RayKoefoed

Hi Ray,
I already loved your instrumental tracks but I think your songs really take another dimension with your vocals.They're more direct,catchy and efficient:this one is already stuck in my head.
Thanks for posting the link,I'll be checking your lyrics
I faved and downloaded this one.
Great music
French Kid

Hey I checked out a few of your tracks, and you're honing this interesting fusion of dark electro, industrial (almost gothic) and new wave. For a guy recording at home with a mic that probably doesn't cost more that $199 the vocals sound excellent. Your songwriting is getting much better, this is possibly your most coherent track.

I do have a couple of suggestions. I would add some more harmonic structure to your songs. In this song the bass synth stays on the tonic or "home" note through the whole thing, while the higher distorted synth sticks to one chord. It's driving, but for vocally-based song, harmonic progression really sells the package. Practice bouncing between two chords in a verse and a chorus section, (pitch shifting samples is a nice way to do this). You're probably going for pretty simple, powerful industrial song structures so minimal movement is necessary, but it really makes the difference between a musical idea and a developed song. Study how your favorite artists build pop-structured songs. They are made of simple repeated structures with chords or chord progressions in sections: A-A-B-A-A-B or A-B-A-A-B-C-A for example. Also when it comes to "proofreading" and mixing tracks, I have the same problem of being easily overwhelmed and quickly obsessed by little details. I find that when I start any audio project it's easiest to attack it in layers, and peel them off one at a time like an onion. First I'll get the samples right, then I'll lay them down and draft the structure, then I'll work on transitions, then mix, recheck, mix again, etc. Working on tasks of one type at a time and in logical order keeps me on track.

wow ur just as wacky as me with the song titles,great vibes from the track,you have great midi skills with the guitar riff in great harmony too.
choir is not bad fits really well with the theme which by the way kinda has a outer space cowboy feel

this song sounds like im stuck in a box with clowns who like waffles LOL

its really catchy good production.

Incredible work guys!! Vocals would make this track absolutely smashing. I love the synths in this song. They all go so well together. Favoriting.

I just kept envisioning a bunch of goth kids in a waffle house while listening. Not too many songs about waffles around(first one I've heard lol), but sounded great. Cheers :)

im sooo hungery rite now, and strangely this is yummy! nice work!

i love this.
that "yum" accent is delicious [no pun intended]. i adore the lyrics. this track would be just as solid as an industrial instrumental. the juxtoposition of the lyrics and the beat is beyond creative. it makes me want to slap someone in the face...with a plate of piping hot, fully loaded Belgains. the synth work is divine. production value is top notch.
...i need to go get breakfast.
kudos!

Hi Ray,
It seems this one is echoing Koukotsu's Aluminium Pancakes,lol!Your track is just fantastic,your sound is so powerful and the lyrics are among the best I've heard on this site.Love this waffle eating frenzy you describe and illustrate with your music and singing!
Now I 'll never eat a waffle the way I used to
Cheers
French Kid

Angry waffles with attitude,lol!! Great job throwing this together quickly, very creative! I've heard plenty of great potato songs in my day but not many waffle songs, pretty cool!

Gotta dl and fav!

Wayne

max energy man, i like the screaming and the joy the track brings to the feet, if not the head. u know what i mean right? ehehehe. keep em coming.

DextDee

This song kix serious butt, Ray, even if it IS about waffles. The beat drives hard and the bassline is wicked, dude. One of the best songs I've heard in a long time. Kudos, bro.

Waaaaaaaaaaaafllllllllllllllllleeeeeeees!I need some waffles! This is the best song about waffles ever made.

Hi Ray,
I think you got a great track here,some NIN feel to it.Your music is so powerful and I'm glad you to hear you singing on that one.
French Kid

that's a real good track ... very 80's regarding the sounds ...
and pretty energetic ...
some lower frequencies would be a good addition imo, but that's no must, more a matter of taste ...
all in all it's a very solid production, very tight, with great vocal work and good arrangement ... great work so far!!

peace, rei

Creepy track, you have the atmospherics down well but I would throw some more effects on that percussion, it's a bit flat

Very cool , real trippy i liked to listen it , but it is so short be a trance track.
peace

I have a rule.If i decided to use a pella for my track, definitely i don't listen any track , used it.It can effected to my subconscious.Now i am listening it 2 nd time.Really good job my friend.I so liked to listen it.Favd.
peace

sweet track i was wondering about the lyrics maybe i will try them out

this track be great, man why did not valve get you into their music division?

lol, I just did another version of this and did not listen to the original before doing it, mine has that great vibe you have here, your version is stunning, full of emotion, great job but your vocals are the star for sure, I wont tell you about my version that only I think I preserved the mood you had when you did this. Can't wait to hear from you so I can send you my version and get your feedback.

Sounds good to me, maybe you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. Remember the golden rule, if it sounds good it is good. This sounds good ;-)

john59

Ah, man. I love this. It doesn't need vocals to be awesome. It's got personality, it's got life, and it's got a damn backbone.

You did a phenomenal job, and it was a pleasure working with you. You're not just a collab partner, you're a friend. Again I say bravo to you sir, on making something crazy good.

reminds me of tiesto nice work

Its a really clean production man. Good job, a little more compression on the drums would be nice but I like what you've done. Keep it up.