The biggest compliment I can give this track is it is all Spivkurl. I might be wrong but IMO, Spiv is one of those artists where there might not be a middle ground. He puts his stamp on everything from his distinct vocal style with his thought provoking lyrics to his true musicianship in the way he arranges his compositions. And of course, the true analogue instrumentation is brilliant. I'm a big fan!
Hey RW, good to see you around here today! Your comment made me happy, especially since it read like some sort of zine review or something. I found it interesting that Gramo found some Renz influence in here, and I suppose I cannot deny the effect you and your work has had on me since you joined up here. It's awesome to get your opinions on this one, so thank you much! See you at your profile!
This is funny :D
Mix is clear. At first it sounded like a barbie track.
Sounds cool, but I'm not into such genres so it would be rude if I say something wrong :)
Good work bro!! :)
Thank you for the listen and comment! You have said nothing rude at all. I honestly don't know what would be considered a barbie track, but on the other hand I can understand why it would seem this way to you. I look forward to visiting you profile to see what genres are in to. Thanks again!
I think its all been said Spiv....and by people much better informed to comment than this ol boy....you seem to have gained the uniqueness that many artists would strive for...and its the kind of thing that demands attention from those who absorb the intricicies of what you do...Its really interesting listening....a tip o the hat to you....Ed
From you Ed, this comment was a pleasure to read! I feel like I'm only scratching the surface at this point, especially considering the rising tide of obstacles that I have been contending with. I chose this life long ago though, so who am I to complain. Either way, it made me happy to hear from you on this song, so thank you!
I like listening to your stuff spiv cuz its very different and unique. Like some of the previous comments said it sounds retro but I say more modernish retro. Really unique.
The synths and sounds you got going are well played out and catchy but the glitchy synth that comes and goes at around the 1:09, 2:34, etc sounds out of place. But other than that you did an awesome job making all the synths work with each other in all ranges. It definitely sounds complete and the synth play/solo at the 3:01 mixes things up and keeps things interesting which is necessary for long tracks. You also got some cool transition synths going on but I didnt catch it until the 3rd or 4rth time of listening because it gets caught up behind the other synths (Yes this track has an usual addiction).
The vocals are not that unusual. It really fits the lyrics which are quite interesting and uncertain yet somehow hopeful if that makes any sense haha Its what I got out of it. The "we are the future" vocals at 1:46 feels like it comes too soon. Maybe having it come in a sec or so later can solve that but then again that may be just me since no one said anything about it.
Anyway Spiv I gotta hand it to you cuz overall this track is really really good, honestly listened to this countless times. Excuse my extra long review and critque but I just feel like if some areas in the track are improved it will be one of the most exceptional tracks on here because of your very unique style.
Thank you for stopping by to leave a useful comment! The glitchy synth you speak of that "comes and goes" was not really intended to be rhythmic in orientation, and is meant to sound like another place/time, only as an atmosphere which pushes it's way through at times. So from your comment, I feel it does what was intended. The transitions were difficult in this, as the key changes back and forth a bit... but it seemed to work for the vibe the vocals were meant for. I actually gave the "we are the future" part a chance at different timings and different performances, but this way it accented on the beats which I intended. It's a bit of my style to vocalize a bit ahead of the beat lately. Not sure if I will be going back to change anything, as it took many months to achieve what I wanted with the track as is. It was hard enough keeping the emotion which led to the original composition/lyrics after so many months. I really appreciate the detailed review and your addicted listening! Thank you!
Don't know how I missed this one!
Clubbing and Factory records come to mind Manchester England 1979.
Bands like Joy Division, New Order, Slaughter and the Dogs Iggy Pop and something that feels like Van Der Graff Generator in there.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
Took me to the Hacienda club Manchester ... all music drugs and guns ... very tense very high.
All in the past.
Hey there, thank you for the kind comment and listen! I am a big fan of Joy Division and New Order, not so much the other artists you mention. Do love the scene from 77-81, especially in the UK. "all music drugs and guns"... interesting... to me music is everywhere you listen, drugs help people think in new ways and evolve... guns, I've only ever owned one gun, and that was as a youth, now I'm fighting with a neighbor who has killed many of my friends, and has discharged weapons at our property... not a big fan of guns unless they are taken up against a corrupt government. "Very tense very high." Now that is a good description of most of my music recently, thank you for that. Appreciate your words so much!
not much a fan of this genre..but you have delivered what you said in the description
unusual vocals which actually work here..
the synths and arps are catchy good
good work
TJ
Don't really know what genre this would be, since you mention genre... maybe post punk would be the closest? Not many people are a fan of this genre. I think you've had to feel a lot of anger and sadness from your surroundings to appreciate it. I didn't really go into trying to make a certain genre, just immersed myself in the feeling. I don't think you can be an unusual vocalist unless you're an unusual person, so there's that. I work very hard on my synthesizers, and try to communicate that on every track. Thank you for the comment!
