MOONLYTE

Hey Eyedye...great use of the loop....i like your originality keeps things fresh...clean mix to.keep up the good work.

Peace!!

Jody

Sounds good,feel like a slim shady inspired record.

Its obvious you have the writing/lyrics abilities EYEDYE...the vocal delivery thing is one I have never mastered but looks like you are getting some input from our Looperfriends who know more about that than me...I agree with Orlando`s comments about the music/voice combination having a bit of the rock opera vibe...are you using a vocal coach at all??...might be worth a thought if you can find someone...I only mention it as I hear all kinds of potential in the way you combine words & music...and sometimes finding the right genre nitch is a key to falling into that more comfortable zone...my initial observation would be that your style might actually fit a pop music style better??...hope that doesn`t bug you as I mean it in a positive way....just keep at it...I`ve been doing it most of my life & still have a long way to go....good job....Ed

I liked it. Not what I'd usually listen to but it kept me interested! Nice work.

- JAweGuy

cant go wrong with a MINOR2GO loop lol, nice vocals man :) i do also agree with some of what Evisma said, but its well written, sang and produced so above all nice track keep it up :)

Noice

Hey Mr. Dye

The falsetto thing is mostly you not projecting your voice. Power should be coming from the diaphragm. It sounds like it's coming from your throat.

The pitch thing is just, it doesn't sound like you wrote "notes" to sing in parts. It seems kinda "fast and loose" right now. Like I said, I know this is in the early stages so I shouldn't judge it like it was finished.

I do like where you're going with this. Maybe there's pointers on projecting your voice and whatnot online.

Hope all is well.

Evan

It feels kind of an R&B sound but something els.

Moments reminiscent of "Mindless Self-Indulgence".

You sing in a low falsetto sometimes, like a loud whisper. Odd. Pitch seems kinda hard to pin down. Seems like you spent time on the lyrics, but not the delivery. I know you'll make it better and that this is in it's early form.

Take care

Evan

nice vocals and music so far. I sort of assume it is already finished anyway because I cant imagine the rest of the song.
Are you going to add some synth solo, or?
Nice work so far and looking forward for the continuation. Alex

Very promissing preview, I must say! I really like the vocals
and as if there's a bit of rock-opera style in it...very interesting.:)

Compliments_____Orlando

Oh and I play off Minor2Go a lot too. So if you ever need female vox to collab with someday. I'm always up for it.

I'd like to upload more of my stuff but apparently there's this rule of one song per day and it discourages me, lol

Later!

Oh no problem, hon!

The preview thing I totally understand.

I get about trying different angles. It's the best part in all this. Singing out short melodies behind certain areas in this track really does compliment it.

Though, it rocks as is! So whatever you decide. Can't wait to hear it completed!
Again, keep rocking!
:)
-Rae (Bre)

Most def!

I put silent screams (my signature) in my stuff ..
Sick track

I was singing freestyles some backings

You could also add backings not to layer what's there it but to fill it out? That's my suggestion ..
Though, overall great track

Keep rocking!
-Rae (Bre)

Hi Bro
absolutely it Has a little of everything
the piano was great with everything else
and with me as a Metal an rock fan
the screaming part was amazing
for me i think that mixing music styles can give such a great results
GO ON BRO

Samer

Nice work on putting that together, sounds good. Nice bass on that, always love bass.

- JAweGuy

Brilliant work!

Your voice really fits with the piano. Really enjoyed it.

Very interesting track you have here, dude. Remind me one one of the many creepypastas read on youtube, ironic how I never find any of them creepy but that's not the point. The point is, this is very enchanting, charming, and peaks my morbid curiosity. Keep it up.

Brilliant track bro. Love it. Poignant lyrics.

Hey mate

you had me right from the start even before hitting play button, when you mention piano in piece, totally love piano in piece's, excellent piano work, and the vocals good too, nice listen mate...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

Nice track

Nice work, especially for your first track! This is 100 times better than my first track. Keep this kind of work up and you may start to surprise yourself.

Some tips of mine would be to automate the bass's volume so that it stays on low while you have the solo thing going on or even put a pad in there. Leaving only one instrument in even when you're trying to just make one sound pop out, usually takes away from the dynamics and makes the song dull. So instead of removing all of the other instruments completely, it's best to just lower the volume of the instruments you want to fade and then bring it back up when you're done with the solo.

Other than that, I think you did a very great job for a beginner! Keep up the good work!

the sounds are pretty nice but would sound better if you side chained your sounds to your kick

certainly a great effort for a first attempt. I like the square wave synths (plucks) and the unusual way you build this tune. I think I would like to hear a more intricate percussion and bass line on this as the song moves along. Not a critique but just what I hear as I listen to this. Great songs give great ideas to musicians. Keep on it!