Description : Warning:I am a song writer,never claimed or will be a singer, Just an idea I came up with for the beat that I think went well,any singer or singers think they can do this song then try your best.I wrote the words in under 20mins,it took me a few hrs though I must admit to put it together, I am as I always stress no engineer or producer,just a very talented writer,My main genre is Hip-Hop,I have the words,I didn't write the hook cause I Freestyled it,recorded it and just copy and pasted it throughout the track but it's pretty simple,lol.and here are the wordz az I have written them, and again cause I know haters,always looking for a reason and can't even read this long note for a reason,let me help you out "I AM NO SINGER"I know I can't sing,I get paid to Ghost write,and hip-hop,(and it's on Garage Band)I just want my under ground heads to see my talent 1st before the media does,Im more eager to impress you guys not the media.(People who are as passionate as me if not more)

Wordz...-EVERY TIME GURL I LOOK N2 UR EYEZ/N U KNO GURL IT'S JUS THERE IZ NO SUPRIZE,N U KNO GURL I LIKE U N I LUV UR THIGHS/N I LUV EVRYTHNG N EVEN WEN I CUM INSIDE/ N U KNO DAT UR ALWAYZ HERE N UR LUVN ME/N I KULD FEEL IT INDA WAYZ DAT UR HUGGN ME/N I KAN FEEL IT BYDA WAY DAT U RUBBN ME/

(Bridge)...SHE WANA B BY MYSIDE/SO I TEL HER 2 HOP IN DA RIDE/...

...NOW U KNO U ALWAYZ CHILLIN IN MY WORLD/BUT IM DA VILLAN WEN I DON'T MAKE U MY GURL/I GOT LUV 4U/BUT IM JUS NOT IN LUV WIF U/BUT U KNO UR SO BEAUTIFUL/N I WISH IT KULD B MUTUAL/BUT WE GOT A SPECIAL FRENDSHIP/SO Y SHULD WE JUS END IT/ SHE WANA B BY MYSIDE/SO I TEL HER 2 HOP IN DA RIDE/...

...I,CAN NEVA LOOK N2 UR EYEZ/EYEZ N LIE/KUZ I PROMISED I WULD NEVA MAKE U KRY/KUZ UR,MY BEST FREND/N WE'LL RIDE 2DA END/WEN I BREAK UP WIT OTHAZ,U'LL B THERE AGAIN N AGAIN/

the bars we're 8 a piece instead of 16,which would be tricky for a novice,but Im a Pro I welcomed the challenge how ever tricky a beat,after all thats how we reach new levels right. and put our money where our mouth is when we claim To Be The Best! ;) ~T.R.I~ Shout out to the man behind the beat as always.

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  1. ImproveWithError
    ImproveWithError on Fri 9th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    Nice job, I think you get your point across nicely. You don't sound horrible, so that is good :) Keep it up man.

    MrTriMurda
    Reply by MrTriMurda

    Tks,I appreciate it,I did want to try something different,so at least Im not horrible,but I know not great but it's the luv of music,I want to do more,just need singers.

  2. tcpscore
    tcpscore on Fri 9th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    I like the track. Id like to here it with those lyrics being rapped and not sung. and keep the chorus sung. but nice anyways....I like the track. Not bashing or anything. Im digging it

    MrTriMurda
    Reply by MrTriMurda

    You know normally I would of,But I have to show off my capabilities,Im not just good at Hip-Hop,lol But I can try a hip-hop version just for kicks. BUt it would take away from the vibe, Plus the song got me some so I sure ain't mad, it's all you need,Honesty and admiration and they melt at your feet,lol but for real I wanted it R&B for a reason but I appreciate your thoughts and feed back always.

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