RealProblemShuckers

I love the variety of styles that you have going on in this track and I like how your switched things up a bit with those styles with this track. Nice work!

Pretty inventive stuff...I really liked this "experiment" of yours.:)

Compliments_____Orlando

RPS, Hello.
This is a good track. It's got some good energy and moves along nicely. I'm not going to say anything about the intro, because it's already been covered. BUT...I will mention the outro. It's pretty abrupt, my friend. With the way this track moves so nicely along, it's kind of like it fell from a cliff when we least expected it. Like you didn't know where to go with it, so you just killed it off. Personally, I would double the length of the section between 2:23 and the end, where it drops into another section like 1:22-1:36 with the sitar layered over the top of that, and continue from there. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Other than that, a nice mix of genres and a pretty good groove you got!
Take care.
V.

This is pretty cool once it gets going. It's not that easy to find loops that link up with one another and you've done a good job here of sticking them together. It does switch rather abruptly at times but on the whole i enjoyed listening to this piece.
FR

Interersting mixture of pop and ethnic elements...pretty cool stuff!:)

Congrats____Orlando

Hi. I'm a sucker for so many Eastern/Asidan/Indian sounds and so is clindsay.

I agree with FreRad that we sort of have to get through the intro for it to get good and really get going. I think that intro sitar part is too programmed and thus lacking a bit of natural feel eg a bit of swing. Some reverb might help but I don' think that's the main problem.

I've used programmed sitar in loads of tracks (but not my award-winning Way Beyond Wrong track) and you do have to be careful with how you use it.

0:52 is when it really kicks in and the best part is probably the slightly left panned string-like part. And there is that trap-like orchestral sort of hit. Is that what it's called?

2:07 bass is cool. Return to main theme at 2:22 is simply and nicely done.

Well done but keep going with this one.

Hey digging this track. Nice funky drums. Keep it up.

Nice - I really liked the coda 2:24 on and the verse :53 to 1:20. Needs a little more power up front but nice vibe. I'd love to hear it with voices.
-clindsay

Hi,

Potentially the makings of a great track, the two reviews so far are pretty on the mark, but not too difficult to fix and if you do sort the intro and outro it would be great to see the track a little longer because when it is going its a fab track. Neat work.

Best wishes,

Mark/Larry!

I think the intro could use a little something but once it gets going it's a good track. Like the way it breaks down into a house bass and then that old school hardcore sound comes in. But i think the other reviewer is right, if you put a bit of reverb on the sitar or a short delay it would make the intro better.
On the whole it's a good track but sort that intro out and make it a GREAT track.
FR

Whoa, you are definitely creating beyond your age! I know that sounds kind of stupid and snobby, but just being honest with how I feel. Very cool rhythm/bass combo here! The mix sounds very good, especially for this genre! Sweet use of vocal clips, definitely adds some interest! I love the part around 2:38 or so with that awesome bass, sound very cool! Very heavy stuff, and fun to listen too! Fave!

This is nice, funky and uplifting, I cant help feeling that the intro sounds a little dry though. I would add some efx to that sax like a delay or perhaps a bit of reverb.
I do like the way that the track progresses though. The synth sound that you used is excellent and the groove is good.
I enjoyed listening to this track.
FR

Cool track, I wish I started making music at your age. Keep at it and you'll be really good in a few years! The riffs in this are nice and funky and I like the bit when the bass kicks in. Maybe work on layering bits up and adding some effects to make the whole thing sound bigger. Good job dude! :)

I'm generally pretty picky about house music, but I can get into this one! I like that it's very straightforward. I don't know why, but that's just the word that comes to mind. Cool sounding bass that comes in at the break! Enjoyable song to listen to! Thanks for sharing your work with us! Fave!

cool & evocative .i underestand U for this honest description to say it had some alex guadino's vibe , and even as I see from this country in Asia , now there are alot of musicians who compose or arrange such disco traX ..and your music had itself's character & creative points which i enjoyed...

I like!
It's something different than all the orchestral and piano music I listen daily to.
The deep bass beat is smooth :3

cool track and good work on this song. really like all the different keyboard tracks got mixed in the song, awesome job.

This is a fun track for sure! The high hats really do it for me, they're minamal, but keep the momentum! It was interesting to hear the build up and variation between the different sections, I like how you held back a little and gave us a little more to get into as the song went on. Strings near the end sound awesome! Dig it! Fave!

Moves real nice, solid string section....

Really good over all feel...And mix...

Well done...

Good variations and well composed strings. I found it a good mix of dance and house.

Good work!

/Anders

Hey my friend, great track. As you are possibly aware Looperman & Loop Radio are trying to arrange a day of Looperman celebrations on the 31st May. I am hoping to do a 2 hour show featuring Dance music from Looperman artists & would also like to feature Looperman tracks in my regular show. As this is available for download (thanx for sharing)I hope you will be OK with me airing it on the day or on another show?
Thanx.
Peace, Love, Justice & Respect.
Vis . . . . .

P.S - sorry for the repeat post just makes it easier for me while trying to get tracks together. Cheating I know ha ha but hey ho eh & it lets you know I have downloaded for the purpose of airing more than one of your tracks. Hope all is well with you & yours?
Vis . . . .

Hey my friend, great track. As you are possibly aware Looperman & Loop Radio are trying to arrange a day of Looperman celebrations on the 31st May. I am hoping to do a 2 hour show featuring Dance music from Looperman artists & would also like to feature Looperman tracks in my regular show. As this is available for download (thanx for sharing)I hope you will be OK with me airing it on the day or on another show?
Thanx.
Peace, Love, Justice & Respect.
Vis . . . . .

Very nicely done! You're quite talented!
I like the added piano bits ^^

I like this track apart from that first piano lick (it sounds really flat and dry)
As soon as the other instruments came in the track turned good and i can tell you've put a lot of effort into the music in this piece.
On the whole i like this track, just do something about that piano sound and the ending is quite abrupt as well.
Good ideas but needs more work.
FR

Well done, cool build up then the drums kicked in. I liked the piano, nice progression. The synth is a little weird sounding but different. Keep up the good work, you have a lot of potential!

Wayne