Hey, always good to hear from you! I wanted a screen of attraction to have the words heard, so it should be catching. Thank you for listening and commenting!
Nice one man. The synths are pretty crazy. Not liking this as much as some of you're other productions but still a innovative addition. Has a retro but futuristic sound to it at the same time. Almost a bit similar to some of Renz work lately with his retro type of endeavors. But this is still you're own work so I am in no way taking any credit away from the Spivkurl himself! You're an OG of the loop now man. lol Keep it going
Hey thanks GC for the listen and comment! I find it interesting and humorous that you brought up Renz Wilde, as we have much in common and have done behind the scenes work a bit... can't deny the influences he has had on me in the last year. Don't worry, very few people like my more lyrically expressive songs as much as the more non offensive pop stuff. Futuristic?... the future is a myth. You don't have to credit me for this song, just respect the earth and it's non human citizens, this is for them. OG, you mean Old Guy? No he's my prick of a neighbor.... Have an instrumental in the mixing chamber at the moment, so stay tuned!
I'm not sure what "yellus" means, I can only interpret it as jealous, though I may be wrong. I am in no way jealous. Your "why" must be in reference to my comment on your track... it was not meant in any way personally, and I apologize if it was taken that way. I only commented my true feelings, like I do on every track I review. A comment on my track would not be the best way to communicate something like this, more so a private message on my profile. Your comment has no relevance to my track. Again, I apologize if I was offensive, it was not meant that way. I only meant that the sounds in the track sounded the same as the original except degraded, hence my idea that maybe it was taken from the already mixed version which Kevin released. You gave no credit or links to acapellas or remix packs, so I felt that it may have been done without permission. All of this was just my honest feelings, which I was I stated "correct me if I'm wrong." You did so, so let's leave it at that. I only listened to your song because it had the same title as one of my older tracks.
Hello Orlando! I've been quite pleased to receive so many compliments and support from you on my recent works, so thank you for that! Bowie has some of my favorite vocal tracks ever for sure, so it makes sense a bit of that would seep through eventually. Was worried that you decided not to favorite this track, as your name isn't there. Hope that is not the case! :)
Nice i do love some Psy ;)
It does sound influenced by it but different in it's own way, very original.
I like the sounds you used through the track.
As for the vocals although very interesting and i honestly like them specially the lyrics, in my humble opinion don't fit this particular kind of music, personally i would prefer the sound without it but that's just my opinion, having said that hats off to you for getting out of the norm to bring us something different and unexpected.
Those synths you bring around 3:02 are amazing, very cool indeed and that Goa Trance type lead at 3:40 and again towards the end is really good.
Overall is a tricky track with lots of interesting stuff going on.
Well done
Hey WB, thank you for the kind and thorough comment! I'm happy that you did indeed hear the psy/goa influence in this. I really enjoy doing vocals for musical styles that wouldn't normally have standard lyrical structures, such as psy or techno... I find it brings out an industrial aspect to things which wouldn't normally have it. In addition, those are the kinds of music I enjoy making, so if I have something to say, it only makes sense to say it this way. "Different and unexpected" are both great comments for me as a musician, so thank you for that! This was much appreciated!
Hey there, I really appreciate you listening and leaving a comment! I see you've only been around here for a week, and yet you've already done 43 track comments... you should be proud! All I can ask is that you stay active, and help this place be all it should be, and used to be! Happy that you enjoyed listening, and I'll be at your page in a moment!
Mate this is amazing, very dancy piece, love the vocals, this very different for you my friend, totally loving this one, sounds like a galloping bass line?, under laying the piece, love it what ever it is, your vocals in this really do sound very much David Bowie sound, great synths, think I have just found my all time fav piece of yours my friend, brilliant vibe coming from this one, big statement as you know I really enjoy all your works but this one is a very special piece...Yep ALL TIME fav track mate...Mosaic...Rarely download mate but would download if available...Mos...
