For Revenge - AmnestieProductions

id love to spit on this man, rock/rap is hard man love it!!

ok i don't mean to burst your bubble, but alot of your beats i think you are knocking out too fast, because you could do sooooooooo much more with this, it needs progression and feeling, it's all good getting a loop and throwing a drum loop together, which i will say the drum loop is pretty cool, but you need strings, you need pitch bending synths like on your top track,

this isn't hate or negative feed, just think that you can do better, you have it in you, just stop being lazy, rushing projects doesn't get you anywhere i used to do that and i end up with like 100 half finished efforts... come on man prove to yourself you can make not just a hip hop beat, but a CLUB BANGER...

good luck

this is track is ill that i was trying to figure out which of my favorite lyricists i'd like to hear over it....and i couldn't isolate just one cuz the beat is so hard...out fu@*ing standing homie...one