Nice reply dear Xyilent, and you are right about the fact in some areas need minor work on it.I still thinks the idea is awesome to have multiple transitions and change the melody each times so try to keep it.
Also the voice thing is my personal opinion.In fact, I generally hate voices except for choirs in epic music. Maybe that ruin my objective judgment.I just wanted to let you know that.
I could recommend you to wait others feedback about the voice before work on it.
haha you a little bias against spoken word in songs? lol thats ok man. i like them as they are but lie you said, ill see if anyone else brings it up and ill revisit them :)
Good track dear Xyilent, I like how you add new melody with the transitions.
Also, I love your simple main melody and how its ends with 2 long notes
The only negative this I can tells is with the voice there are something I dislike but I can't tell you what maybe the positioning in the track "at start and ends of some parts"
thanks byleth, yeah was trying to keep it interesting by changing up the melody with each transition but dont think it quite works yet in some areas, but im close.
and hmm ill have a look at the voice thing see if i can fix it and keep it more consistent or something :)
If I were you, I would change the drums at the end part...that broken rhythm is a bit weird there, I imagine a simple, fluent 4/4...
plus the whole track needs a soft bass synth on my humble opinion...
hope I built a bit...if not, it's just a cool track...:-)
hey danke, the track does already have a sub bass throughout but its really subtle so ill see if can add with another soft bass ontop.
and yeah listening now the end bit is kinda odd haha
I liked the atmosphere, and that led me to spiritually identify with the rhythmic structure. While it took me a while to arrive at "waltz," I think I understand where you are coming from. Reminds me of something which may have come out a decade ago, and I appreciate that. Very fun to hear! Great work!
Hey Spiv, yeah the waltz is referencing the vocal in the song where he says something like "with a nice dreamy waltz" so i decided to call it morning waltz, haha i dunno made sense to me at the time
"Reminds me of something which may have come out a decade ago"
Really?! awesome, cant say that was the intention was just messing around in FL :)
cheers greg, yeah taking my time lately just figuring out what i wanna make and i think its stuff like this. Well for now it is at least haha and yup changed my name over on the soundclouds lol
Sounds good. Deep and wide. Could be the beginning or a snipet of a track :)
The feeling is cool and gives a kind of pictures into the head. Maybe you should work on it and make it a little longer.
Well sounding synth sounds. They have something warm and relaxing
Really appreciate the comment about the synths because ive been making my own of late and been kinda proud of then :D haha
Yeah ill maybe think about extending it but not sure, it seems to do the trick at the length. Dont really see much benefit in having it longer but dunno. Thanks man :)
actually weird you mention him because i was thinking how he hardly uses drums and stuff in his songs when i was making this, so i decided to go down his route and leave out the drums but instead add some sfx and stuff for texture. To be honest i think it works better :D
after listening to this, i feel like im a ninja, who has been honing his skills in the wilderness for the past ten years.. awesome track! lots of fun to listen to
Some say he has been out in the wilderness for 10 years, honing his skills,
waiting patiently for the time to strike!
Some say hes just a crazy forest man,
Some say he will never return,
some say hes just a myth..
all i know is.. Hes called MASTER NINJA DEFECT77!!
You know, you could actually do video game music for a living. You obviously have a great talent for it, as demonstrated by this song. Have you thought about that? I wouldn't be surprised to see you go far in that field c:
Thats the plan, cant say if it will ever happen but its something i would really like to work towards.
Was hopping to go to college this year and build my skills alittle but its looking like that isnt happening but ill keep at it, and you never know :)
I would love the stems if you would be so kind.
I will send a private message with my e-mail.
I am really impressed with your loops.
Quality!. I made a tune a bit back using some of your loops in it called Catatonia. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/174110
Right now you might be one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment.
