the production needs a bit more polishing. Quite some distortion can be heard, particularly on drum kicks. Otherwise...congrats!:)
I think I know where Wobbin was heading in his reviews, Trance is my main genre as you may have seen on my profile tracks the couple I currently have up which requires a bit of variety to keep listener wanting to hear more,liking your idea in part with this track, but I think it is very repetitive, first at the intro I would do something different eg a bass with kick and synth or just a synth then build up into the track, basically it starts out the way it finishes, which isn't very good for the listener, maybe that's why it has had 90 plays but only 3 reviews before mine, sounds like you have a rolling bass or something in the back ground of the track, maybe think about adding a couple of different bass lines to help with drive and variety, kick should be higher then the hi-hats/shakers not sure what you did use, this will allow more depth to the track and drive, lastly add something different in the form of synths/cymbals/rises ect to keep it inviting and interesting for the listener, also some nice drops and biulds would help too...Hope you don't mind the constructive review, but trying to help you out so you know why others have hinted at but not laid out for you like I have...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
Thanks for laying it out, i appreciate it.
You know, it's a bit confusing if one says the track is to busy and someone else says to add more stuff ;)
I used a big room echo over the entire track , maybe not the best thing to do but that may explain the rolling bass. There's 2 different hi hats, one with higher volume so it would add to the rhythm of the track.. i just like that effect.. but i see now its quite useless if the track doesn't build up more. I will definitely consider all your advice, also for future projects this will be helpful to me so thanks again!
Sonny
crazy effective into! i guess that constant hard hitting beat is the rave genre. it adds to the terror of the track. cool distorted quality to the track which creates that unstable, frightening feeling also. nice work
Thanks Dan, i made loops of the original songs (cd), balancing the instruments is all The cure work :) Although i must say, making the loops and balancing them took me a while because i didn't change anything from the original songs.
good job on the layering of the strings. the drums are great. this is my favorite style. could use some breaks to let the listener take it in. but this is a very mild suggestion. I like it.
Hello
I really love the vibe of this beat. Its cosmic melancholic. I would rap to this if u will delete the vocal part and make an intro and real outro for that. What about this proposition?
Maybe you can build a beat with it and add some more stuff that you like.
Let me know if this helps you and if you make the beat, upload it on looperman or somewhere and post the link, I would love to hear someone rap on this, it has a nice open space that can be used and adapted with more sounds and different beats.
it remembers me all the productions in the nineties which was named "Thunderdome".
i'm not really fan of this techno style, too much hard for me but i heard it fully and the set turns well :)
Hey man cool track nice and meaty i like it there is plenty to weave in a nice lead . i clicked the link phatkatz4 put up very funny lol :) keep up the good work best regards Robbie.
Hmm not sure about the blood sample, I'd be pumped dry! So how many were thrown under the train for entertainment? I like that intro. Look at that crowd of walking corpses bouncing all around, just make sure they don't get too close to the fire, zombie torches are very very bad! Hahaha that end! Reminds me playing Tomb Raider when she'd fall from really high heights. So they drooped dropped someone instead of a ball at the stroke of midnight? Seems appropriate, must have enough fresh meat on hand to spare dropping a few more for entertainment purposes 3:D>
forgot to leave the link on my reply ooops!! http://www.mediafire.com/file/xcfjnj9veq22bp8/Phatkatz4+Radio+Guest.wav OOh Punk :D I like punk, ANARCHY!! I like the idea of flavoring it up with some sounds, love the additional depth that can add, even some lead licks. Solid groove to build on.
No you didn't, its right there ;)
Thanks for the hoax though. The idea of additional depth is something that i will be adding to this track, it will be a lead but not sure what kind.
As lAVel said in the comment below,
adding little elements that just add a different dimension to the whole track and just fill the empty spots.
like little hits or bass fills.
Its a solid going
The base of track is solid. I don't think you should change anything, but you may try add different electro/machine effects like in glitch genre (check my track "495,495" to better understand what type of sounds i mean). So yeah, as i said, base of track is already good just add some more stuff above it.
Thanks for the advice AV'e, im thinking of a melody right now that could go on it, maybe not so much electric but definitely something that could keep the track going and fits the base as it is. So again, thanks and i like your stuff, 13 42 has some great dept.
Honestly, its sounds like 200bpm heavy roller-coaster on drugs: which makes me ears hurt, my mind crazy and my fingers switch the track off within the first 10 seconds.
I scrolled slightly through the rest to be able to leave a honest review. Which I find important and where I always try to be positive, but with a form of constructive criticism to help the person further.
I'm not sure if its the kick who goes so fast, or if its a percussion, drum or something similar but the rest of the track goes at a way lower pace. Which all together for me, makes it to busy and out of balance.
Begrijp je wat ik bedoel? Anders is op z'n Nederlands misschien wat makkelijker haha. Veel plezier de 20ste!
- Wobbin
I don't think "scrolling slightly through the rest" makes it a honest review or even close to anything constructive but ok i guess it's to busy. And i don't need to talk Nederlands with you, we'l be just fine :)
All advice is appreciated. Most of my stuff is quite linear because i used to have the habit of roughly finishing stuff after i found the sound i was looking for. Ritchie hawting will be in town the 21'st, sold out unfortunately but i will definitely check out some of his sets.
