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8th Aug 2019 18:08 - 6 years ago
Description : I did not create the beat, I only created the lyrics and I am, of course the singer lol.. um, my first time uploading a song, also first time singing off to someone else beat (which is a wicked beat by the way). Produced by iamarty, look him.. or her up on here lol and um, enjoy what i created, vocal wise :D I honestly would like to know your feedback on this because I REALLY want to be a recording artist.. :)

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give oheshawn some feedback.

tsochai
tsochai 10th Aug 2019 05:10 - 6 years ago
you have a great voice
very dope vocal range
would be great to hear more from you
so much hidden talent on this site
so glad i caught this
great work , wow

arty is a really nice producer ive done some work on his productions before

anyways, keep it up! please, for all of us
inspiration... truly
much love
-CAP
oheshawn
oheshawn replied 10th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago
Oh my gosh! Thank you!! That really made my day :) but don’t worry, there’s plenty more where that came for sure! I’m just getting started!! :D and yess, arty is literally the greatest, I’m so glad that I came across this masterpiece of a beat!
wikkid
wikkid 9th Aug 2019 04:55 - 6 years ago
Hi,

I think you did a good job on the lyrics and the lead melody. I do like that you took chances (the jazzy stylings in certain sections, specifically at 1:34-1:36 lyric "I'm really happy that you found me").

I agree with both Danke and iamarty. I personally love the tone of your voice, and since it takes courage to put your work out for public critique, I think as time goes on and with more experience you will "hear" when the harmony you've created doesn't quite work with the chords in a song. That being said, singing a pleasing melody over original music takes skill, and writing original lyrics is even harder. I think you've succeeded at both. Please keep at it, because you've got talent.
oheshawn
oheshawn replied 10th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago
Hey, man! I’m gonna be real with you, I was literally up that same night writing lyrics until I got done, which was like 3 or 4 in the morning. And it was soo many things that I could of done with this beat, so I had options about what to do with this work of art! I just love that you felt the same way that I felt about 1:34-1:36! Thank you, I just want to show people what I can do with my voice and I think that this website is the best way for me to do so! And I see what you mean by the “more experience” part but once again, thank you so so much for your perspective about the song! I greatly appreciate your feedback :)
Danke
Danke 8th Aug 2019 23:36 - 6 years ago
yeah, it's unique...like a song from the 50's, 60's with gramophone...fantastic piece of music here...off keys??? that's not the point here, if there is a mistake at all ...

amazing!!!

Danke
oheshawn
oheshawn replied 10th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago
Same! I just love everything about the beat, that’s why I told myself that I need to sing and write something off of this because.. wow! But thank you soo much for your feedback, thank you!!! :)
iamarty
iamarty 8th Aug 2019 20:49 - 6 years ago
mainly during the main bridges and choruses. but like i said, it sounds realllyy nice. i really like it :)
oheshawn
oheshawn replied 10th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago
Ohh, okay I see what you mean. I can see it. But thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! :)
iamarty
iamarty 8th Aug 2019 19:50 - 6 years ago
its a little off key at some points, but it really sounds nice :)
oheshawn
oheshawn replied 8th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago
okay, okay.. at what parts, if don't mind me asking.. but thank you and also thank you for the honesty!

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