MOONLYTE

Amazing track!

Nice version! congratulations man sounds perfects!

Eyedye, hello.

This is a quality piece. Mostly. I would suggest bringing the volume down just a touch. I sounds like I can hear some clipping throughout the whole piece. Super easy fix, though.

As far as everything else goes, excellent work. I would absolutely vote against additional vocals. The choral work that's in it now is powerful enough to carry it through. Adding anything else would completely take away from that power, and end up minimizing the rest of the track.

If you don't mind me asking, what are you using for the choral samples? Is that a Soundiron product?

Take care.
V.

Awesome!

Just absolute fantastic work my friend

I'm listening to this and it's very good but one thing that seemed to be missing was the presence of a a bass. I think you could definitely up the power of this already-great song (I love the orchestral/choir stuff) by adding some low-end punch :P

ER

Excellent track ED!

The long intro is tensioned and than the music is like a soundtrack from a historical movie...
I vote no to sing...:-)

Hats off, Danke

Perfect!

can i ask if it normal for this to have a way higher +db then other tracks? normaly when i listen to tracks or other sound or music i can put my headphones volume at 43 and it wont disturb. on headphones.

Hello mate,
I love this track mate. It’s just a brilliant track…….favs it goes
Well done
Jamid

I can't fault it.
Sounds fantastic.
Will it be better with vocals?
Impossible to say without comparing it with and without really but the vocalist will have to be bloody good.

Do you have a link for him ?

I tried to search him in google but I found nothing :S

And thanks for your reply

-Antonius in die tribulationis

Pretty nice Heavy Metal track.

I pretty love your drum beat, and intro

but my favorite part is 1:34 at 1:52 min when you mixed the 2 voice (the cry and the non cry one)

Also welcome back :)

-Antonius in die tribulationis

DUDE!!! So Glad your back!!... I only downloaded the one track from ya... and I still listen to it.. Sorry I forgot the name.. but it was an unfinished song you did.. had some screaming talking and rap innit.. and it was jus a unique piece.. truly bro. don't listen to these fools with negative comments.. you are def on point. Don't "fix" anything. stand out, have what others call flaws, you have character. you have the qualities of an unpolished diamond. but your still a fucking diamond!!! whatever it is you got gwanin in your life you can overcome it.. if you wanna chat wit someone hit me.. I believe you still have my email..i sent you my track..anyways dude.. very very VERY happy you back...

peace
DEZ

I think you probably are one of the best heavy metal singers on the Loop....seriously, I think if you were in a studio doing your thing you would be surprised at just how good you really are (it's hard to really get a great vocal take while worrying about what the neighbors might think, haha). Still a really good job laying vocals over a great backing track. I needed this one to supplement my caffeine this morning. Thanks for that!

Keep at it, you have skills my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear

heh, this has been kind of the story of my life lately.

but yeah, with danke on this one.
turn down the voice and screaming (especially the one under a filter, around 43 seconds) and turn up everything else and this will be golden.

as for centralsdevs, he doesnt have the best english, im trying to teach him how to be less rude but i dont think its sticking...
he thinks your a good screamer though i guess?
i think your singing is excellent regardless

How that style of singing doesn't blow your throat out amazes me. Quite a performance. Hearing this music always reminds me of the song Institutionalized by Suicidal Tendencies. The elements of a screaming vocal and a more subdued talking/singing vocal seems to work to build tension and can really bring a ton of expression to a vocal performance, obviously.

Don't let life get you down man. We all have issues, getting past them makes us the people we become. Stay positive and def get back into making music, it can be a real the catalyst to some better times. Good luck, look forward to the new ones!

Wayne

Hi buddy!

You know what?

The song is a bit weak to your scream (maybe just in the mix) but you scream this number into the ground :-)
I very much like the howlings but the singing is sometimes out of tune (1.35 part...)
Idea: from 2.14 2 parted vocs...it's kinda rap orientated part...speech for main and the background is a low singing...hope, you get what I would like to...:-)

Good song, good vocs, need some corrections (on my humble opinion)

Hope, all is well in your rebuilt life!!!

Danke

that mean general you should't take it negative you suck. at the other hand your heveymetal screming, there you doing one of the greats job that i dont even dear to comment on:P

lots on angst.anger..lots of emotion...music is about the best way I know to let it out EYEDYE..I like the part where your use your more natural voice the best...Your mix serves the title well...I also think your talent might shine a bit brighter in the more melodic forms of metal (if that is your preferred genre)...check out groups like Nightwish....their pre 2009 stuff when Tarja was lead vocal is great....In any case, nice job on the mix...keep doing your music, but think about moving on to a better place...nobody else is in charge of that....Ed

you should work on your singing

Hey Eyedye...great use of the loop....i like your originality keeps things fresh...clean mix to.keep up the good work.

Peace!!

Jody

Sounds good,feel like a slim shady inspired record.

Its obvious you have the writing/lyrics abilities EYEDYE...the vocal delivery thing is one I have never mastered but looks like you are getting some input from our Looperfriends who know more about that than me...I agree with Orlando`s comments about the music/voice combination having a bit of the rock opera vibe...are you using a vocal coach at all??...might be worth a thought if you can find someone...I only mention it as I hear all kinds of potential in the way you combine words & music...and sometimes finding the right genre nitch is a key to falling into that more comfortable zone...my initial observation would be that your style might actually fit a pop music style better??...hope that doesn`t bug you as I mean it in a positive way....just keep at it...I`ve been doing it most of my life & still have a long way to go....good job....Ed

I liked it. Not what I'd usually listen to but it kept me interested! Nice work.

- JAweGuy