The Intro was so cool, it has a (very slight) chiptune like quality, as my colleagues have stated, a video game-like quality, but it´s damn good. Super positive and sweet upbeat song and really creative. The mix is really good as well. But it also reminds me of a bit of the style I have heard on Travel v-logs lately. (ie, Kara n Nate). Great work, super impressed.
Cru
Yo, thanks man! I really did not expect anyone (but you're not the only one) to say it's videogame-like, though it's a really big compliment for me since I guess I found my style as a producer (since my other track in this album is chiptune).
Vintage electro song very pleasant to listen to. In my opinion, the synthetically created voice is an added value in a piece of this type. In the rare cases where I use human voices in my songs, I always use synthetic voices because this gives a strange feeling of non-human perfection that I really like. For these reasons I like your song as it is.
This sounds so genuine, so heartfelt, and true. Listening to all your other tracks, I see that this simpler cleaner acoustic style of music just fits your vocals to a tee. You could crank out a ton of these and be a star. Better than a lot of what I hear on the radio.
Hey man/woman! Since you have two separate comments, I'll just have to respond to this one.
Thanks for the feedback! I did try and make this song as a joke at the first time I was making it but hearing it throughout my production, it kinda pulled me to making it a tad-bit better than a "joke" lol
I could try lengthening the song, but that would just beat the idea of it as a joke. What I mean by a "joke" is that I just wanna make it very short and really not that good at the mixing and mastering aspect of the song.
Again, thanks for the precious words you gave! I never knew this simple song I made could hit someone THAT hard. I might make more kinds of songs like these when I get the inspirations I need. Cheers!
I love this song. The vocals are amazing and think all the musical elements are perfect. I would maybe tweak the transitions at 0:09 and at 1:10 which also could lead to lengthening the track a bit. But this song gives me a heavy case of the feels, more than just about anything else on this site.
Hi buddy I would like to master this song for you of course free I promise you that I will bring the magic into the song if you should be interested write me
Heya! I would LOVE to have you master this track but I already have my brother, which is kinda practical and easier since he's just living with me in one house. Thanks for the offer anyway! It's an honor.
Hi buddy I would like to master this song for you of course free I promise you that I will bring the magic into the song if you should be interested write me
Well I came up with something on spot cause there’s space in between I’ll credit the snippet and I rarely get that initial starting spark with uploads on here anymore and just add it to freestyle pile no master or anything
I’m excited cause it’s been a forevers forever and have equipment in a locked up secure stable place
Acapellas will be this releasing month from me
Keep rocking
Heya! I'll just reply to this comment as response to the three comments you made lol
First of all, thanks for listening! Not many people dig THAT deep beneath the lyrics of my songs xD The song basically just means how love is mysterious, how it makes someone anxious, and how it is so unpredictable. It's like risking something, just to get what you want, or what you'll need in the end.
Second, duet or a collab is great! But I'm not socially active so collaborating with me would be a bad idea xD Apologies!
Lastly, thanks again for listening! Your enthusiasm and interest in this song lightened up my day! Cheers!
When I heard this I heard way different lyrics..
I read the lyrice and maybe it can be a duality meaning song how I heard it? Like you do your mindset and the woman has her mindset about lasting long to reassure you then they come together in final verse of lasting long
Sound good!! just a little mixing and mastering and maybe some compression on a few of the super loud instruments. you have a awesome voice, fits very well with the music, awesome work 2D2R!
Yo 2D2R good to hear from you man!! amazing track you have right here, need a bit of mixing and mastering stuff so it can all "fit" better... i loved the vocals btw gave me a post malone feeling.
Music is not exactly my style, by the way i really enjoyed that piano line... in your place i would make a better construction of the song, keeping the sad feeling of that piano line. The final electronic sounds a bit "not fitting" (in my modest opinion), because is too strong, matched with all the rest. Anyway, vocals seems to be up-and-coming.
fl studio 12.5 fudged me up, therefore i had to downgrade to 12.2.
the problem is, this project was made on 12.5, and fl studio doesnt support backward compatibility, making me not able to access this project until i upgrade again to 12.5
so yeah, maybe i'll do an instrumental w/ vocal version of this song.
I think you've got a good start to a song here. Nice to hear some lyrical/vocal work by you!
The synthetic melodies on this sound quite familiar. I can't quite say that this is a good thing, but if you were going for sounding like your influences... then I'd say you nailed it!
I could see this going in a glitchy complextro frenzy after the drop. For my ears, it would add a lot of interest to the song. Curious where you will take it!
