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Tags : | Hip Hop | 4.71 MB | Featured

Description : this is a track using beats from a drum program i have but the riff is some looperman sounds i really wanted to work with someone on this or hear some one do something with it i have a chorus idea but am stumped lyrically

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  1. ChaseManhattan
    ChaseManhattan on Fri 16th Apr 2010 - 14 years ago

    nice drum loops i like the strings too but it seems like something could be added i cant describe. very interesting and made me think a lot of alternative hip hop i like it. could still be mastered to awesomeness eveen more though. cant describe it though

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    I really appreciate the review, I hear ya that it's missing something. I have no recording capability for the moment so the tracks dead in the water , but most people like this over all my other tracks. which drives me to add to it . I will as soon as I'm up and running . Thank you

  2. doomgotbeats
    doomgotbeats on Fri 9th Apr 2010 - 14 years ago

    this track is ILL dog...if you get a chance check out my beats and my group's page:Prosthetik Intelligentz page...peace

    https://www.looperman.com/users/detail/203625
    https://www.looperman.com/users/detail/362664

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thanks for the review . I'll check your tracks today thanks again

  3. Mouthman
    Mouthman on Wed 17th Mar 2010 - 14 years ago

    like the gritty drums a lot mate! maybe a little too much distortion though? otherwise really really sick mate keep it up

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thanks for the review and listening i appreciate it . I actually used Jacob dylans Arythmia drum program. well beats from Nine Inch Nails drummer

  4. haven
    haven on Sat 27th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    i actually DO like the static - I have many times tried to experiment with that and people always think it is just some kind of error - but no - love the string motif - nice work and the change in drums sounds (gate?)

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    i really appreciate that man the drum work is arythmia which is industrial drum packets it was my first attempt trying to make some industrial infused hip hop thanks again

  5. ChrisMac456
    ChrisMac456 on Tue 16th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    Man, you have some great stuff my man, love the drums and 808er said definately great storytelling track. Keep up the great work... ONE

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thanks for taking a listen i really appreciate it

  6. TheDonMusic
    TheDonMusic on Sat 6th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    this has that west coast dre type of melody, real smooth and laid back
    faved this one

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thank you i love what you had to say im glad you liked it

  7. raporia
    raporia on Sun 10th Jan 2010 - 14 years ago

    now this is a great track love hearing the unique sound you've created awesome stuff

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thank you thank you i really appreciate you diggin this

  8. DJ_Green
    DJ_Green on Sun 3rd Jan 2010 - 14 years ago

    Not 100% sure about the distortion/fuzz, but overall this is a pretty sick beat, i really like the drums.

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thank you i actually used a program of beats from the drummer of Nine Inch Nails

  9. Nosleeves
    Nosleeves on Fri 1st Jan 2010 - 14 years ago

    sorry but the staitc effect sound kind of interfares with the song,nice dnb tho,that deep violin sample is the main lead i like that sound a lot,oaky job.

  10. MrPayne
    MrPayne on Thu 3rd Dec 2009 - 14 years ago

    Really liking the sound of this one that industrial sound works really well makes it a whole different kind of hip hop tune. Quite dark too can def see the ship idea that Califken was talking about.

  11. DuckCez
    DuckCez on Mon 30th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    I agree, it need a few more sounds, but overall it's a good beat.

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thanks for listening thanks for the review

  12. IBoBeatz
    IBoBeatz on Sat 28th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    there is something missing.. some other sounds :)

    try it out. add some sounds.

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    thanks man my recordings down for the moment be tricky to add sounds to that but any suggestion you must be hearin something in your head throw me an idea

  13. ProfitzBeatz
    ProfitzBeatz on Fri 27th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    i like that main instrument nice story tellin'' track keep it up

  14. CalifKen
    CalifKen on Fri 27th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    And then you can take the sentiment from tragic to joyful as the bye bye bye, the part where you actually realize which way you're going, at first implies that it might be hell, but by the 2nd or 3rd round of the chorus, it's more joyful, and without ever saying it directly, the listener can feel that you (and the listener in a way) have gone to heaven.

  15. CalifKen
    CalifKen on Fri 27th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    k - here's an idea off the top of my head. since that has bye in it, make a play on words, have the lyrics be regae as well, playing between "hello" and "heaven" and "hell", he he hell he hell he he he heaven he he ..... THUS!!! .... you have a song about dying, and wondering which way you're gonna go.

  16. CalifKen
    CalifKen on Fri 27th Nov 2009 - 14 years ago

    this has some chill, sort of almost industrial potential. electronic, kind of like a ship on the matrix, laid back on a sunny afternoon. yeh i know there are no "sunny afternoons" in the matrix "world of the real" but whatever. what's your chorus idea?

    PikeNinja
    Reply by PikeNinja

    man i love your review coolest thing ive heard well dont really have words ive tried several but absolutely like a thick haunting regae style despair type chorus but like bi di bye bye bye bi di bye bye bye if that makes any sense at all im trying

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