Description : Recent track I've started. I'm still working on it and have small tweaks in mind. Please share any feedback you may have, I appreciate all of it! :)

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  1. ValveDriver
    ValveDriver on Tue 4th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    This isn't really my style of music, so I can't really say if it's fitting or not. But, taking it for what it is, it's pretty good.

    All of the levels sound good to me. Everything sits well in the mix. The only thing I would have done differently is use the Stereo Shaper on the sub, with all 4 sliders set right around 6.0 db. That would still keep it mostly centered, but spread the edges out just a little bit to fill in the space between the drums and the piano. Speaking of piano, the delay reverb and stereo effects are good. Nice and dynamic.

    I know you said you plan on making some adjustments, and I don't know what they are, so I'll suggest this anyhow...

    at the 1:08 mark, I would introduce some pads, or strings in the background to fill it out a little bit more. Right now, with just the drums, bass and piano, it gets repetitive. It's a strong foundation for what could be a much larger piece.

    But, then again, I don't listen to hip-hop, and I don't know what you're going for, so take my opinions for what they are.

    Overall, excellent work. Keep it up.
    Take care.
    V.

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    Sorry I haven't replied sooner to this comment. Firstly, thank you for your in-depth and thought-out response. I'll give what you mentioned a try, If you've got any other suggestions for my newer tracks that'd well appreciated as well. I'm not sure how to mix and master yet so I'm trying to get advice from folks who do, so like I had said before, any other tricks or methods you know that you'd be willing to share, just swing over to my profile where I have my email and send me a message. Thanks for everything :)

  2. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Tue 4th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    This has a huge sound, very kinda stately which is a good thing, it's quite beautiful! indeed. Overall A GREAT! track which takes me on the most wonderful! musical journey. I like it and it's a fave...Keep up the wonderful work. Kudos

    Jalnsvrs
    Reply by Jalnsvrs

    I really appreciate your feedback, dude! I'm so glad you liked it and I plan to keep them coming in the future! Take care :)

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