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Description : I did not create the beat, I only created the lyrics and I am, of course the singer lol.. um, my first time uploading a song, also first time singing off to someone else beat (which is a wicked beat by the way). Produced by iamarty, look him.. or her up on here lol and um, enjoy what i created, vocal wise :D I honestly would like to know your feedback on this because I REALLY want to be a recording artist.. :)

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  1. tsochai
    tsochai on Sat 10th Aug 2019 - 4 years ago

    you have a great voice
    very dope vocal range
    would be great to hear more from you
    so much hidden talent on this site
    so glad i caught this
    great work , wow

    arty is a really nice producer ive done some work on his productions before

    anyways, keep it up! please, for all of us
    inspiration... truly
    much love
    -CAP

    oheshawn
    Reply by oheshawn

    Oh my gosh! Thank you!! That really made my day :) but dont worry, theres plenty more where that came for sure! Im just getting started!! :D and yess, arty is literally the greatest, Im so glad that I came across this masterpiece of a beat!

  2. wikkid
    wikkid on Fri 9th Aug 2019 - 4 years ago

    Hi,

    I think you did a good job on the lyrics and the lead melody. I do like that you took chances (the jazzy stylings in certain sections, specifically at 1:34-1:36 lyric "I'm really happy that you found me").

    I agree with both Danke and iamarty. I personally love the tone of your voice, and since it takes courage to put your work out for public critique, I think as time goes on and with more experience you will "hear" when the harmony you've created doesn't quite work with the chords in a song. That being said, singing a pleasing melody over original music takes skill, and writing original lyrics is even harder. I think you've succeeded at both. Please keep at it, because you've got talent.

    oheshawn
    Reply by oheshawn

    Hey, man! Im gonna be real with you, I was literally up that same night writing lyrics until I got done, which was like 3 or 4 in the morning. And it was soo many things that I could of done with this beat, so I had options about what to do with this work of art! I just love that you felt the same way that I felt about 1:34-1:36! Thank you, I just want to show people what I can do with my voice and I think that this website is the best way for me to do so! And I see what you mean by the more experience part but once again, thank you so so much for your perspective about the song! I greatly appreciate your feedback :)

  3. Danke
    Danke on Thu 8th Aug 2019 - 4 years ago

    yeah, it's unique...like a song from the 50's, 60's with gramophone...fantastic piece of music here...off keys??? that's not the point here, if there is a mistake at all ...

    amazing!!!

    Danke

    oheshawn
    Reply by oheshawn

    Same! I just love everything about the beat, thats why I told myself that I need to sing and write something off of this because.. wow! But thank you soo much for your feedback, thank you!!! :)

  4. iamarty
    iamarty on Thu 8th Aug 2019 - 4 years ago

    mainly during the main bridges and choruses. but like i said, it sounds realllyy nice. i really like it :)

    oheshawn
    Reply by oheshawn

    Ohh, okay I see what you mean. I can see it. But thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! :)

  5. iamarty
    iamarty on Thu 8th Aug 2019 - 4 years ago

    its a little off key at some points, but it really sounds nice :)

    oheshawn
    Reply by oheshawn

    okay, okay.. at what parts, if don't mind me asking.. but thank you and also thank you for the honesty!

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