Delivering the punchlines, the knockout blows haha love your jabs you got flexibility in you rhymes. Love the hook as well.
Hey you think you can send me an mp3 of the collab you did with SJW just the way you got it right now? Every time I play that song it feels likesomething is missing and that's your part plus I really like it the way you guys have it now.
Dude, thanks so much for the listen and the great compliments. I fucking loved rhyming over this. I built the best months ago and it finally started talking to me, so I talked back. I'm going to open up the SJW track so people can download it. I've gotten a lot of great feedback on it.
Well I faved and DLed this track and I feel guilty if I didn't leave some feedback as well lol.
But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.
You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.
thanks so much again for the support and kind words, Omar. I've been getting tons of great feedback as of late and it just validates all of the hard work I've been putting in.
ever since i found Looperman i have re-imagined a few verses on different beats. it really is so fun to attack a new track with a verse i know forwards and backwards. it allows me to really get into the role and nail the verse.
Thanks brother. i really appreciate the kind words ad the support. i'm digging your style as well. i'm gonna wrap my head around some of your beats and see if i can muster something up for you.
Damn I just commented on SJWs track page on how he killed it but you really added to this track as well. Both of your styles work really well together. Fire flow, commercial material, deep lyrics, insane delivery!
In my opinion I actually really liked that buildup with the track getting louder leading up to your part. It gave this sense of excitement like something about to blow the listener away is coming and thats exactly what you did.
Now it did get a little too loud but if you control it right the volume increase can work to your advantage in my humble opinion. But thats up to u guys.
So anyway its been a month, how far are you guys regarding a final version? Really looking forward to it.
i was hoping to get the reworked version from SJW but it hasn't happened. i'm going to extend my verse as well so there is no big gap between the verses. I've been really busy with life shit that i havent had the chance to get back in the lab. another week and i will redo this for download.
thanks so much for the kind words and support, brother.
First, I'd like to say I love the piano, sweeeeet! Second, I'm not sure why you have this labeled as "Adult Content." There doesn't seem to be anything in it that need censoring. Third, your vocals beneath Stacy's: I get that you want yours to hang underneath, but it gets lost in the mixed...a bit muddled sounding. Fourth, at around 2:56 I think it really needs to sound MASSIVE, like you're speaking down over the masses from a mountain top. I would definitely, though, bring your backing vocal more forward, and make them clearer.
Sounds good to me bro..yea the last part of the track is louder then the first part,but nothing a little tweek cant fix.I bet if cumulo99 heard this track on the radio with K west or Jay-z..he would swear it was the hardest shit he ever heard.Good work bro,and that flow...well you already know.
thanks so much, Brother. i was up at 1am or something and found this track. i really liked SJWs flow so i tried to do it justice. i'm glad it's being received well. he's going to redo his vocals and i will remix mine, as well as extend the verses to possibly 64 bars to fill in the empty pieces... also because i like to show off once in a while lol.
i'll hook the LM community up as soon as its done.
thanks so much for the listen! i've been feeling really good lately, just spitting over anything classy and seeing what happens. this was a good one indeed.
thanks so much for the listen and the feedback! it was so fun to rhyme over this joint. i'm convinced that stephskillie is my favorite beat maker on this site.
The raps, flows and lyrics are top notch!!! Fire!!! but the voice on the second verse could go harder. The mix in general needs a lot of work. The backing track is also very weak ( in my opinion) Such good rap skills deserve better beats, thats all there is to that. If you want to keep the dreamy feel to the track, keep the piano and synthy sounds, but rework that beat. Theres a hazy sound on the rhythm in the first part of the track, thats super annoying. Listening to it a second time, I realize that the last part of the song is where you should be heading. Just look at how the waveform expands. All of this is just an opinion, so please dont take it too personally. Listening to this a 3rd time, makes me think a chorus/hook could work really well too....
ok.. thats my 2 cents
thanks a lot, brother. i actually added to this track with the last verse. the 1st verse and the music were on this site, posted by SJW. i added that last verse over the weekend.
