Well I faved and DLed this track and I feel guilty if I didn't leave some feedback as well lol.
But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.
You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.
thanks so much again for the support and kind words, Omar. I've been getting tons of great feedback as of late and it just validates all of the hard work I've been putting in.
ever since i found Looperman i have re-imagined a few verses on different beats. it really is so fun to attack a new track with a verse i know forwards and backwards. it allows me to really get into the role and nail the verse.
Thanks brother. i really appreciate the kind words ad the support. i'm digging your style as well. i'm gonna wrap my head around some of your beats and see if i can muster something up for you.
First, I'd like to say I love the piano, sweeeeet! Second, I'm not sure why you have this labeled as "Adult Content." There doesn't seem to be anything in it that need censoring. Third, your vocals beneath Stacy's: I get that you want yours to hang underneath, but it gets lost in the mixed...a bit muddled sounding. Fourth, at around 2:56 I think it really needs to sound MASSIVE, like you're speaking down over the masses from a mountain top. I would definitely, though, bring your backing vocal more forward, and make them clearer.
thanks so much for the listen! i've been feeling really good lately, just spitting over anything classy and seeing what happens. this was a good one indeed.
thanks so much for the listen and the feedback! it was so fun to rhyme over this joint. i'm convinced that stephskillie is my favorite beat maker on this site.
The raps, flows and lyrics are top notch!!! Fire!!! but the voice on the second verse could go harder. The mix in general needs a lot of work. The backing track is also very weak ( in my opinion) Such good rap skills deserve better beats, thats all there is to that. If you want to keep the dreamy feel to the track, keep the piano and synthy sounds, but rework that beat. Theres a hazy sound on the rhythm in the first part of the track, thats super annoying. Listening to it a second time, I realize that the last part of the song is where you should be heading. Just look at how the waveform expands. All of this is just an opinion, so please dont take it too personally. Listening to this a 3rd time, makes me think a chorus/hook could work really well too....
ok.. thats my 2 cents
thanks a lot, brother. i actually added to this track with the last verse. the 1st verse and the music were on this site, posted by SJW. i added that last verse over the weekend.
Damn!!!!! Damn!!! Damn!!! REAL HIP HOP MUSIC!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO JUSTICE TO MY BEATS!!!!!! THE CHORUS IS A CLASSIC!! REAL UNDERGROUND STYLE!!
Wow man! Great instrumentation and powerful lyrics. Really liking this. The vocals are very clear and balanced greatly. From 4:29 and onward, there's no sound for me, though I'm sure it's intentional. Not sure. This has happened before with other's tracks. Nevertheless, great job man!
Dope track wordybum! Stephskillie came through with a ill beat and you lyrically delivered the heat! Your vocals sound a little lower in the beginning of your 1st verse compared to the rest of the track. Other then that the vocal mix sounds on point. But that's just my opinion. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
ez man , in my humble opinion ur vox sounds top notch m8
really clear n the mix when the synth join up kinda get a bit quieter but nothing major
u have a strong delivery
and im not sure how it could be improved to be honest
on Warrior Soul by wordybum
Cool rapping on that great groovy...it's of course not boring though I don't understand more than a half of your speech...:-)
Handshake, Danke
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But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.
You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.
Excellent Work!
ever since i found Looperman i have re-imagined a few verses on different beats. it really is so fun to attack a new track with a verse i know forwards and backwards. it allows me to really get into the role and nail the verse.
on Kill the messenger cypher Wordybum by wordybum
I keep on listening to your music for awhile and i am really enjoying it...
great work.
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bless.
on SJW colab ruffkins by wordybum
on Withering featuring Stacy Robinson by wordybum
First, I'd like to say I love the piano, sweeeeet! Second, I'm not sure why you have this labeled as "Adult Content." There doesn't seem to be anything in it that need censoring. Third, your vocals beneath Stacy's: I get that you want yours to hang underneath, but it gets lost in the mixed...a bit muddled sounding. Fourth, at around 2:56 I think it really needs to sound MASSIVE, like you're speaking down over the masses from a mountain top. I would definitely, though, bring your backing vocal more forward, and make them clearer.
Awesome track!
Love & Light,
Mykael
on Overdose flow by wordybum
Great work!
Hit me up if you need some beats, keep it up!
Bless.
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on Overdose flow by wordybum
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bless.
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thanks so much for listening!
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ok.. thats my 2 cents
thanks so much for the feedback!
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on Overdose flow by wordybum
.... that vibe is hard
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on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
bless.
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
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~GO
i think it was just you on the playback. mine ended right on time.
again, Thanks so much.
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
really clear n the mix when the synth join up kinda get a bit quieter but nothing major
u have a strong delivery
and im not sure how it could be improved to be honest
peace ski
klandestyne
bless
on Never coming home by wordybum
They kind of wash out the lows.
Other than that, well done!