Hey Mosaic, thank you for the extremely kind comment! I don't know exactly why I'm not allowing download, just felt right... but you have a copy now, so I won't worry about it. I really do appreciate your continued support and friendship. Hope you are doing okay!
Hey Pat...shades of Metropolis,Fritz Lang's not Superman's!...The trouble is many people would categorize this in the alternative pigeon hole whereas it sounds totally normal to me,being a big Faust fan since the early 70's I dig it,dripping with trans generational 'tude' and a thin veneer of angst but delivered with a stylish laissez-faire attitude amounts to very cool in my book....I like that busy termite action synth grooves,it bubbles along nicely without boiling over and putting the stove out...if you performed this with a suitable stage show you'd be a star in certain quarters....Back in the day the music was enough but now the artist has to be portrayed for visual shock value in conjunction with the music......original music rules in my book,I've lost my elephant stamp but for what it's worth you get my vote man!.....your the full package ....musician,singer,songwriter,lyricist,composer,arranger,instrument maker and producer!..phew,did I leave anything out..awesome! cheers Dave
Ha ha, Metropolis! Used to really get into that movie, like 15 years ago. I'll have to look up Faust, as while I have heard of them, I can't really name a song. The attitude and angst is definitely there, and it is sad, but when creating songs on subjects I really care about, it seems natural to leave my care behind for the most part. In fact it is one reason I make lyrical music at all. The "termite action" you mention really hits home - during some of the later creation of this song I had carpenter ants trying to destroy the structure of the roof in my studio space. Freaked me out. I thought it was termites to begin with, but it got WAY too noisy to be little termites. Interesting you mention live performance, as I have been trying to work towards the ability to do slightly stripped down performances in the future, both by designing portable gear and practice. Aside from that, Iris-T-Shirt is getting all the pissed off energy we need to make a comeback. I am fully capable of the visual shock element, so that's the easy part... just ask the lady who gave us the eye when we got all excited about the rusty tire iron for $1 at the thrift shop!! (no we don't have a car) I appreciate your supportive list of my efforts there, I guess the only thing missing is performance art (sans music). Thank you so much for your listen and comment!
This is sound in a way i like it.
Dynamic and powerfull and also a little bit agressive and hypnotic and on some places near to the border to -stop it, i can´t handle it anymore- i love that a lot. Nice speed and extreme cool synth sounds around. I love this nerve, hypnotic one that goes close to mind blowing.
Vocals fits good and i enjoyed the lyrics as well.
In a way it has a kind of the 80´s feeling to me and thats always something cool
Hey joe, thank you for the kind words on this piece! "Stop it, I can['t handle anymore" sort of sums up how I've been feeling in reaction to say many aspects of life lately, so I appreciate that it shows through. Aggressive and hypnotic were both part of what I was aiming for. I have trouble not bringing psy/goa trance influences into most things lately, I find that it makes the time spent working on the music more enjoyable as well as making it disappear as it happens. Very happy with how some of the hardware based recordings turned out on this. Happy that the lyrics were okay, they were mostly written in two sessions about nine months apart... influenced by different situations, but working together for the mood. I always dig 80s sounding stuff as well, so thank you for that comment. I appreciate all your support!
hey. yes, it was very heavy-sounding to me at very first listening. I love the powerful synth drum sound in here but still 'there's a limit in my (our) mind'.
'there's no amoooouuunt to my miiiiiiind' (lyrics by Oceanically) anyway.
It is so different from my vision. I want more of an empty free space!
Beside all that (which is a true looperman illusion) I enjoyed your creation!
Thank you for being the first to listen and comment on this song! You can always be relied on for valuable feedback and continued interest. "I want more of an empty free space!" - regarding this, I feel exactly the same way. The "limit" I speak of relates to the limits we set for ourselves, plus the limits placed on us by society, laws, and expectations. Then there are the physical limitations of the organ we call the brain. The limits I speak of are greatly enhanced by the close quarters of the human condition in this ghetto we call the earth. We all have our little boxes with fences around them (if we're lucky, sadly) - we are placed in position which forces us to defend these things with our lives and honor. Since not all of us value the same things, there arises dispute, and the limits of law come into play. This is all in our mind, but is constantly reinforced by external circumstances (which are in other's minds). Hope that clarifies my position a little. I'm happy you enjoyed listening and I value your comments!