Damn!!!!! Damn!!! Damn!!! REAL HIP HOP MUSIC!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO JUSTICE TO MY BEATS!!!!!! THE CHORUS IS A CLASSIC!! REAL UNDERGROUND STYLE!!
Again, thanks so much for the listen, Mud. i respect your opinion, as you've commented on a few of my tracks. i'll keep banging em out if you all keep listening!
Wow man! Great instrumentation and powerful lyrics. Really liking this. The vocals are very clear and balanced greatly. From 4:29 and onward, there's no sound for me, though I'm sure it's intentional. Not sure. This has happened before with other's tracks. Nevertheless, great job man!
Dope track wordybum! Stephskillie came through with a ill beat and you lyrically delivered the heat! Your vocals sound a little lower in the beginning of your 1st verse compared to the rest of the track. Other then that the vocal mix sounds on point. But that's just my opinion. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
ez man , in my humble opinion ur vox sounds top notch m8
really clear n the mix when the synth join up kinda get a bit quieter but nothing major
u have a strong delivery
and im not sure how it could be improved to be honest
on Warrior Soul by wordybum
Cool raping on that great groovy...it's of course not boring though I don't understand more than a half of your speech...:-)
Handshake, Danke
on Warrior Soul by wordybum
Hey you think you can send me an mp3 of the collab you did with SJW just the way you got it right now? Every time I play that song it feels likesomething is missing and that's your part plus I really like it the way you guys have it now.
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But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.
You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.
Excellent Work!
ever since i found Looperman i have re-imagined a few verses on different beats. it really is so fun to attack a new track with a verse i know forwards and backwards. it allows me to really get into the role and nail the verse.
on Kill the messenger cypher Wordybum by wordybum
I keep on listening to your music for awhile and i am really enjoying it...
great work.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/144271
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146720
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/151654
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/165286
bless.
on SJW colab ruffkins by wordybum
In my opinion I actually really liked that buildup with the track getting louder leading up to your part. It gave this sense of excitement like something about to blow the listener away is coming and thats exactly what you did.
Now it did get a little too loud but if you control it right the volume increase can work to your advantage in my humble opinion. But thats up to u guys.
So anyway its been a month, how far are you guys regarding a final version? Really looking forward to it.
thanks so much for the kind words and support, brother.
on Withering featuring Stacy Robinson by wordybum
First, I'd like to say I love the piano, sweeeeet! Second, I'm not sure why you have this labeled as "Adult Content." There doesn't seem to be anything in it that need censoring. Third, your vocals beneath Stacy's: I get that you want yours to hang underneath, but it gets lost in the mixed...a bit muddled sounding. Fourth, at around 2:56 I think it really needs to sound MASSIVE, like you're speaking down over the masses from a mountain top. I would definitely, though, bring your backing vocal more forward, and make them clearer.
Awesome track!
Love & Light,
Mykael
on Overdose flow by wordybum
Great work!
Hit me up if you need some beats, keep it up!
Bless.
on Overdose flow by wordybum
but good shit man
thanks so much for the listen!
on SJW colab ruffkins by wordybum
i'll hook the LM community up as soon as its done.
on Overdose flow by wordybum
on Overdose flow by wordybum
bless.
on Overdose flow by wordybum
on Wolf in sheeps clothing by wordybum
thanks so much for listening!
on SJW colab ruffkins by wordybum
ok.. thats my 2 cents
thanks so much for the feedback!
on Overdose flow by wordybum
on Overdose flow by wordybum
.... that vibe is hard
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bless.
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Bless
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~GO
i think it was just you on the playback. mine ended right on time.
again, Thanks so much.
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
on The Chronicles part II take II by wordybum
really clear n the mix when the synth join up kinda get a bit quieter but nothing major
u have a strong delivery
and im not sure how it could be improved to be honest
peace ski
klandestyne
bless
on Never coming home by wordybum
They kind of wash out the lows.
Other than that, well done!