like the track man , think it fits the script i.e background to a game ,nothing to over powering ,if i was to add any thing i would let some of the separate elements speak on there own more the synth line is really kool that comes in at 2.30 ish just a wee mini break down wiv just the chords synth etc , but thats just my two pennies worth
really nice work n atmos
klandestyne
my brain hears a subass arp 1/16 notes up to down. After a while it may get repetitive though because its such a chill track. Anyway I love the reverbs they sound great in this track :)
yeah ive actually already got something similar in the track, its not the version ive got uploaded though.
yeah im feeling like theres too much reverb towards the end gets a little overpowering, ive corrected that too in the version im working on.
Yeah ive been thinking the same but any bass i use seems to overpower the song even when i drop the vol and eq. it still doesnt feel right. but im still looking into it
"you had a track that had a reversed guitar in the beginning"
No, I don't think you've heard any tracks of mine with reversed guitar intro. However, I had a think about that and I do have one with reversed g intro and it's a very alternative electro blues track I like.
Check it here:
Effective bass joins at 1:04. A good pulse sitting behind all that noise. I could do without the scratchy noise but it doesn't ruin things.
Things build well as you change the filter on that bass while stringy synths rise and then fall away around 2:29, leaving us with more prominent bass pulse. Noise has gone now.
2:50 and you're into a cool groove. The build into it wasn't too long and it's a tight groove you can dance to.
Lead high melodic synth parts call out nicely to the listener. Good delay and reverb making this far out,slightly epic and totally my kind of vibe.
4:37 drop of the bass as some variation was required.
2:50-5:49 may be a bit too samey, as the waveform indicates (ie you can see the same shapes) but it's still a cool section. After that, I could have done with it all getting bigger and morphing into some final, epic conclusion to round things off. That's just what I would like to hear rather than a particular criticism of what you've done, which is fine work.
Yeah must have been someone else, ive not heard this track from you, ill try drop a comment on it later. Listening as i comment :D
Hadn't noticed that scratchy noise in the background there, will need to fix that. Its not anything i put in so not sure whats going on there.
"some variation was required"
Yeah im thinking the same thing, ill need to mess around with it a bit. I dont want to go bigger though. Ill try see if i can change it up but keep the groove.
also.. "2:50-5:49" you must be hearing an extra 34 second version haha
Thanks Static!
You've always got the best and most detailed feedback! :D
Nice laidback chill out track. The transition into the 2nd part is very strong. I like the flute synth in the 2n part. Really maeks it a mystical sound. Well done!
hey, yeah very laidback.. a song that suits my personality then haha
Yeah the transition was a bit annoying to get working but i think its pretty solid now :)
Yeah the flute synth is cool, its like my go-to synth haha
Its not really that long unless your counting everything before the change the intro.. which i guess you could haha but i do get what you mean
yeah the change is... interesting haha
Im glad you like it, i was worried people might think the track changes too much but that doesnt seem to be the case
If i remember right, you had a track that had a reversed guitar in the beginning too, i think that was one of your songs not 100% sure though ... not that i copied you or anything.. >_> haha
love that synth at 0.45 i use it in quite a few songs
Yeah theres a couple little details in there, hopefully i can build on this track and make it something special like you say :)
Thanks for the feedback :D
nice track.
I would only suggest that you make the basline different when the drums cames. It feels like the bas goes the same all the time. And the bas is almost like the main lead on this track that's why i think you should try something different in the end.
Hmm yeah i see what you mean, i like the way the bass is at the end, although maybe if i change it up in the intro and build maybe that will get the same effect?, because then the bass will feel different at the end hopefully :)
aint been on here a lot this week but like ur music so checked soon as i seen this
really like the balance between the elements the drums propel the groove nicely
very groovy sounding
few bells n whistles ( figure of speech not literally)
n ya finished imo
rispect
klandestyne
Thanks man, happy you like my music :)
"the drums propel the groove nicely"
Yeah the drums in this are cool, beet drum beat ive made i think.. pretty simple beat too lol
"few bells n whistles ( figure of speech not literally)"
Hahhaa yeah a few ;)
my only advice is to add a bit of space before the start of the song .. not much .. just like 1/8 of a measure .. it may not make sense but trust me .. it's helps
OR you could lead into the song with a reverse verb (kinda like "Where Are Ü Now" by jacku)
yeah still got to work on the intro, personally i was thinking of having just a cutoff of the pads and ave a short buildup. But ill try the reverse reverb thing. This song already has alot of that in the pads so should be easy enough to move it over to the start of the song :)
"Jealous of how chill this is man"
really? lol you can take it to some pretty high levels of chill yourself.
"I love the chorus at the end"
Yeah still working on that but i like the way its going :)
"Keep producing awesome stuff like this!"
Definitely planning on it, got a couple of tracks that are along the same lines in the works. Might do a little EP or something
Thanks Rico, always a pleasure. hope all is well :)
nice pads. Then the beat comes in, but perfect for the chill lounge, I think if you filtered out the pads, but bring them back up with the arpeggios you will have a winner. Very clever tune you have made. I like it a lot. Maybe from 4:39 on a cool synth solo. Just some ideas. Great work!
Cru
nice pads. Then the beat comes in, but perfect for the chill lounge, I think if you filtered out the pads, but bring them back up with the arpeggios you will have a winner. Very clever tune you have made. I like it a lot. Maybe from 4:39 on a cool synth solo. Just some ideas. Great work!
