Long Road - Sirrmineyez

19th Feb 2011 23:07 - 15 years ago
Description : Hmm,I wrote this song picturing myself as part of the violent crowd being a witness to Christs beaten body struggling to make it to Calvary.Evan at his weakest point,he completed the mission.I would ave just given up in the street.Amazing.So it starts off "You walked this road alone,with the eyes of the world on you,yeah Made all my wrongs your own,forgiving us for what WE do.
A nice tune but needs more work.Its like a body wit no soul, but i wanted to put it on anyway.So im on lyrics and guitar and my bro nastee is rapping.Recorded on a Zoom mrs1044.Will be happy for suggestions and feedback.Have a listen

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Twanna1
Twanna1 30th Mar 2011 03:59 - 15 years ago
Beautiful song. I could not understand the rap part though. The song has a heart-felt message and it will bless those who hear it if they could understand what is being said. Other than that, beautiful.

Have a blessed week.

Twanna
sirrmineyez
sirrmineyez replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey T,thanks for the reply.I know my bro wasnt 100% in it,but he had just written that 30min prior to puttin it on loopy.But he has done a proper version that i havent even heard yet.Hes given me the Zoom mrs1044 back but wit no power lead.Never mind,ive just been playin with the ableton on my new apple lappy i just got and man i thought the Zoom was complicated.So if you got any tips on ableton live 8,i sure could do wit som.But the sound is awesom.Oh i got ur reply via email in regards to masterpiece,thanks.I really luv that song,oh and being Maori which is a native from New Zealand(lol)is where Tino aatahua comes from(very beautiful)Hey, it was cool 2 catch up T.Catch ya later.Bless ya
Yttrium
Yttrium 27th Feb 2011 06:02 - 15 years ago
It's good to actually hear a song with meaning ^_^ The vocals are a little muddy, but could easily be fixed :D Overall I'd say 8/10 :)
sirrmineyez
sirrmineyez replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hey Yttrium thank u for that + review.i wasnt expecting anything as i know that there is so much to do in this piece.My reverb/c,delay are out, my bro needs to put a bit more heart into his flow and as for myself it could be the cheap mic that we use or it could be that im not fit enough to do vocals.So that was pretty uplifting,cheers
Demagolka
Demagolka 23rd Feb 2011 10:05 - 15 years ago
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