Description : A track i made this morning...looking for honest opinions...Will only be on for a short time

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  1. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Fri 17th Dec 2010 - 13 years ago

    Cool track TheCawbShow. The beats really tight man. Your lyrics are tight to man but like others have said you just got to work a little on the flow. Keep at it. Really dope stuff so far.

  2. PatternsofPerfection
    PatternsofPerfection on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    You have an artistic flow man, but you need to put emphasis at the right moments to give emotion to this. I can tell you dont have the best mic, try addin some fx effects to your vocals to clear em up a bit. Also, some of you lines might make people look away, just gotta prove you mean it.. -Peace man

    P.O.P.

  3. EZPeezy
    EZPeezy on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    get the production of the music better because right now i can't really give a honest feedback just work on the rhyme scheme and flow

  4. SkribleJ
    SkribleJ on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    yo first of all, great track..
    but u gotta work on that flow b, i mean i gotta work on mine too. but u kno we're the future of hiphop and we gotta do our best to get better at it. besides all the deep sh*t i just wrote, great track, great beat, aggressive lyrics and just a killer outcome. and also work on the levels, make sure a song is at its top quality when u show it to the public, kno what i mean?

  5. adamms
    adamms on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    to me just sounds like a free style rant to me. vocals are to high could barley hear the beat. but lyrics where not that bad, needs some work just sounds incomplete

  6. yeshintae
    yeshintae on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    This beat is PHIRE! MOSDEF MY kinda hip-hop!

    I like your style fam your lyrics are good but
    your delivery and levels are off. Delivery will come
    as you rap and levels is technique so you can develop
    that over time. EQ tha sounds, rework your delivery,
    and reset tha levels for everything and you'll have a great
    Hip Hop track!

    Keep it Up

    Respect from LA

  7. DJSchmeeJ
    DJSchmeeJ on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    musicwise wise it's good. The f bombs get a little old, and the levels are way too high! Bring em down and watch the signal clipping on the mic. Just imagine how many more places it would be heard though, if it were a cleaner version. I respect people doin thier thing. I mean it doesn't offend me or anything....just sayin... 1 time it makes a statement..2 times..eeeh...ok your angry...3 times and more....just tryin too hard. You said you wanted HONEST! That being said...great f'in track man! Just a tweak or two!

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