This is an awesome start there is so much you can do to make this track sound more alive . I just can't put my finger on what thought Mabel some kind of subtle saw synth. Unfortunately if I were to listen to this before reading the info I wouldn't know it was a video game based track. Other than that this track is a super start ! We should collab sometime man I think you and I could do something pretty cool. I just need to get in touch with the newer styles of electronic music .
haha no i started the track with the idea of making a video game style song, but it evolved to become not so video game based.. u get me? haha might not be explaining that well.
and YEAH! i know you make good quality stuff so id be happy to collab :)
and you most likely are right about the chords although i wouldn't change it.
When i make a remix i dont tend to listen to the original song before i produce the remix, reason is, (for me) because i want to take the track in a direction that i want to take it, and not be sort of 'controlled' by the original. dont get me wrong i LOVE the original song, but ive not listened to it in months.
So reason is for the vocals and chords changing at different times from the original is basically because im not working from the song, if you know what i mean. Im working from what sounds right to me at the time of producing, even if it technically isnt right haha.
I dunno if that makes much sense haha. its really hard to explain lol
Thanks for the comment man :) ... All 4 of them ;)
In the first part before she starts to sing "I hate to turn up out of the blue..." Are her notes placed on the wrong bar or she singing slower than the song? I don't know if this was intended but I recall in the original song, the chords change at a different time than was done in this remix. Something doesn't feel quite right there, to me at least. Overall, great job with your mix! Keep up this music, I really do dig your stuff. Cheers!
Are her notes placed on the wrong bar or she singing slower than the song? I don't know if this was intended but I recall in the original song, the chords change at a different time than was done in this remix. Something doesn't feel quite right, to me at least. Overall, great job with your mix! Keep up this music, I really do dig your stuff. Cheers!
Is it just me or are her notes placed on the wrong bar? I don't know if this was intended but I recall in the original song, the chords change at a different time than was done in this remix. They seem off-sync, to me at least. Great job! Keep up this music, I really do dig your stuff. Cheers!
how did you extract the vocal so cleanly for your re-mix? seems like quite a job to do that. nice work on your track. the plucky sound gives it an upbeat feel even though she is talking about an affair that might be over. all the best.
its just a studio acccapella :)
Yeah i noticed that while i was making it that the plucks where giving the track a sort of upbeat feel, contradicting her vocals but i dunno if thats a bad thing or not haha.
Really nice remix, dude. Most of the time when folks do this they get the timing off. I like the synths. very dominant. and the strings beneath create the feel. nicely done.
Yeah timing was super important to me, i left out the chorus vocals for the very reason that i couldn't get the timing right, turned out for the better i think :)
You said that want a collab! I`m really open for this track! Awesome melody! So many things in my head right now with this, I can finish this if you want or start a new one? contact me in my profile!
The melody is really catchy and as a singer I could Imagine myself singing on it but I feel missing that extra kick. You're heading in the right direction, I feel you could use a drum loop under it just to make the track a lot more stronger and thicker. Also I kind of got lost from 00:58, it seems like two different songs until it intertwines at 00:17. I think if you structure it better like (intro,verse,chorus,verse,bridge,chorus) for example it will sound amazing. Overall I do really like it!! Just needs a few tweaks :D. Hope this helps.
hey thanks for the advice :), a drum loop could be cool ill mess around with the idea and see what happens :D, and yeah i really need to learn to structure my songs better im glad you enjoyed non the less lol THANKS ALOT :D
Pretty cool dudue...real cool...so yeah im going to download it and make it big here where i come from dont be surprised you might just make it.....cool but needs some work to be to fast to put things up....like your tracks take time to perfect it make it sound really good so people will love it not just like it cool...
Well this is something a little different. I like the woo woo sound and there's some cool synth effects and nice piano. But i agree with spivkurl, where's the bass? The kick drum is also a little bit clicky and could do with a bit more punch but the tune it's self is a good idea and the arrangement is nice. I also liked the noise effects that you used.
Keep working on it.
FR
Hey FR! thanks for the listen and comment, and yeah after spivkurl's comment i sat for a bit and made a cool bass for it, and yeah for the kick drum ill try EQ it or something try to get rid of the clickyness :D thanks for the feedback man!:D
Thought I'd take a listen after your forum post. I am enjoying the song for sure. Can honestly say that my vocals probably wouldn't hit the spot on this song though. Not my usual listening preference lately, but I can totally hear the talent that went into it. I get the feeling that it's a little lacking in low frequencies, at least to my preferences. Funky stuff though, I'm glad that I listened!
Thanks spiv for taking the time to give some feedback :D, im glad you enjoyed!, hope you come back for the finished product once ive put your and other peoples advice to good use :).
Well, it's pretty cool. I like the part around 1:25 very much... it seems like it would be more mass compatible if you researched what key that part is in and recreate some of the other parts in that key. Just a thought. I like that you've experimented though, that's always a good thing! Good work!
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and YEAH! i know you make good quality stuff so id be happy to collab :)
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thanks alot! :D
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and you most likely are right about the chords although i wouldn't change it.
When i make a remix i dont tend to listen to the original song before i produce the remix, reason is, (for me) because i want to take the track in a direction that i want to take it, and not be sort of 'controlled' by the original. dont get me wrong i LOVE the original song, but ive not listened to it in months.
So reason is for the vocals and chords changing at different times from the original is basically because im not working from the song, if you know what i mean. Im working from what sounds right to me at the time of producing, even if it technically isnt right haha.
I dunno if that makes much sense haha. its really hard to explain lol
Thanks for the comment man :) ... All 4 of them ;)
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Cheers,
Scott
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Yeah i noticed that while i was making it that the plucks where giving the track a sort of upbeat feel, contradicting her vocals but i dunno if thats a bad thing or not haha.
Thanks midi :)
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Thanks for listening , glad you enjoyed :D
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Thanks for the feedback man :) Glad you enjoyed
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Thanks for the advice Nutsyhic :D
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Keep working on it.
FR
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Love & Light,
Mykael
Thanks for the comment Mykael :D
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Don't you mind that if i remix this song? I send it to you in a few weeks or so if you say yes.
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