Wow. I don't really know if I could do anything near as good just using 3 loops, a mic, and some effects. Really reminds me of Rammstein the way the whole track comes together. Well done yet again.
This is a realy realy gentle comment.
Thankyou very much for the friendly words.
And i am sure you would wonder what you can do with 3 samples, a mic, and the only rule is -use it in any way :)
It´s maybe a little to lazy or groovy for rammstein or?
hi Joe, I really enjoyed what you did with these loops! Agree with the comments below - this bass groove that you've created is funky and extremely energetic. A bit of an industrial athmosphere in the background (I like that!) and interesting story behind it. Creative and unique. Alex
You could take this Music 2 or 3 different ways, the notes the bass is playing
are blue notes, they fit the blues groove but it's also what you say and how you say it...
This could get FUNKED UP...With the right flavour of guitars and synths..
Or put a Hard Core Rock Guitar Drop on it and take it that way....
Or slick it down with a jazzy deep reverb guitar...
There are a lot of formulas that could fit the bill, in those styles
it just depends on where your heart feels comfortable....
A cool jamming, distroyed guitar with a deep reverb and echo, anywhere in the background telling the same stroy in a kind of a second voice ...... that would be nice.
Feel free to play it by yourself TG.
If you found any cool that fits - tell me :)
Yes, I can calmly adopt exactly what Pete says. Creativity and originality are just the ticket here...amazing things can be done with a few simple choices and this is clear demonstration of that...:)I can't resist to press the 'fav'
icon...here we go...
You sure you didn't work on this while sleepwalking too? hahaha That bass line is hyptnotic, going to hear that in my sleep! Industrial Blues :D That's a mix I like :p I like that effect on your voice, I'm doing a dreamy one as well (one of many projects in the works), maybe I'll use a similar effect. Even at work I'm thinking of ideas, stories, lyrics, whatever needed for my tracks :D I find it to be the best place to make up stories.
You are right. Normaly work isnt a stop from being creative but i hadnd created the bassline then and so i hadnd the "right" idea on what i could/should think while working .....
:) and i just didnd go to bed yesterday until i finished the track. Working on a cool track just let me got no sleep.
so lets see what cool songs come up next in this great challange
Thanks for the friendly statement about the loop useing and the lyrics.
And YES i am into the challenge again.
AND i am already ready again :)
Promenade gave me 3 extrem cool loops, so i done the work under 24 hours http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162646
Wow, this is really good and amazing! I made use of google translate to catch those lyrics, and I was blown away! Tastes like happy! Definitely my kind of track! Deep and dark with a positive edge. Amazing! Fave!
When you post the loops and i took them, i told you that i would do an awesome track.
Ok, i realy just wrote that without any knowing what will happend but it looks like i done it realy so the way that you get what i sayed you would get.
Realy nice to hear that this track let you go to google and you invest some time for a translation. I hope google did a good job and you realy like the original lyrics and not only a google version :)
So i am happy that i done something in a way that you realy like
Always nice to read a gentle comment like this. Thanks for that and for the fav.
hey Joe, very cool. I really like what you did with your loops, I checked them and really you did a great job here. There was a glitchy one, some orchestral hit and the bluesy guitar groove which is a kind of a main foundation of your track I guess. I like the vocal echo or quasi canon effect and some interesting processing on loops. It sounds a bit like a folk tune to me with these vocals. Nice work on songwriting. Alex
What a friendly comment.
After cutting the guitarloop so the way that i like the groove , everything went much easyer. So you are right, this guitarloop was/is important for the track. The words realy did come into me mind while working on the music. So i could say - after the first cuttings of the guitar, all was in a way just clear, easy and pure fun to do.
Like mostly i enjoy your comment and youre friendly words about the vocals.
This folksong thing that you hear ... mmmm .... i think i must listen to the track again to check that out :)
Hey Burt, nice to know that you like it. first i believed that it would be hard to manage this 3 loops, but after starting the second time, all comes just anyway into my mind.
German Misfits with a male singer :)
What a cool compliment.
