The Place Of Your Dreams - JohnnieSmoke

8th Dec 2025 19:18 - 11 months ago
Description : Its been a while folks, I hope everyone is well. I've got one for you.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give JohnnieSmoke some feedback.

kingmt77
kingmt77 14th Dec 2025 09:22 - 11 months ago
JS dont hesitate to hit me up if I could be of any assistance!
dimestop
dimestop 13th Dec 2025 11:54 - 11 months ago
ok Johnnie i found it, i like the music you got here and like Mark just the o'os need a tweak but other than that its good to here you and see you back around, mail LM and let them know about your track not moving from page two after you comment, see what they say
kingmt77
kingmt77 13th Dec 2025 02:59 - 11 months ago
JS! Yep IMPROVEMENT! Lets try this, match the "Oh oh "from the 1:42 and 1:46 time stamps and match that for the entrance "Oh oh" 's. Do this , then this banger is a wrap. Your free flowing style is full on point tho.
Let's Gooooooo,
Mark
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 10th Dec 2025 03:56 - 11 months ago
JohnnieSmoke back in the house. Nice work.
JohnnieSmoke
JohnnieSmoke replied 11th Dec 2025 - 11 months ago
Back in the house!
kingmt77
kingmt77 8th Dec 2025 22:55 - 11 months ago
Welcome back JS! I hear where you are going! The backing track is fire. What I would like to hear, Is for you to do another take on your vocals to address the pitch variations. In particular the "Oh oh Oh oh" sections only. The rest of your vocals I could feel, and you hit just right. I look forward to the next take my friend.
Peace,
Mark
JohnnieSmoke
JohnnieSmoke replied 11th Dec 2025 - 11 months ago
Thanks for the ears Mark, yes I strive to hat the Oh-ooh-oh-oooh-woah with a bit more precision.

Johnnie
Kayos2
Kayos2 8th Dec 2025 21:10 - 11 months ago
Has a folky feeling and that makes this an interesting track journey with the chillout vibe - vocals could do with a little work. Good overall tune
JohnnieSmoke
JohnnieSmoke replied 11th Dec 2025 - 11 months ago
Thanks for the ears!

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