Like the atmosphere, nice and dark just how i like my music. Reminds me of 'The Church' They massacre a bunch of possessed people, bury them and build a church on top of the grave but the evil still lurks in the depths below and eventually is released. There's an archeological site in Ireland they dug up skeletons, the deviant burials or vampire skeletons, where the corpses were very abused in a clear attempt to keep them in the graves, then a palace or church was built on top of their remains.
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Interesting intro to the track, different but I like it, nice when the bass starts to filter in, Since my genre is trance I find that this track is little repetitive where's it should/could have had some more variety in track currently at 2.35 mark and nothing has changed, you have a couple nice sounds there Sonny but track is a little boring, I don't say that in a mean way either but tracks needs change to keep listener hooked and wanting more, now at end of the track nothing seemed to change the whole length of the track, production wise track sounded okies in headset, I would find a couple of nice synths and layer over the top of track, you would notice big different in the sound and overall feel, just wondering if that's why track has had 124 plays but only 3 reviews including mine...will check out more of your more current work over next week or so...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
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All thew best_____Orlando
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I think I know where Wobbin was heading in his reviews, Trance is my main genre as you may have seen on my profile tracks the couple I currently have up which requires a bit of variety to keep listener wanting to hear more,liking your idea in part with this track, but I think it is very repetitive, first at the intro I would do something different eg a bass with kick and synth or just a synth then build up into the track, basically it starts out the way it finishes, which isn't very good for the listener, maybe that's why it has had 90 plays but only 3 reviews before mine, sounds like you have a rolling bass or something in the back ground of the track, maybe think about adding a couple of different bass lines to help with drive and variety, kick should be higher then the hi-hats/shakers not sure what you did use, this will allow more depth to the track and drive, lastly add something different in the form of synths/cymbals/rises ect to keep it inviting and interesting for the listener, also some nice drops and biulds would help too...Hope you don't mind the constructive review, but trying to help you out so you know why others have hinted at but not laid out for you like I have...Peace n Respect...mosaic...
You know, it's a bit confusing if one says the track is to busy and someone else says to add more stuff ;)
I used a big room echo over the entire track , maybe not the best thing to do but that may explain the rolling bass. There's 2 different hi hats, one with higher volume so it would add to the rhythm of the track.. i just like that effect.. but i see now its quite useless if the track doesn't build up more. I will definitely consider all your advice, also for future projects this will be helpful to me so thanks again!
Sonny
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Good to see another Zimmer fan on here!
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I really love the vibe of this beat. Its cosmic melancholic. I would rap to this if u will delete the vocal part and make an intro and real outro for that. What about this proposition?
I could trace back 2 of the loops for you:
Drums:
http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/94708/trap-drums-by-miazyo-free-80bpm-hip-hop-drum-loop
Melody:
http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/94708/trap-drums-by-miazyo-free-80bpm-hip-hop-drum-loop
Maybe you can build a beat with it and add some more stuff that you like.
Let me know if this helps you and if you make the beat, upload it on looperman or somewhere and post the link, I would love to hear someone rap on this, it has a nice open space that can be used and adapted with more sounds and different beats.
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i'm not really fan of this techno style, too much hard for me but i heard it fully and the set turns well :)
Friendly - Bleep
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Tiny side-chain issue's but a nice one to enjoy a evening on ;)
- Wobbin
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Thanks for the hoax though. The idea of additional depth is something that i will be adding to this track, it will be a lead but not sure what kind.
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adding little elements that just add a different dimension to the whole track and just fill the empty spots.
like little hits or bass fills.
Its a solid going
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Honestly, its sounds like 200bpm heavy roller-coaster on drugs: which makes me ears hurt, my mind crazy and my fingers switch the track off within the first 10 seconds.
I scrolled slightly through the rest to be able to leave a honest review. Which I find important and where I always try to be positive, but with a form of constructive criticism to help the person further.
I'm not sure if its the kick who goes so fast, or if its a percussion, drum or something similar but the rest of the track goes at a way lower pace. Which all together for me, makes it to busy and out of balance.
Begrijp je wat ik bedoel? Anders is op z'n Nederlands misschien wat makkelijker haha. Veel plezier de 20ste!
- Wobbin
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it's not really trance for me, more techno with an indus aspect... should personalise it in the way of ritchie hawtin!
you can do a "big bang" with this one if you add some details :)
All advice is appreciated. Most of my stuff is quite linear because i used to have the habit of roughly finishing stuff after i found the sound i was looking for. Ritchie hawting will be in town the 21'st, sold out unfortunately but i will definitely check out some of his sets.
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The track is a bit to busy for me as in to high bpm, i'm honestly afraid that that is the case for more people. But never say never.
I got some good old warehouse techno coming up in a few weeks if you're interested. Within the theme of Halloween.
- Wobbin
Would you mind explaining me why you didn't like the high bpm?
This may help me in my future projects!
I'm a little afraid of "good techno" in combination with a Halloween theme but we'l see :)
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