Tonality

I recognize the voice. Haunting as before.

Care for yourself.

Evan

I don't care that people might feel that the guitar work is simple. Nor that the vocals are not polished. It is an expression of minimalistic sound and emotional singing that even though does not resonate in our English thinking minds (not all of you mind that) It touches all of us as musicians at what ever level we are at as an expression. and there is something too this that is compelling. It's kinda like when I listen to Midnight Oil's Bed's are Burning. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ejorQVy3m8E&html5=1
I know Peter Garrett is not the greatest singer by any stretch and parts are off key..but the way he delivers the emotional impact in a ..dare I say simple chord structure of a song..but it compels me to turn up the volume every time. The message, the emotion of the song just compels you to listen. Or Neil Young (great songwriter..not a great singer (unless harmony)) but still just compeling to listen too...Leonard Cohen, Tom Waits, Chrissy Hynde, Sioxsie Sioux.. I could go on. IMHO

Nice one man...fortunatelly I don't understand the words but it's got a special tone, mood...there is no problem at all with your guitar play and your voice is unique for me...not a best technically but I really don't understand too, what those professional preachers looking for here? (that Mallorca sunshine...:-)
Good track...
Danke

To echo Ed's comment... yes it's incredibly reminiscent of Leonard Cohen in the beggining. While I don't understand the language, I must say that I surely recognize the genuine and pristine soulfulness in your interpretation and even more good news is that it stands on it's own merrit...it's really unique in that respect. It's only that maybe you should done it a bit shorter, cause it might appear a bit repetitive after some time. But i really don't understand some of the Candelaria's criticism...why to whine about amateurishness on an obviously amateurish site? It's something like walking into the hospital and saying:"Oh, what a nice hospital, but why the hell is everybody ill in here!?".

For the uniqueness and independence im giving you my "fav"!:)

Respect____Orlando

Hi Tonality....the introduction part of this one reminds me very much of a famous Canadian singer called Leonard Cohen...while I do not understand the words, you present them with feeling and the acoustic guitar is good accompaniment for this one....well done...keep doing the music...Ed

Interesting song, I am not real sure why a couple of people have criticized the guitar playing, not every song needs to have a fancy sound to it especially with an acoustic guitar. Keep up the songwriting.

you don't sing bad , but this was a very
easy track for singing .
and you're by far in a distance with solfeggio
breathing rules for a serious singer !
but all these things apart your guirar playing is the
biggest problem !

this simple rhytmry is clearly amateurish and you seem
don't know you can change this simple 3.4 rhythm sometimes !

for me instrumentally this is very amateurish and undone

as an instrumental track , this was an meaning guitar
training -without vox i mean-.

and this simple fact changes all you've done to
an amateur work for my ear .

but your larynx has potential .
and if you learn how to breath you can be a singer in
premier league of music .

good luck.

This has a chill sort of feel to it. The guitar part is very relaxing and your vocals fit well. Keep em coming.

in my eyes you sing well.
but this is a novice type of playing .
and an wrong manner of mix i think .
here have heared very very better sorts of guitar
playing and well mixed in your musics !
but still i like you singing.
Elena

I have no idea what you're saying but I still the song and the way you sing.

Ok, I got it.

Honestly, I don't really understand this song...you said, you want to sing but there is not enough free place for the singer...it's a riff collection (not bad) without built for a vocal focused number...this is my true opinion, no offense just answer to your question...

My best wishes, Danke

Hey...

This song is so pure, heartfelt and clear in the good meaning of the word...I love your voice when you sing in the mid level but the low one from 1.57 is not your style, I think...

Though it's a super song...

Congrats, Danke

Nicely done. Like the others I am anxious to hear this one when it is finished. And I agree on the great guitar tone. Keep it up!!!

Bear

Nice guitar tone...
curious to hear what you'll make out of it...
are you trying to be ironic?
Ciao, Domenico

Nice rendition of 'Silent Night' but I have to agree with Behnam. Why did you re-name it?

Cheers,
Scott

my friend , U're my good friend and excuse me for writing this buT for me it doesn't seem to be fair that U cover something from a composr and name iT as anotherthings specially when U haven't even put any linX and haven't mentioned to the name of track and withouT truely attention of secoond commenT,persoanly I din't know this music.if there was anything opposite to fav mark,T want to pushed that beside this track.sorry.best wishes.___Behnam

Was not expecting Silent Night. Your guitar tone is very fitting. Backing tracks could use some definition.

I never know what to expect from you and Behnam, and that is what I love about you both!!!

I would like to hear your finished version when it is done!

Evan

sound great I lke how tis hesps rnb withthe tontes... tones hate xmas songs but not this one! lol

So you covered Stille Nacht, heilige Nacht)? and named it something else??

I would like to be there with you to give a rhythm section to this and get the groovy out from this awesome guitar tone :-)
Love it
Best, Danke

what!there's no relelvance between what I have told U with my friendship to my friends Ed & Domenico & I don't know what jivY & trashY U're saying!
extarction from what ?! I think U don't underestand what U're saying ! can I cutout a part of your track & another part from another composer and set them beside eachothr and tell that's my music? it's funny to see someone has writtten
below his track made by deciBel's guitar loop.
I have no guitar loop for publish if U look to my loops too!
those traX which U have cutout these parts from them and used them in this funny music,those wasn't sent to U to U use them in this way ! aghaye aziz farsi motvejjeh mishid?
no I'm not jew dear silly muslim colleague.
in my eyes there's no difference between U religious people
& U're the same for me when I have no god and no religious buT I'm not here to talk about these things .
wish U and your murder leader heal soon.
buT may I know , if ''Iran'' is yours ,not needed U say I knew that before too that I have no countrY buT may we know why U've written Russia in your profile & when I asked U why U answered me ''what I don't write'' won't talk with an iranian man . I don't know how they talk to me , buT if I was instead of them I would never speak to someone who think there's different between men & women human rights.and if U want girl looperman is noT true place for that sill
& may I know what does it mean that U've written russia and sing Farsi?i'm not artist to be your fav artist.i have no album and work in a company as a simple engineer.
buT I'm glad U don't like me in the same way that I'm glad we have never meet eachother .
I'm more busy to can leave the life righT now ,so
can't keep on this dangerous discussion with a muslim. U muslims may have bomb with yourselves in your pockeT & I don't want to be killed by that bomb !!hahaha...
better wishes...___Behnam

The gap is at 1:12 where everything goes silent. I was just wondering if it was on purpose. Too bad you used Benham's audio without permission.

well , I should write just 1 thing below your track :
U had not this premission to use them withouT sayinG to me .
do U know ?
can U underestand this ?

Well done Tonality....Behnam is a very good musician so you have good musical company for this one....I hope you find the vocal you want....Ed