Listen To Project 9 Mau5 Dance Song By Paulcreaney At Looperman.com

Paul, how are ya now?
Considering you just picked up a DAW in January, I'd say you're doing alright. There are definitely some improvements that could be made, but you're off to a good start.
One thing I suggest is that when you decide which key you're going to work in, figure out which notes/chords correlate with that key. Then when you're composing, you can make sure that everything sits in the right place. I bring this up because there are parts where your instruments don't quite sit comfortably together, creating a dissonance that leaves it sounding "off". Because it is. That doesn't only apply to your synths, bass, and other instruments, but, your kick drum as well. Any time you have a drum with any sort of a decay or sustain, like most electronic drums do, you'll want to make sure they're tuned to the key as well.
But, I have to say, for a beginner, job well done. You'll learn as you go. I've been doing it for almost 20 years and I'm still learning new things all the time. As long as you enjoy it, you'll keep improving.
Keep it up.
Take care.
V.

i dont get it why is everyone talking about vocals? did you remove them? sounds good to me!

Definite Deadmau5 vibe here, not saying anything bad. I love this, would like to hear more of this style from you...well done.

You've got quite some good, joyful instrumentals, man.

I'm not going to lie and say this sounded great I don't sugar coat nothing it's so off key the sound is bad I had to cover my ears can't u hear how horrible this is I don't get it all your other tracks were good but the singing I couldn't bare plz don't get mad at me I can't be the only one that hears it

Hi, Paul: Nice background instrumental. Again, more variation which is essential to keep up interest, although I do realize that in tracks meant for club play, things can go on much longer to lock in the groove for dancers/listeners. I do agree with Anthony's comments about the tuning of the vocal from Splice. It's clearly not in the same key as your instrumental backing. Tuning it down from A minor to G minor should have worked, but it doesn't sit right, at last to my ears. I'm lousy at figuring out the key of music just from listening to it. I have some software plugins that can do that for me more reliably. Maybe the Splice loop was mis-labelled?

Reminds me of Deadmau5! Love it :)

Love the tune and beat - v danceable

Very nice track Paul, with beautiful beat and melodies. What let me in question was the vocals and their tuning.
Good vocals but I think in their own scale. I believe this is something you wanted from the vocal part so i is just my humble opinion and nothing more.
Well done.
Best regards, Anthony

Hello Paul ! Summer vibe , I enjoyed the track , nice vocals , very well done ! Cheerssssss !

Hello paulcreaney, this is dancehall ready, the clubs jump with tracks such as this and great vocals keep it jumping......another fine track my friend.

I like it! Nice melodies! Vocals are cool. Summer hit! Cheers!