Punk Rawk Chick - PaulFranke

Cool track, very cool beat. The lyrics could be better but you probably know that. There is a glaring problem though. Listen to it, during the chorus ("she's my punk rawk chick") there's a gnarley discrepancy between the drums, guitar and vocals. They're not on, but i think you could get 'em to match up real easily. Listen to it, you'll hear what i'm talking about.

Yes sir, I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Faved

John

The beat, I think was the best. The lyrics were ok.

I love it! Its got that Greenday feel about the vocals> cool ass song!

nice style, i like this, well inspired!!
kp it up!

Nice vocals... I hear Billie Joe from Greenday out of your voice

LOL Nice fun song!! Great looping of the guitar!! I enjoyed this one!!!

good ol punk rock. you definitely captured the feel of how punk used to be and the slight mis-timing of the guitar in parts adds to this rather than taking away. great !!

nice track, its been a while since I heard some puck rock. Great job!!!!!

i think i like the vocals best of all,really!

You sound like the early Curt Cobain/Layne Staley
but a bit softer

:-p

One suggestion is on the chorus guitar, it was a bit off (only by like a couple of seconds)

I like this a lot
definitely my style

Great use of guitar samples and your vocals are really, really good. I guess my only crituqe would be maybe boosting the bass a little more on the track to anchor the guitar track. (I'm a bass player too) other than that, you've got what I call a "Power Punk Pop" thing happening, sort of like early (Green Day). Great job thanks for sharing, peace. D

Hi Paul,

Saw you as a featured and so I decided to right then check out your tune..
Pretty good for using a loop. Just a little bit of timing issues, but still overall nicely put together. Your singing is decent too.
I have a few punk-rock type tune loops that I bought. Sometime soon here I'll make them into something and maybe you can add in vocals to them if you'd like to.

Nice job Paul,
Randy

this is cool because not many people attempt punk rock anymore. you definitly got the style going. cool. a few mess ups on the guitar but the voice is good

ROCK is not something im majorly into although i do like the odd selection of bands. What surprised me was that you can actually sing. I've not heard a good singer on looperman yet lol. You remind me a whole lot of meat puppets, you should have a listen to them. They have a lovely, lazy style which you should try and pick up on i think, it would suit you.

But I am impressed. rei4real is right the guitar goes out of time at around 50 seconds. Just go through and listen to those two only and make sure it lines up. I've wanted to do something like this for a while as my friend is an amazing electric guitar player, but Im just not into rock really. Maybe one day!

this is great!!!!
something like this I had in mind while recording this loop ...
excellent work ...
only on some points it runs a little bit out of time ...
apart from that great track!!!
and very very good vocals ....

peace, rei