Love this sound. To me it feels like hearing a positive punk/electro track for the first time in my life :-). Like the vocals aswell as they make the track very vivid.
Hey mudhoen, thank you very much for the uplifting comment! I'm really happy I was able to finish this one, and maintain the positive feeling. Not as easy as it seemed. I appreciate you listening and leaving your words!
Spiv I swear if there was such a thing as the Looperman Hall of Fame you'd be one of the first to be inducted haha. No but seriously the music is really playful and engaging. It reminds me of my days of mario kart haha. Great musical production and lyrics are cool too.
You do have some of the more interesting tracks especially since you make all your sounds. You tread areas I would never go and it results in interesting and entertaining music.
Great Work.
Hey OmarMuk, very nice to hear from you on this piece. You're too kind with your praise! I remember playing Mario Kart a bit back a while, though I was more fond of earlier consoles. SNES did have some sweet music though. Thank you for the compliments on the sounds used. One of my most comforting feelings in life is listening to one of my songs, and thinking "I have no idea how I made that sound." When my headphones on my head, I am in a different world. Thank you for stopping by!
hi again. this is very minimal (and tribal). that weird uuuu vocal sound around 0:30 reminded me of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWUTYcRm9Vo I think the feel on the vocal is different - I do not mean really the actual 'fuck you' message but the way you sing here is very special. Definitely it sounds different from your current vocal productions.
At some point of in the near future I will be exploring synths a little bit further, maybe I will come up with interesting sounds which may fit your minimal visions eventually, who knows... will you be interested in making a kind of a 'collab' then? that might be something experimental - I am thinking of a very raw kind of synthesizer explorations, not really proper 'songs'...
I was trying to reply to this a few minutes ago when I got an unpleasant knock at the door, not someone who I want to answer to. But here I am again! I appreciate your comments on an older track of mine. Still happy with the circuit bent stuff on hear, and the idea of the words. I would be very happy to collaborate with sometime, especially if it's closer to winter. As an organic gardener, my summers get kind of crazy sometimes. Thank you again for your words, and patience while a waited to reply.
Thank you for the positive comment on this intentionally positive song! I enjoy helping people be happy at least as much as I enjoy "shaking things up." I'm not really into children, but I do like to see them happy and playing... adults too! Your listen and comment pleases me, so thank you again!
Groovy piece, nice beat, loving the vocals, they make the track I think, great instrumental as well, but really loving the vocals here, nice synths, very enjoyable listen...Fav...Peace n Respect my friend...Mos...
Hey Mos, thank you for the kind comment on this track! I'm very happy with how it turned out. The lyrics make me happy because they induce people who care about me to be concerned... I know that is very mean, but it wasn't intended. I've been combining different ideas into single songs lately, and the parts that concern people are only half personal, and the other half microcosmic. Also I'm happy that this song entices people to turn it up, as opposed to down! Appreciate you listening my friend!
Wow. This is the happiest track I've heard here in a long time. Maybe ever.
Very bouncy and infectious. Impossible to be angry while listening to this track. This will now be stuck in my head for the rest of the evening. I can't fire up my DAW now. Impossible to write something when another thing is stuck in my head.
It's been a while since I listened to anything from you, only because electronic is not my kind of thing, but thought I would check this out. Very glad I did. Fixed my mood.
Hey Evan, it's cool to hear from you on this track! Your comment pleases me, as I made a promise to myself to make my next album considerable more positive than the last one. "Impossible to be angry while listening to this track." I can't help but laugh when reading that, because I was immersed in anger most of the time I was working on this one. It's cool to hear that it didn't contaminate my art! It's better to be stuck in the head than to have your head stuck. I realize we make different sorts of music, but I appreciate you leaving your comfort zone for a few minutes. I'm fairly proud of this one, and it's 2 plays away from 1000 now! Thank you, and I hope that you are well!
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
The biggest compliment I can give this track is it is all Spivkurl. I might be wrong but IMO, Spiv is one of those artists where there might not be a middle ground. He puts his stamp on everything from his distinct vocal style with his thought provoking lyrics to his true musicianship in the way he arranges his compositions. And of course, the true analogue instrumentation is brilliant. I'm a big fan!
Thanks for this Pat. Really enjoyed it :)
RW
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Mix is clear. At first it sounded like a barbie track.
