Grapefruit Haze (WIP) - Jimski

25th Feb 2011 12:26 - 15 years ago
Description : First attempt at DnB.
Please review, give me feedback!

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Jimski some feedback.

CrashTheSystem
CrashTheSystem 3rd Mar 2011 15:55 - 15 years ago
Not bad for a first attempt. I definately hear a few things that can be fixed but its all been said already.

So instead I'll focus on the good. I really like sounds you used, and the drums sound nice. Keep workin on it! -Gabe

Peace Love Jesus!
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Cheers bro! Thanks, I don't know much about equalising and all that so the sounds are probably... Hmm... Not 100% correct but cheers anyways man :)
Dreagoen
Dreagoen 3rd Mar 2011 14:10 - 15 years ago
Pretty good track you made, but some sounds just don't fit. Try relistening to your track and if you hear sounds you don't like chaging with others. Very good as a first try. Keep it up!

btw I think you were using FLStudio. At least some sounds from it.
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yeaa, I was using FL lol. Thanks for the incouragement and advice :)
BlumeChoon
BlumeChoon 2nd Mar 2011 14:45 - 15 years ago
Cool, better then my first attempt at the genre. I like the runnin beats and the bass synth. Just lacking a good low end (sub)and some leveling EQing...etc... Other then that it's a great start! I like the title too! I'd like to hear some of your future works and your progression! Keep at it bro!

Blume:)
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Aha, thanks man. The title came from a little thing me and a friend were jammin with whilst making it :P
subSpace
subSpace 28th Feb 2011 15:28 - 15 years ago
umm i like the track but your levels are off ever so slightly in this track i would turn your drum loops up the bass at the drop sounds very computer made but the track is not bad i get the concept its your first dnb track and also i agree with what numberjack says i think you should play with your levels a bit and make it sound better because it could be a killer track with the right level of mastering done on it keep them coming bro
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Cheers :)
Phyruis
Phyruis 27th Feb 2011 10:28 - 15 years ago
some good ideas... not bad for a first try... you need to try adding in a sub and mixing it up more... your drops need to be padded so it would go crash sound...smooth pad or dark pad or whatever rather than silence... you should have a listen to some of the dnb artist here at the loop...rollagee or travis huckins get some ideas these guys are great at this genre..anyway nice first try I have heard alot worst brother...keep 'em coming
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks man. Always nice to have people's opinions and input (Y)
Soundli
Soundli 25th Feb 2011 13:22 - 15 years ago
Not perfect,but not bad,its sounds very nice.
But i dont like "Crash" Sound and other two sounds.
8/10
Jimski
Jimski replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Cheers pal. Yeaa, I'm gonna change those sounds, I just whacked 'em in for now as it's still a work in progress but thanks again :)

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