So thanks for your comment and youre friendly words
Great work Joe. Your voice does sound quite a bit like Iggy Pop, and that's a great big compliment for sure. Like SJ suggested, the vox just need a little bit of reverb and placed a bit farther back in the mix. Other than that small critique, I wouldn't change a thing. Well done Joe, really well done. I hope all is well.
Thanks Bear for this nice comment.
I hoped that you like it, `cause it´s your music.
I made a little update with some more reverb over the voxs. And a few little changes on the levels and so but not sure :) like mostly :) about the result ...... itz much more easy to say "a bit farther back" then to do (for me)
Hope i didnt change it to the bader, if, tell me and i reupload the old version :)
hi, I like the special colour you achieved here and some old-styled manner in your voice. This is very nice. Is it inspired by some specific songs or style?
Anyway I really enjoyed your song - I had that impression something was missing on this competition track and you filled it up very well.
Very nice work, Alex
I am happy that you enjoyed the listen and found it nice.
No, this isnt inspired by someone special. In fakt it is realy made just for (or maybe by) this minimal master of SMB´s track that i made. I had the words already in my mind when i done the last version of the mastering comp.
Cool to hear that you believe that this filled the comp track very well.
So thanks for your friendly words and the time you spent.
Hahaha! This is great!
It has this slippery, smoshy feeling over the lyris and all over your voice - as there should be in a love song.
I think your vox could benefit from having a little more distance, at the moment it's very close to the ear somehow. Maybe a touch of reverb and delay and maybe layering it a few times also in between the chorus.
The instrumental it self is one of my favourites here.
Hahaha Zombie folk song :D The creativity is endless here, that's why I love Looperman :D Stupid humans!! See Zombies are smarter than us, and they're writing songs about it! Maybe they'll stop eating us, don't they know all the garbage food we eat?? Or maybe our brains just taste too good :p
Ahhhh Humans, mmm jammy. You know that thees zombies started just as "normal" zombies. Dark, dangerous, mindless, on the search for food, flesh, brains. They eat all they can get. Kill and eat and if not eat, transform the victim into a zombie. But then they start getting minded. They got the controll. They take the towns and industrys and so on. Humans must liv in the nature. Hide themselfs and fall back into stoneage and get very healthy as food.
I wouldnd wonder if "the thinking zombie" will eat a human leg, that he buyed at the lokal supermarket, while he gives a concert. And because he is famous and rich he buyed -freeland humanflesh- and not just cheap -caged humanflesh- and next he will get some real good -wild humanflesh- ...
assholes! Will not be easy to do something against this freaks :)
where did you get that voice Joe....best dam zombie I`ve heard this halloween....well...I`m sitting here with a big smile on my face...a zombie folk song...only joecramer could do it like this..I can see the video in my mind...big fun Joe...and a big well done to you...thanks for making some noise & having some fun with a couple of my loops....made my day.......Ed
nice to hear that i put a smile on your face.
That´s wherefor i done it.
Your samples are exelent. I realy tryed to play almost something same on my own guitar but i failed at the F (i´m a real bad chord player) and after a few trys and went to loopermans search and found them - wow realy the same row i wanted to play and with a bassline - and so well played in almost the same style i tryed befor ......
So it was a great pleasure for me to sing to them.
And the voice :) - how knows - maybe i am a zombie and i didnd pitched down?
Very impressive effort you've made here! To me, this has a very minimal techno vibe to it. With just some subtle changes throughout, it would sound more finished and enticing, but I love it as is. The stereo toms are quite impressive, and I can hear why they were inspiring to you. I also like renewing quite old songs as something new and different, so I see where you are coming from. Very hypnotic and enjoyable electronic song, and your voice is quite good! Keep at it! Fave!
This is (just) a real raw file. Often i like this raw things more then the finished work. Thats one of the reason why i need so long to do things new :)
This toms are very cool and in my ears they cryed for some vocals. So i done it.
Nice to hear that you enjoyed the listen and give the track a fav.
There are a lot of versions out right now and that you think that my little minimal version ist beautiful, in your eys/ears, that is realy nice to hear.