Sounds cool, but I'm not into such genres so it would be rude if I say something wrong :)
Good work bro!! :)
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
The synths and sounds you got going are well played out and catchy but the glitchy synth that comes and goes at around the 1:09, 2:34, etc sounds out of place. But other than that you did an awesome job making all the synths work with each other in all ranges. It definitely sounds complete and the synth play/solo at the 3:01 mixes things up and keeps things interesting which is necessary for long tracks. You also got some cool transition synths going on but I didnt catch it until the 3rd or 4rth time of listening because it gets caught up behind the other synths (Yes this track has an usual addiction).
The vocals are not that unusual. It really fits the lyrics which are quite interesting and uncertain yet somehow hopeful if that makes any sense haha Its what I got out of it. The "we are the future" vocals at 1:46 feels like it comes too soon. Maybe having it come in a sec or so later can solve that but then again that may be just me since no one said anything about it.
Anyway Spiv I gotta hand it to you cuz overall this track is really really good, honestly listened to this countless times. Excuse my extra long review and critque but I just feel like if some areas in the track are improved it will be one of the most exceptional tracks on here because of your very unique style.
Props
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
Clubbing and Factory records come to mind Manchester England 1979.
Bands like Joy Division, New Order, Slaughter and the Dogs Iggy Pop and something that feels like Van Der Graff Generator in there.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
Took me to the Hacienda club Manchester ... all music drugs and guns ... very tense very high.
All in the past.
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
unusual vocals which actually work here..
the synths and arps are catchy good
good work
TJ
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Gramo/Neo
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Cheers,
Scott
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and yes, there is a bit of Bowie in the vocals...great! In the 'fav' it goes!:)
Compliments______Orlando
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
It does sound influenced by it but different in it's own way, very original.
I like the sounds you used through the track.
As for the vocals although very interesting and i honestly like them specially the lyrics, in my humble opinion don't fit this particular kind of music, personally i would prefer the sound without it but that's just my opinion, having said that hats off to you for getting out of the norm to bring us something different and unexpected.
Those synths you bring around 3:02 are amazing, very cool indeed and that Goa Trance type lead at 3:40 and again towards the end is really good.
Overall is a tricky track with lots of interesting stuff going on.
Well done
BestRegards
WB
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
Mate this is amazing, very dancy piece, love the vocals, this very different for you my friend, totally loving this one, sounds like a galloping bass line?, under laying the piece, love it what ever it is, your vocals in this really do sound very much David Bowie sound, great synths, think I have just found my all time fav piece of yours my friend, brilliant vibe coming from this one, big statement as you know I really enjoy all your works but this one is a very special piece...Yep ALL TIME fav track mate...Mosaic...Rarely download mate but would download if available...Mos...
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
Dynamic and powerfull and also a little bit agressive and hypnotic and on some places near to the border to -stop it, i can´t handle it anymore- i love that a lot. Nice speed and extreme cool synth sounds around. I love this nerve, hypnotic one that goes close to mind blowing.
Vocals fits good and i enjoyed the lyrics as well.
In a way it has a kind of the 80´s feeling to me and thats always something cool
geiles teil!
stay tuned
joe
on Snake In The Past by Spivkurl
'there's no amoooouuunt to my miiiiiiind' (lyrics by Oceanically) anyway.
It is so different from my vision. I want more of an empty free space!
Beside all that (which is a true looperman illusion) I enjoyed your creation!
Alex
on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
You do have some of the more interesting tracks especially since you make all your sounds. You tread areas I would never go and it results in interesting and entertaining music.
Great Work.
on Fuck You by Spivkurl
At some point of in the near future I will be exploring synths a little bit further, maybe I will come up with interesting sounds which may fit your minimal visions eventually, who knows... will you be interested in making a kind of a 'collab' then? that might be something experimental - I am thinking of a very raw kind of synthesizer explorations, not really proper 'songs'...
all in all this is simple but powerful.
best to you, Alex
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It shows out the hapiness and fun of the person listening to it :3
Great job!
on Lovin It by Spivkurl
Groovy piece, nice beat, loving the vocals, they make the track I think, great instrumental as well, but really loving the vocals here, nice synths, very enjoyable listen...Fav...Peace n Respect my friend...Mos...
on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
Very bouncy and infectious. Impossible to be angry while listening to this track. This will now be stuck in my head for the rest of the evening. I can't fire up my DAW now. Impossible to write something when another thing is stuck in my head.
It's been a while since I listened to anything from you, only because electronic is not my kind of thing, but thought I would check this out. Very glad I did. Fixed my mood.
Evan