MOONLYTE

Not bad bro for your first one...I'll have to check out some of your more recent stuff to see how much you improved. Peace......Dan =B-)

Very good for the first track!
You need some drums for it!
Paulo

a thoughtfull composition which has a cinematic sense too!
it's so good tallented Eyedeye..U usually compose more thoughtfull than your generation..best wishes.___B

Love the piano and the vocals are great, especially in the beginning. The intro is definitely the perfect way to make sure the listener stays to the rest of the song, which is also great. Congrats!

Great piano and the voice sound good as well. great job

Cool first attempt,remember some of my first attempt´s,;) you never wanna Know. Every beginning is difficult. The Path you've taken is a good one. No one is perfect at the first time, do not give up.

cheers,Destero

I liked it - good production values throughout. I agree with evisma that the panning was distracting. Not sure I would call this dance but that is a quibble. It is coherent and restrained in a good way. Keep it up this is a very good first effort.
-clindsay

Awesome track would like to add more drums to to make it a club joint
Can you send me it without any beat?

Nicely done

Very nice I like all types of music you nailed this

Nice track great vocals

The only thing I would say rubbed me wrong was how extreme the panning was in the middle section.

2:30 on is very nice and I hear what your going for.

There may be some timing issues with the drums and leads at the end, but I must say I dig it all. Kudos to you good sir, now please get the hair out of your eyes.

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If this was your first track, then I must say it's really good and it indicates your musical potential in the future!

All the best____Orlando

Well if this is the first track you've ever made it's not bad at all. I think you should extend the delay on that first synth as it only echoes twice and leaves gaps in the music.
Your production and mix is pretty good but that bass drum that comes in near the end is out of time.
There are good elements here which suggest that you will eventually get to grips with it. NOBODY creates a great track on their first attempt so bear that in mind and keep practicing. You'll get there if you do.
FR

must be fun making music with your lady!

Great job. Reminds me of Radiohead in some way. Vocals are indeed a bit shaky but they didn't build New York in 1 day either right? Keep it up!

And where is the download why is it disabled i wanna steal this and say it was me so i can get rich off you and lie about it!

"Something is right here!"

Compliments____Orlando

very different but in a good way,so sad. Gives me chills

This is my favorite you both sound so meaningful and honest

great electronic sound!

Love it! your very talented :)

Outstanding work EYEDYE. You have a nice quality to your voice. I think if you had an opportunity to sing this one in a studio you would be amazed at how good you would sound.

This one has huge potential, especially if you want to add instrumentation (strings, bass, guitar, and possibly some percussion). It has an epic feel to it as it stands, but a ton of potential as well if you want to take it to another level. Really sounds like something Coldplay would do (and I happen to really like Coldplay's music). Very nice job. I hope all is well.

Bear

I've always digged songs or any form of art that can effectively create a surreal feeling or even a creepy mood. Well, this most definitely achieves that really well. Love how this song immediately inserts the listener into a story, a scene, creating its own unique atmosphere. Very creative and haunting. Keep up the good work.