greatness, hey - hahahah, i know this is cheesy, but i'm 43 dude, and this song I'm linkin ya to is what your song hereminds me of, but 20 years agooo... It was greatness...
man this is awesome!!!...mate you have an aggressive scream!very much slipknot style.man i want to write a punkish, slipknot/ deftones style tune for you to do vocals on man!
fk yeah! Epic! Love the choir, piano and strings. The title reminded of Angels and Demons book. What keeps coming to mind is the statue of The Ecstasy of Saint Teresa :p
I realy like the parts where the female voices are in. They sound so cool "world music" like and with all the other sounds around it is a very special kind of rap music. Don't get me wrong, i like the compleete track, but this special parts have something that sounds realy fresh to me. Hard core etnic industrial rap music!
So What I like about this.
Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve
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ok, done kissin ass or whatevva'
Big Audio Dynamite - E=MC2
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ShortBusMusic don't lie ;)
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ShortBusMusic don't lie ;)
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Sounds and samples are well choosen.
Vocals sounds freaky good and powerfull.
Well done
stay tuned
joe
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Good work
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joe
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Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve