RealProblemShuckers

Others have mentioned it about using notes that aren't in the key of the song. It certainly gives it an interesting bit of tension whereas the song is relatively happy and upbeat sounding. It seems to work though and like Bear said, you are only 11 years old, pretty impressive work. I'm sure you could spice it up a bit more here and there but it sounds good as is. Well done RPS!

Wayne

I like the sampling. For a minute i thought one of those bloody ad's had opened up somewhere lol. Now it's all gone a bit dub stepish & then old school for a bit before back to dubstep again. There's good elements in this piece but it definitely fits well into the weird genre. I definitely prefer the one your plugging at the moment but it still has good elements to it.

This is so cool! Simple, melodic lead. Straight forward drum beat. Right up my alley.

Good job. Plus, did you notice the track visually looks like some kinda space ship? How cool is that?! haha :)

This is hot very interesting formulas used note wise, groove is tight
everything's movin right, sounds to my ear that you know of what
you hear...
The way you put this together it is clear...

Very well done..

Peace...TG.

This is cool, the rabid intensity of the snares, give away to the strings.....and by having that open verse allows the track a greater breath! Nice job! I like it!

Tune D

I keep having ro remind myself that you are only 11, really impressive work. Your use of dissonance is really impressive. That is something most people don't learn until well into music theory classes. Just keep doing what you are doing. You have great instincts and a skill set beyond your years. I hope all is well.

Bear

Indeed it sounds somehow nostalgic...pretty well done!

Cheers___Orlando

I always enjoy a good bit of square bass and you've complimented it well with that synth. I like the bit where it breaks down to the piano, that sounds well old school and we like a bit of that round here. I also like the sneaky drum rolls as well.
Good work. Keep it up.
FR

Good bounce....Moves like it wants to go somewhere...

Just got to find that sweet spot, with a solo or something if you
get my drift...
Over all it's a solid lock on the groove...

Peace...TG.

56 plays and nobody bothered to comment. I get p*ssed when i see that. This is a good track, that bassline is fat and progresses niceley through the track. Nice piano leads and good use of harmonisation, I like the beats and the synth has a kind of chinese feel to it. The transitions are good and i'd say this is a good track. Don't understand why it got such little attention. But i guess thats looperman for ya.
Cheers for sharing.
FR

Very cool Remix man! It has a very upbeat feel to it for the most part. It was an enjoyable listen. Nice work.

I enjoyed what U had done ...as someone who has always liked Patrick's character & musiX both , I know Spiv's traX are always full of creativeness & adding more innovativeness to his traX is reallY hard & needs inteligencY what U've finelY done ..respects & thnx for sharing .___Behnam

I already heard the original and I must say - This is great remix!

Awesome! Looking forward to hearing this! RoseErin and Danke are definitely some of my favorite loopers! Very nice when the clap loop comes in, sweet! I was glad when the choir part stopped, because I'm just not into choir sounds... nothing said about your music just me. I guess the only thing I can think of that would make this song even cooler is some filter automation on some parts... just a thought, and another example of my preference. Good ending! Nicely done!

awesome remix

My first impression of this track is that it's very dynamic! It's one of those songs that entices one to turn it up, and I did! Very cool sounds you used, some sort of vintage, and some quite modern. I love hardcore, but I'm not very good at it, you however are! Parts of this remind me of some Skinny Puppy, for example stuff from their album "The Process." That's my favorite of their albums too, so I mean it in only the best way! Fine work on this song! Faved for sure!

Another very cool remix! It's really stripped down, I like that about it. You added an interesting synth at the beginning. It's original and still has the feel of the original in there. Well done, welcome to the Nightr8 club!!

Wayne

yeah man! :D thats my favourite n8 mix, wicked job, nice, this the first I wanna actually dl. Keep it up!

Hey man

Liking very much what you done here, giving a different sound but staying close enough to the original piece of Spiv's, great listen dude, been so great hearing everyone's different takes on the remix, very enjoyable mix...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

This was great. Very easy on the ears, unlike mine, hehe.
Strays very far from the original, that's cool. It stands up on it's own as a fun track.

ooo liking the intro already! Very different style here! I'm enjoying the minimal nature of the mix, minimal isn't as easy as it seems. You have made a cool contrast between light and dark elements, way to go! Quite an awesome one to hear! Fave and DL!

I'll have to listen to this properly tomorrow as i'm on the lap top speaker. Sounding pretty good so far. Like the way you used the vocoded nitrate as an instrument. It's definitely interesting hearing different peoples mixes of it and seeing how different they turned out. (i think this is about the fourth version i've heard today)
Good job with the remix.
FR

This is very good! the vocals and the piano are perfectly paired and as everything progresses, I have to say it def gives the perfect dance/house vibe you want in a party track. Keep it up

STIKY

Like Free radical said, The transitions are a bit abrupt, but the parts are fantastic. There a re few drum parts that are a bit... odd to the ear, but this is very well done.

STIKY

Cool track...I think you've got all the info you need, from the others that have
posted a comment...

So I'll just say I....LIKE IT.... :-)