I spent a lot of time into this comp and it is a good feeling to see that, at least for some people, i done it in a way good.
So thanks a lot for your friendly words and the time you spent.
I've read some of the other comments about this track being an updated version, I don't know what they sounded like, but if they sounded anything like this one your doing an excellent job. Kudos! FT
Nice to her that you think this is in a way exellent.
I am not realy into this mastering thing, so it is realy nice to hear that others think i done it good ......
I post all versions where i believed from that they are in a way cool on looperman. So if you wanna listen where this last version comes from you could do that.
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
This is a realy realy gentle comment.
Thankyou very much for the friendly words.
And i am sure you would wonder what you can do with 3 samples, a mic, and the only rule is -use it in any way :)
It´s maybe a little to lazy or groovy for rammstein or?
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
Cool that you like what i did with the loops.
And nice to know that you found it creative and uniqe, thats a real fine comliment. Thanks for that.
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
are blue notes, they fit the blues groove but it's also what you say and how you say it...
This could get FUNKED UP...With the right flavour of guitars and synths..
Or put a Hard Core Rock Guitar Drop on it and take it that way....
Or slick it down with a jazzy deep reverb guitar...
There are a lot of formulas that could fit the bill, in those styles
it just depends on where your heart feels comfortable....
Very cool track Man...
Peace...TG.
Feel free to play it by yourself TG.
If you found any cool that fits - tell me :)
maybe i take it as a - post industrial wave blues
Nice to hear that you found it cool
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
Like that bass line too, gives an atmospherical feeling for this alt/underground/postblues :-)
Respect, Danke
Right now i am realy in love with this groove
I think someone is on the way to make a cool track from some of you loops in this challange. I bet they will send him/her to something special to
Thanks for your friendly words Danke
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
icon...here we go...
Compliments_____Orlando
I am very happy to know that i done something where you believe that you should press the fav button. thanks therefor
Ever thought on being part of this challange Orlando? It´s pure fun and set some extra ctreativity free. Thats cool!
Thanks for the gentle comment
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
:) and i just didnd go to bed yesterday until i finished the track. Working on a cool track just let me got no sleep.
so lets see what cool songs come up next in this great challange
stay tuned
joe
on Gedanken - thoughts by joecramer
This bass line has something hypnotic. It stays in my head
This challenge is very funy and creative
stay tuned
joe
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
Very effective use of the 3 loops here.
You remade them in to your own style! Cool lyrics also.
=D
Are you doing an other one with the loop challenge? It was a lot of fun!
Cheers/ SJ =)
And YES i am into the challenge again.
AND i am already ready again :)
Promenade gave me 3 extrem cool loops, so i done the work under 24 hours
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162646
stay tuned
joe
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
Maybe the voice should be lowered a bit?
Rammstein, Misfits, Dark music and folksong. Intresting on what this track reminds the people.
And you are right, i should do some little changes to the master.
stay tuned
joe
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
When you post the loops and i took them, i told you that i would do an awesome track.
Ok, i realy just wrote that without any knowing what will happend but it looks like i done it realy so the way that you get what i sayed you would get.
Realy nice to hear that this track let you go to google and you invest some time for a translation. I hope google did a good job and you realy like the original lyrics and not only a google version :)
So i am happy that i done something in a way that you realy like
Always nice to read a gentle comment like this. Thanks for that and for the fav.
stay tuned
joe
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
What a friendly comment.
After cutting the guitarloop so the way that i like the groove , everything went much easyer. So you are right, this guitarloop was/is important for the track. The words realy did come into me mind while working on the music. So i could say - after the first cuttings of the guitar, all was in a way just clear, easy and pure fun to do.
Like mostly i enjoy your comment and youre friendly words about the vocals.
This folksong thing that you hear ... mmmm .... i think i must listen to the track again to check that out :)
Thanks for your time and comment
stay tuned
joe
on Jetzt geht es los by joecramer
German Misfits with a male singer :)
What a cool compliment.
