bitronix

I really like the changes in the song, good dynamics. At the beginning and again at 1:47 I liked the organ that gets louder. Wished the vocals were a bit louder in the mix, they were quite good. Catchy electronic pop song, very radio friendly sound!

Wayne

Very slick and modern, although I was half expecting you to burst more into 'song', but I guess that would have completely altered the feel.

Really enjoyed it, and thanks for sharing :)

This an amazing track and I don't think it needs rapping on just think the vocals need to stop fading and brought forward a little more.

Love it
Steve

Decent song except the vocals and maybe the sidechain in the drop for the kick to come out could be better.

Hey 2D2R, I really like the start with the piano and love how you changed the vibe of this track to electro in such a short time span. Your vocals sounds great on this and only added to the instrumental that much more. You say your vocals suck, guess they were right when they said we are our own worst critic. I think they really work with this track even with the autotune and that's saying a lot considering I normally hate autotune.

Anyways very nice work and hope to hear your vocals on more tracks in the future.

2d2r I would not screw this song rapping on it you have a super voice fits this song perfectly I simply love this song BRAVO don't doubt your voice you have talent faved. Best regards.

Please don't ruin this fine tune with raps!
This is sounding really good.
Quality stuff.

Hello,
your voice permite this track to become an electro pop song! your voice is not so bad, i don't know why you have doubts about it! your work is solid and i'm not sure rap will add something better in this track! i prefer like it

Bleep

So far so good. I can't wait to hear the mixed version.

I really like the music.
I'm no judge of vocalists really as I'm a mostly instrumental lover but it doesn't sound that bad apart from vanishing into the distance at some points. The music is fantastic.

I really like this actually haha.. I'd rap on it tbh.

Cool as heck synthesis going on in this piece, and like others have mentioned - the drop is cool. I'm not big into drops in general, but with some songs, that is what it is all about! It works when I am a vodka shot and two loko's to the wind.

Very enjoyable frequency balance going on here, and I like it that the song made me want to turn up the volume. I take that as a good sign in most cases, since many songs (and TV shows and films and youtube videos) make me want to turn my system OFF. You've got the dynamics and the punch, and you didn't overdo it in any way.

Very fun stuff! Simple but also deep, kind of like a modern form of punk. Super cool and faved!

Good work, great Drop, watch the repetitive measures that go on a little to long, otherwise keep at it maestro!
Cru

nice track

Overall it's a good concept. However, the long sections, make it feel drawn out. You could cut all these sections in half.

Now let's talk about that drop! Overall it's a really good concept and I can't wait to see what it sounds like once it's finished.

Nice little melody you got going on from the beginning. Really some cool vibes here. The drop is great, adds some punch to the whole track.
Can definitely see some cool vocals on it, hope you'll figure something out.
Thanks for sharing !

Pretty cool sounding. Simple. The drop kinda has some OMFG vibes to it. I like it. Good work.

pretty awesome track 2D2R that break tho, smashing lol... sending support vibes! keep it up.

That is a cool track the vocalist on the track would fit perfectly and if that us you then well done

Like an advanced chiptune track with nice sidechains. pleasant listen and journey you have created.
Cru

Love the emotion and feeling of this. Had this crazy fun idea to do a hip hop r n b album over 8 bit. I feel like this fits that mold. Would you be alright with us putting some vocals on this?

Hi,
Nice track. Thought it could do with a little bit more 'interest'in the intro. The wind effects were nice.....but not enough. IMO :))
Nice build, really good melodies. Enjoyed listening to this....thx:

reminiscing the past I see... (did I spell it correctly? hahaha) Anyways, Its a nice track and the structure.... Its kind of ok?? but the end really sums up the whole track so... Its still great! Keep it up!

-ReonN

I really enjoy this oh so much man ¡¡ nice tune ... sounds great to me ¡¡

Congrats

I like this but like the 2nd half much better. For me, that's when the tune really comes alive and engages my ears and mind. Something to think about, for what it's worth, is more of a verse/chorus/verse/chorus structure, where you get some of that 2nd half goodness early on and then return to it later. That's kind of the hook of the song so that way you'd hook people faster. Anyway, I really like the 2nd half a lot.