Cru
Such a lovely piece. Your skills have improved so much! You capture the tension perfectly with such minimalism, something that a lot of producers have a heck of a time getting right. You nailed it! Great work!
yeah slowly getting better haha, just been working at it. Ever since i started making my own synths its became easier to design a song based on what i have in my head, rather than make it as close to it as i can with presets and stuff, which has been awesome :D
holy cow, what sort of earporn is this??? really nice job with the soft melody and hypnotizing guitar riff you got going on. i figure this would be good by the title lmao
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Also the voice thing is my personal opinion.In fact, I generally hate voices except for choirs in epic music. Maybe that ruin my objective judgment.I just wanted to let you know that.
I could recommend you to wait others feedback about the voice before work on it.
Peace from Master Byleth
thanks man :)
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Also, I love your simple main melody and how its ends with 2 long notes
The only negative this I can tells is with the voice there are something I dislike but I can't tell you what maybe the positioning in the track "at start and ends of some parts"
try to mute the voice to check the difference.
Peace from Master byleth.
and hmm ill have a look at the voice thing see if i can fix it and keep it more consistent or something :)
thanks for the feedback!
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Ciao,
M.
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Brilliant use of synth, I believe it is one of your best work so far.
Really well done .
Jamid
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But...:-)
If I were you, I would change the drums at the end part...that broken rhythm is a bit weird there, I imagine a simple, fluent 4/4...
plus the whole track needs a soft bass synth on my humble opinion...
hope I built a bit...if not, it's just a cool track...:-)
Handshake, Danke
and yeah listening now the end bit is kinda odd haha
thanks as always danke =D
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The vocal shots bring the whole thing together very well.
:)
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Keep on going ragazzo
you have class
I noticed it just listen to a couple of your tracks
See u on the road here
Max
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Cru
thanks! :D
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Wow, I love the intro mate.
It is a superb track.
Well done.
Jamid
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hats off, Danke
...and it's a full track...
HAHA yeah its actually a full track this time
thanks danke :D
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"Reminds me of something which may have come out a decade ago"
Really?! awesome, cant say that was the intention was just messing around in FL :)
Thanks for the feedback man!
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I see you change to Nova Noma, i like it. And i like this piece too also :)
:)
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The feeling is cool and gives a kind of pictures into the head. Maybe you should work on it and make it a little longer.
Well sounding synth sounds. They have something warm and relaxing
stay tuned
joe
Yeah ill maybe think about extending it but not sure, it seems to do the trick at the length. Dont really see much benefit in having it longer but dunno. Thanks man :)
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I could see you developing this into an intense song as you build on it.
Cru
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Wow it is brilliant work mate.
Very serene and peaceful.
Well done mate.
Jamid
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Handshake, Danke
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Long time since I heard some chip-tunes.
Great work!
The vibe of the track is really amazing and really does fit the video game environment.
Loved the main melody hook and the ambience.
The drums are groovy and tight. Liked those hats xD
Lower bass parts are crystal clear.
Awesome work!
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waiting patiently for the time to strike!
Some say hes just a crazy forest man,
Some say he will never return,
some say hes just a myth..
all i know is.. Hes called MASTER NINJA DEFECT77!!
Got a small bit carried away with that haha :)
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Brado
Was hopping to go to college this year and build my skills alittle but its looking like that isnt happening but ill keep at it, and you never know :)
cheers brando
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I will send a private message with my e-mail.
I am really impressed with your loops.
Quality!. I made a tune a bit back using some of your loops in it called Catatonia.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/174110
Right now you might be one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment.
Cru
"I will send a private message with my e-mail"
awesome, ill send you it over mon-tue ish. working this weekend so wont have a ton of time.
"one of my favourite loopmasters on the site at the moment!
cheers cru :D that means alot to me
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Brado
yeah slowly getting better haha, just been working at it. Ever since i started making my own synths its became easier to design a song based on what i have in my head, rather than make it as close to it as i can with presets and stuff, which has been awesome :D
"You nailed it! Great work!"
Thanks brando :)
peace
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"i figure this would be good by the title"
hahaha YEAH i really like the title too, has a sense of mystery behind it which is cool :)