Listen To Diamonds In The Debris Hip Hop Song By TheCawbShow At Looperman.com

27th Nov 2010 00:02 - 15 years ago
Description : A track i made this morning...looking for honest opinions...Will only be on for a short time

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give TheCawbShow some feedback.

StrikingDaggers
StrikingDaggers 17th Dec 2010 20:29 - 15 years ago
Cool track TheCawbShow. The beats really tight man. Your lyrics are tight to man but like others have said you just got to work a little on the flow. Keep at it. Really dope stuff so far.
PatternsofPerfection
PatternsofPerfection 27th Nov 2010 23:24 - 15 years ago
You have an artistic flow man, but you need to put emphasis at the right moments to give emotion to this. I can tell you dont have the best mic, try addin some fx effects to your vocals to clear em up a bit. Also, some of you lines might make people look away, just gotta prove you mean it.. -Peace man

P.O.P.
EZPeezy
EZPeezy 27th Nov 2010 02:49 - 15 years ago
get the production of the music better because right now i can't really give a honest feedback just work on the rhyme scheme and flow
SkribleJ
SkribleJ 27th Nov 2010 01:52 - 15 years ago
yo first of all, great track..
but u gotta work on that flow b, i mean i gotta work on mine too. but u kno we're the future of hiphop and we gotta do our best to get better at it. besides all the deep sh*t i just wrote, great track, great beat, aggressive lyrics and just a killer outcome. and also work on the levels, make sure a song is at its top quality when u show it to the public, kno what i mean?
adamms
adamms 27th Nov 2010 01:39 - 15 years ago
to me just sounds like a free style rant to me. vocals are to high could barley hear the beat. but lyrics where not that bad, needs some work just sounds incomplete
yeshintae
yeshintae 27th Nov 2010 01:34 - 15 years ago
This beat is PHIRE! MOSDEF MY kinda hip-hop!

I like your style fam your lyrics are good but
your delivery and levels are off. Delivery will come
as you rap and levels is technique so you can develop
that over time. EQ tha sounds, rework your delivery,
and reset tha levels for everything and you'll have a great
Hip Hop track!

Keep it Up

Respect from LA
DJSchmeeJ
DJSchmeeJ 27th Nov 2010 00:27 - 15 years ago
musicwise wise it's good. The f bombs get a little old, and the levels are way too high! Bring em down and watch the signal clipping on the mic. Just imagine how many more places it would be heard though, if it were a cleaner version. I respect people doin thier thing. I mean it doesn't offend me or anything....just sayin... 1 time it makes a statement..2 times..eeeh...ok your angry...3 times and more....just tryin too hard. You said you wanted HONEST! That being said...great f'in track man! Just a tweak or two!

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