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Description : TheFemiFactor, a quick song I made to begin 2019. The beat was made by Looperman user Swoopae.

Tell me how it sounds, I'm working on my delivery and vocals. Thanks.

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  1. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Sat 7th Mar 2020 - 4 years ago

    I don't think I ever heard this one, nice.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Bro it's funny you just found this, I'm right now looking to remaster it and do the beat some justice.

    I actually did a remix and had a lady on here do the hook but the take I did was still meh in terms of the clarity, so I'm working on the remaster right now.

    If you know anybody on here who can really sing, you should let me know.

  2. toastedavalanche
    toastedavalanche on Mon 21st Jan 2019 - 5 years ago

    Sounds good man. Other than the vox mix, the track has a cool vibe and a nice beat.

    TA

  3. KnightHeir
    KnightHeir on Fri 18th Jan 2019 - 5 years ago

    First off, good job on the song, it sounds good. As far as delivery goes some things that help with delivering vocals:

    1. Memorize lyrics before recording
    2. Rapping is a type of sport, do facial stretches to warm up.
    3. It should sound like you trying to have a convo with someone a block away when you spit (loud voice).

    Peace man, good luck to you.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Lol facial stretches will be a first, but I need to get better so I'll try it out. I think I just saw a track you posted in the related section, I will take a listen and provide some feedback soon.

    Thanks.

  4. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Thu 17th Jan 2019 - 5 years ago

    So, generally I'm not in to rap all that much (I'm old), but I did like this track a lot. You've got a good voice and I particularly liked the sections where you were singing. I think that you could improve the track a lot by re-working the mix. It sounds a bit muddy in parts, especially where you have the auto-tuned vocals. Too much mid-range I think. The clarity of the rap sections was much better. The vocals stood out distinctly in the mix. I was taught that each instrument in the track needed to be set in its own area of the frequency spectrum. If you've boosted the mid range frequencies of the auto-tuned vocals, I'd roll that back in your equalizer and see how it works in the mix. If it's in the original audio file for the vocals, then cut the bass and mid-range and see how that sounds.

    I'd just play around with the mix to see if you can get each element of the track to stand out clearly on its own. It's good and you should definitely keep at it.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Lol, thanks. You're right, the most basic thing I've learned so far is setting the priority to getting a good take because you can only do so much mixing. So I'm thinking of re-reecording just so that I have a much better starting point. I will take note of the hook especially and try to clean it up more. I actually thought the verse sounded a bit muffled but I thought it came out cleaner sounding than the hook.

    Thanks for the comment,much appreciated.

  5. tsochai
    tsochai on Wed 16th Jan 2019 - 5 years ago

    dope bro
    keep workin man i fuck with the vibe mixin only thin that i think u not on same level as
    you got a dope style keep it up man
    -CAP

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    thanks bro, you're right, I'm currently working on learning more about mixing.

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