bitronix

Good work, great Drop, watch the repetitive measures that go on a little to long, otherwise keep at it maestro!
Cru

nice track

Overall it's a good concept. However, the long sections, make it feel drawn out. You could cut all these sections in half.

Now let's talk about that drop! Overall it's a really good concept and I can't wait to see what it sounds like once it's finished.

Nice little melody you got going on from the beginning. Really some cool vibes here. The drop is great, adds some punch to the whole track.
Can definitely see some cool vocals on it, hope you'll figure something out.
Thanks for sharing !

Pretty cool sounding. Simple. The drop kinda has some OMFG vibes to it. I like it. Good work.

pretty awesome track 2D2R that break tho, smashing lol... sending support vibes! keep it up.

That is a cool track the vocalist on the track would fit perfectly and if that us you then well done

Like an advanced chiptune track with nice sidechains. pleasant listen and journey you have created.
Cru

Love the emotion and feeling of this. Had this crazy fun idea to do a hip hop r n b album over 8 bit. I feel like this fits that mold. Would you be alright with us putting some vocals on this?

Hi,
Nice track. Thought it could do with a little bit more 'interest'in the intro. The wind effects were nice.....but not enough. IMO :))
Nice build, really good melodies. Enjoyed listening to this....thx:

reminiscing the past I see... (did I spell it correctly? hahaha) Anyways, Its a nice track and the structure.... Its kind of ok?? but the end really sums up the whole track so... Its still great! Keep it up!

-ReonN

I really enjoy this oh so much man ¡¡ nice tune ... sounds great to me ¡¡

Congrats

I like this but like the 2nd half much better. For me, that's when the tune really comes alive and engages my ears and mind. Something to think about, for what it's worth, is more of a verse/chorus/verse/chorus structure, where you get some of that 2nd half goodness early on and then return to it later. That's kind of the hook of the song so that way you'd hook people faster. Anyway, I really like the 2nd half a lot.

this is really nice, i like the 2nd part of the song, and who knows someday someone can put lyrics to this, i think it could be good if done properly

but good song all the same, well done, very nice

fairly good, i like that piano it's nice and so is the ending, maybe you can check some of my electronic tracks too :)

i really like this and its a bit different to the usual tracks here on lopperman which has me thinking i need to to concentrate more on my melody lines. (which Metabolic has already commented on.) I like the way the melody develops into a swell really well done i also like the ending which is sweet and poignant. thanks and best regards Robbie.

Play with the velocities (and maybe pitch too) of the first snares, I think it'll bring some extra life to that first section.

If I was in a lighter mood I would enjoy this more, I'll come back when I am.

My mind is imagining a sidechained sub (quiet to loud kinda effect) kind of similar to what you have but a littler more slippery if that makes sense.

I'm enjoying the progression of the melodies, rare in electronic music.

I'll be keeping my eye out for more of your tracks.

Keep it up dude

I enjoyed this tune that started with some emotions and deep thoughts, before it filled up with memories of the journey you took, then the parting of ways at the end, the emotions coming back. Great work buddy.

Did not like the opening but then this magical tune appeared and I was able to leave the opening behind.
But then I get to the ending and suddenly the opening was perfect.
Great tune very well put together.

Nicee broo , a very good mood songg ;-))

I have never heard anything like this before.
Is there stuff like this out there?
Excellent job.
Very enjoyable experience and to be honesyt I hear no flaws.
This place and the people here never cease to amaze me with the quality of stuff that gets produced.
Very different for me this one and I like that.
Same old same old gets a bit boring.
Great little number.

I really like the song. Only criticism is I think the filter you put on his voice overstays it's welcome after a while. But overall great track.

nice take very fresh

Every song that uses sidechaining and is about anime or something cute is automatically a future genre ;)
I think your song has a different vibe. I loved the vocals!The 'wah' and 'wooh' let me to believe that it has more a trap vibe. Including the trap high hat rhythm that you use. So... Trap?

Have you recorded the piano yourself? It really fits with the song! While writing this comment, I have listened to the song like 3 times now. So it is really good. Fave from me :)
Go on and continue doing cool stuff.

-Tom