best compliment i've gotten in all the years i've been a musician. i'm really glad you enjoyed it. The beat spoke to me and i immediately let it take over.
check out my page. i have a bunch of pieces to listen to. i hope you enjoy them.
you know that I come from chill and rock but I specially like your rap style all the time...this track is cool too and I know that in this genre the groovy and the speech is the most important part but this time I feel that the minimal music (synths) are way back in the mix...
thanks so much for the listen. after listening to all of your feedback and listening to the song again a few times, i am going to work on some hats this weekend and possibly track some vocals.
This Track Is Fairly Good Right Now, But Here's My Take. Even Though It's Short Maybe Add Some Transitions Between Verse, Hook, Chorus You Know. To Fill It Up Add Some Bass To It. I Might Also Add Some Strings((Chords Or A Melody)). Then Some Hi Hats Might Help Add More To The Rap Feel You're Approaching. Nevertheless This Will Be A Great Production With A Little More Work. Also, If You Wouldn't Checking Out My Track & Providing Some Feedback I'd Appreciate That. One Love
thanks for the listen and the feedback. i really appreciate it. i am going to add some transitions between verse and chorus by building off of the existing bass lines & drums, but i want to keep it as minimal as possible as far as 'body' is concerned. i was thinking of going with some strings to beef it up in certain spots, but i felt it would take away from the vision, and the vision was to add a pulsing soundtrack to what will absolutely be a verbal onslaught. i am going to play with some hat sounds and see if i can find anything that will fit with the whole vibe of the track.
and i am definitely going to check out some of your work. Bless.
Thought check out this one for you, spotted in featured, Rap not my genre so no major feedback genre wise sorry, is that you on the vocal? If so one of the better sounding vocals I have heard in rap tracks that I have taken a notice of in the past, not that I review many mind you, Surprising I really enjoyed this track considering not one of my fav genre's, so that's a big thumbs up to you mate...Fav...Peace n respect mate...mosaic...
Nice beat and flow bro.Vocals sounds like they are panned hard left, which kind of detach it from the beat, but maybe that was your plan..but nice work bro.
Im actually doing a total rewrite on at least 1/3 of the verse. i also noticed that i duplicated a track that was panned and i dint level it out. 2nd version should be a lot better. thanks for the listen brother.
Thanks for all the feedback, and the producer of the beat is still newer and learning but has been getting better and better and I just like something about his sounds, they seem to click with me. Hopefully we can figure something out to make this a full, complete track ! :)
I was reading your response to Static Nomad on EQ and a word of advice: it is usually not recommended to EQ an instrument solo. Something that sounds great on its own may not sit well when put into a cohesive mix with other instruemnts. I usually tend to EQ by group: guitars, synths/pads/strings/etc and make sure each section has its own part of the frequency spectrum it "dominates." This also helps to clean up the sound. For instance, you dont want unneeded high frequencies from my bass affecting my guitars so I'd trim off all the higher end on the bass and trim off some of the lower end of my guitars - now, the bass is not affected by the guitars and vice verse - each instrument has its place.
i cant believe i didnt see this post. thanks so much brother. it was a pleasure spitting on this beat. it was also a pleasure blessing the beat you sent. i cant wait to do more work.
You know Im a big fan of your stuff man and this doesn't disappoint! One of the best here on the loop seriously. Keep grinding and dropping these simply amazing tracks!
dude, thanks so much for the best compliment i've gotten since being on this site. this is the best time of year for me to start writing, and that track was the perfect way to set off my creative period this year.
Thanks, Danke! i really appreciate your input. i'm glad you enjoyed this track. this is definitely one of my favorite songs since i've joined Looperman.
hahahaha yeah man, definitely cut the track before the mic hit the floor. I'm so glad you were able to vibe to this one. it really was a pleasure to spit over that beat.
on Rock with me by wordybum
Flow 10
Diction 10
Projection 10
Lyrics 10
Beat 10
Been a while since I've seen an underground rapper with an 11/10 song
best compliment i've gotten in all the years i've been a musician. i'm really glad you enjoyed it. The beat spoke to me and i immediately let it take over.
check out my page. i have a bunch of pieces to listen to. i hope you enjoy them.
Bless.
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you tapped into the collective consciousness we rappin bout some of the same shit
much love brother
feel free to check out my page. enjoy.
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you know that I come from chill and rock but I specially like your rap style all the time...this track is cool too and I know that in this genre the groovy and the speech is the most important part but this time I feel that the minimal music (synths) are way back in the mix...
on my humble opinion, handshake, Danke
Thanks so much for listening and giving the kind words.
Bless.
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though if it were me, I'd pump up those hi hats to take up some space in the high end
Bless.
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- Billion
and i am definitely going to check out some of your work. Bless.
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sounds like a track u put in some scary game xD
cheers.
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Thought check out this one for you, spotted in featured, Rap not my genre so no major feedback genre wise sorry, is that you on the vocal? If so one of the better sounding vocals I have heard in rap tracks that I have taken a notice of in the past, not that I review many mind you, Surprising I really enjoyed this track considering not one of my fav genre's, so that's a big thumbs up to you mate...Fav...Peace n respect mate...mosaic...
Bless.
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Just a thought :)
Brado
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Bless.
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You know Im a big fan of your stuff man and this doesn't disappoint! One of the best here on the loop seriously. Keep grinding and dropping these simply amazing tracks!
thanks again for the support, my brother!
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Huge number, huge rapping, awesome production!
All my hats off, Dankr
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I hope he gets to listen to this song soon.
Great work.
Nelson
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