Okay, I am using the word processor this time, so that nothing gets lost!
I can't believe the feeling that finding this song has given me today... It is an unbelievable presence to say the least! I find it hard to be as expressive as I was in the partially lost reply to your comment on my song.
Let me start by saying this... I heard a new Nine Inch Nails song this morning, for the first tine in a couple of years. I had a bland, take it or leave it reponse, even though I've been a fan for over twenty-five years. This song you've created had a much more fulfilling effect on me, and I found it potent and deep.
Please keep writing songs for yourself, and performing them, as you have so much potential as a songwriter/performer! You've created a bed for us to lay down in, and you have changed the sheets first.
I used autotune for years, before swearing off anything artificial, except drugs. It only ever helped my image and acceptance. Just like makeup, it changed people's image of me. Don't worry about using a tool of our trade, as that is what tools are for.
You sound great, and this song is a must fave and DL! I thank you for sharing, and I lament the loss of my complete response to your comment on my song.
Your words are really inspiring xD
I really don't know how to react to this kind of appreciation, but all I can say is a huge thanks! It really motivates me to do more music.
And about your song, I did NOT noticed that PB and Grace was uploaded a year ago, my bad so it's not that much of a problem!
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Cru
Again, thanks! Stay safe.
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Thanks for the thoughts, stay safe!
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Thanks for the feedback! I did try and make this song as a joke at the first time I was making it but hearing it throughout my production, it kinda pulled me to making it a tad-bit better than a "joke" lol
I could try lengthening the song, but that would just beat the idea of it as a joke. What I mean by a "joke" is that I just wanna make it very short and really not that good at the mixing and mastering aspect of the song.
Again, thanks for the precious words you gave! I never knew this simple song I made could hit someone THAT hard. I might make more kinds of songs like these when I get the inspirations I need. Cheers!
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I’m excited cause it’s been a forevers forever and have equipment in a locked up secure stable place
Acapellas will be this releasing month from me
Keep rocking
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on Last Long by bitronix
handshake, Danke
Thanks for the awesome remarks, cheers!
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Thanks!
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First of all, thanks for listening! Not many people dig THAT deep beneath the lyrics of my songs xD The song basically just means how love is mysterious, how it makes someone anxious, and how it is so unpredictable. It's like risking something, just to get what you want, or what you'll need in the end.
Second, duet or a collab is great! But I'm not socially active so collaborating with me would be a bad idea xD Apologies!
Lastly, thanks again for listening! Your enthusiasm and interest in this song lightened up my day! Cheers!
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on Last Long by bitronix
I read the lyrice and maybe it can be a duality meaning song how I heard it? Like you do your mindset and the woman has her mindset about lasting long to reassure you then they come together in final verse of lasting long
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thanks!!!
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thanks!!!!
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Cheers!!
thanks a bunch!
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the problem is, this project was made on 12.5, and fl studio doesnt support backward compatibility, making me not able to access this project until i upgrade again to 12.5
so yeah, maybe i'll do an instrumental w/ vocal version of this song.
thanks for the honest feedback!
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The synthetic melodies on this sound quite familiar. I can't quite say that this is a good thing, but if you were going for sounding like your influences... then I'd say you nailed it!
I could see this going in a glitchy complextro frenzy after the drop. For my ears, it would add a lot of interest to the song. Curious where you will take it!
Thanks for sharing your work with us!
Sorry for the very late reply!!!
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I can't believe the feeling that finding this song has given me today... It is an unbelievable presence to say the least! I find it hard to be as expressive as I was in the partially lost reply to your comment on my song.
Let me start by saying this... I heard a new Nine Inch Nails song this morning, for the first tine in a couple of years. I had a bland, take it or leave it reponse, even though I've been a fan for over twenty-five years. This song you've created had a much more fulfilling effect on me, and I found it potent and deep.
Please keep writing songs for yourself, and performing them, as you have so much potential as a songwriter/performer! You've created a bed for us to lay down in, and you have changed the sheets first.
I used autotune for years, before swearing off anything artificial, except drugs. It only ever helped my image and acceptance. Just like makeup, it changed people's image of me. Don't worry about using a tool of our trade, as that is what tools are for.
You sound great, and this song is a must fave and DL! I thank you for sharing, and I lament the loss of my complete response to your comment on my song.
I really don't know how to react to this kind of appreciation, but all I can say is a huge thanks! It really motivates me to do more music.
And about your song, I did NOT noticed that PB and Grace was uploaded a year ago, my bad so it's not that much of a problem!
Again, thank you so much Sir Spiv!
Cheers