Cru
Yeah im working on filter on the pads, see if i can get it sounding cool.
A synth solo could be a good idea, was looking to get an another melody in here somewhere and that would be a good way to do it, so yeah ill prob do that :)
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like the track man , think it fits the script i.e background to a game ,nothing to over powering ,if i was to add any thing i would let some of the separate elements speak on there own more the synth line is really kool that comes in at 2.30 ish just a wee mini break down wiv just the chords synth etc , but thats just my two pennies worth
really nice work n atmos
klandestyne
Hmm thats a cool idea, yeah maybe give some of the synths some limelight haha.
Ill try work that in somehow.
awesome feedback,
Thanks
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yeah ive actually already got something similar in the track, its not the version ive got uploaded though.
yeah im feeling like theres too much reverb towards the end gets a little overpowering, ive corrected that too in the version im working on.
Thanks for the comment man
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I think it could withstand a little more bass being added to it.
Other than that, not much else needs to be changed!
Thanks for the feedback :)
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"you had a track that had a reversed guitar in the beginning"
No, I don't think you've heard any tracks of mine with reversed guitar intro. However, I had a think about that and I do have one with reversed g intro and it's a very alternative electro blues track I like.
Check it here:
Six Of One
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/147997
Anyway, your track:
Effective bass joins at 1:04. A good pulse sitting behind all that noise. I could do without the scratchy noise but it doesn't ruin things.
Things build well as you change the filter on that bass while stringy synths rise and then fall away around 2:29, leaving us with more prominent bass pulse. Noise has gone now.
2:50 and you're into a cool groove. The build into it wasn't too long and it's a tight groove you can dance to.
Lead high melodic synth parts call out nicely to the listener. Good delay and reverb making this far out,slightly epic and totally my kind of vibe.
4:37 drop of the bass as some variation was required.
2:50-5:49 may be a bit too samey, as the waveform indicates (ie you can see the same shapes) but it's still a cool section. After that, I could have done with it all getting bigger and morphing into some final, epic conclusion to round things off. That's just what I would like to hear rather than a particular criticism of what you've done, which is fine work.
Congrats again.
Yeah must have been someone else, ive not heard this track from you, ill try drop a comment on it later. Listening as i comment :D
Hadn't noticed that scratchy noise in the background there, will need to fix that. Its not anything i put in so not sure whats going on there.
"some variation was required"
Yeah im thinking the same thing, ill need to mess around with it a bit. I dont want to go bigger though. Ill try see if i can change it up but keep the groove.
also.. "2:50-5:49" you must be hearing an extra 34 second version haha
Thanks Static!
You've always got the best and most detailed feedback! :D
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Yeah the transition was a bit annoying to get working but i think its pretty solid now :)
Yeah the flute synth is cool, its like my go-to synth haha
Thanks for the comment :)
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yeah the change is... interesting haha
Thanks for the comment
:)
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I definitely like the sound of this chill piece morphing into a good electro groove and will give a better, longer review when I have the time.
First 5 seconds have a great tone to them and I'd be happy with that intro in one of my own tracks.
Then a cool little high lead around 0:45.
So, more later but big congrats for now...
Im glad you like it, i was worried people might think the track changes too much but that doesnt seem to be the case
If i remember right, you had a track that had a reversed guitar in the beginning too, i think that was one of your songs not 100% sure though ... not that i copied you or anything.. >_> haha
love that synth at 0.45 i use it in quite a few songs
Thanks for the feedback man! :)
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Hello mate,
Wow this track is amazing.
It goes without saying straight to the favs.
Well done mate.
Jamid
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that would make this very special...
Real cool project, all tastefully done...
Peace...TG.
Yeah theres a couple little details in there, hopefully i can build on this track and make it something special like you say :)
Thanks for the feedback :D
Respect
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I would only suggest that you make the basline different when the drums cames. It feels like the bas goes the same all the time. And the bas is almost like the main lead on this track that's why i think you should try something different in the end.
Otherwise awesome!! nicely done
Thanks man!
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thanks for commenting too :D
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really like the balance between the elements the drums propel the groove nicely
very groovy sounding
few bells n whistles ( figure of speech not literally)
n ya finished imo
rispect
klandestyne
"the drums propel the groove nicely"
Yeah the drums in this are cool, beet drum beat ive made i think.. pretty simple beat too lol
"few bells n whistles ( figure of speech not literally)"
Hahhaa yeah a few ;)
Thanks for checking the track out :)
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my only advice is to add a bit of space before the start of the song .. not much .. just like 1/8 of a measure .. it may not make sense but trust me .. it's helps
OR you could lead into the song with a reverse verb (kinda like "Where Are Ü Now" by jacku)
again, nice job!
cheers
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Compliments______Orlando
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Keep producing awesome stuff like this!
Rico L.
"Jealous of how chill this is man"
really? lol you can take it to some pretty high levels of chill yourself.
"I love the chorus at the end"
Yeah still working on that but i like the way its going :)
"Keep producing awesome stuff like this!"
Definitely planning on it, got a couple of tracks that are along the same lines in the works. Might do a little EP or something
Thanks Rico, always a pleasure. hope all is well :)
Xyilent
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Thank you, yeah my songs lately tend to have that feel to them haha
Thanks for the feedback :D
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Cru
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Cru
A synth solo could be a good idea, was looking to get an another melody in here somewhere and that would be a good way to do it, so yeah ill prob do that :)
Thanks man! :)