So thanks for your comment and youre friendly words
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
Nice to know that you like it
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
Bear
I hoped that you like it, `cause it´s your music.
I made a little update with some more reverb over the voxs. And a few little changes on the levels and so but not sure :) like mostly :) about the result ...... itz much more easy to say "a bit farther back" then to do (for me)
Hope i didnt change it to the bader, if, tell me and i reupload the old version :)
Thanks for the listen and the helping words
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
Anyway I really enjoyed your song - I had that impression something was missing on this competition track and you filled it up very well.
Very nice work, Alex
I am happy that you enjoyed the listen and found it nice.
No, this isnt inspired by someone special. In fakt it is realy made just for (or maybe by) this minimal master of SMB´s track that i made. I had the words already in my mind when i done the last version of the mastering comp.
Cool to hear that you believe that this filled the comp track very well.
So thanks for your friendly words and the time you spent.
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
Cheers____orlando
So thanks a lot for this friendly words
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
It has this slippery, smoshy feeling over the lyris and all over your voice - as there should be in a love song.
I think your vox could benefit from having a little more distance, at the moment it's very close to the ear somehow. Maybe a touch of reverb and delay and maybe layering it a few times also in between the chorus.
The instrumental it self is one of my favourites here.
Cheers!
/ SJ =)
A slippery voice :) thats cool in a way.
And you are right, i am not 100% happy with the vox.
I think i will do some more takes and see how i can master it a bit better.
So thanks for your comment and your little help.
stay tuned
joe
on the thinking zombie - ich bin ein zombie by joecramer
I wouldnd wonder if "the thinking zombie" will eat a human leg, that he buyed at the lokal supermarket, while he gives a concert. And because he is famous and rich he buyed -freeland humanflesh- and not just cheap -caged humanflesh- and next he will get some real good -wild humanflesh- ...
assholes! Will not be easy to do something against this freaks :)
stay tuned
joe
on the thinking zombie - ich bin ein zombie by joecramer
nice to hear that i put a smile on your face.
That´s wherefor i done it.
Your samples are exelent. I realy tryed to play almost something same on my own guitar but i failed at the F (i´m a real bad chord player) and after a few trys and went to loopermans search and found them - wow realy the same row i wanted to play and with a bassline - and so well played in almost the same style i tryed befor ......
So it was a great pleasure for me to sing to them.
And the voice :) - how knows - maybe i am a zombie and i didnd pitched down?
Stay tuned
joe
on the thinking zombie - ich bin ein zombie by joecramer
Nice to hear that you loved it.
-BEWARE OF THE ZOMBIES- to night!!!!!
stay tuned
joe
on Wir lagen vor Madakaskar by joecramer
This is (just) a real raw file. Often i like this raw things more then the finished work. Thats one of the reason why i need so long to do things new :)
This toms are very cool and in my ears they cryed for some vocals. So i done it.
Nice to hear that you enjoyed the listen and give the track a fav.
stay tuned
joe
on joes real final minimal master - SBM comp by joecramer
Really like how it rises, with that piano melody and then that guitar... amazing.
The introduction of the beat is a wow moment.
Pure gem, thanks for sharing!
There are a lot of versions out right now and that you think that my little minimal version ist beautiful, in your eys/ears, that is realy nice to hear.
I spent a lot of time into this comp and it is a good feeling to see that, at least for some people, i done it in a way good.
So thanks a lot for your friendly words and the time you spent.
stay tuned
joe
on joes real final minimal master - SBM comp by joecramer
Nice that you like it.
Let´s see where this version ends :)
stay tuned
joe
on joes real final minimal master - SBM comp by joecramer
Nice to her that you think this is in a way exellent.
I am not realy into this mastering thing, so it is realy nice to hear that others think i done it good ......
I post all versions where i believed from that they are in a way cool on looperman. So if you wanna listen where this last version comes from you could do that.
All starts with this 1st version
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/159779
Then it goes over this version
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/159814
To this one
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/160013
And i think it ends realy here :)
Thanks for the comment and the time you spent
stay tuned
joe