Punk Rawk Chick - PaulFranke

21st Nov 2008 08:31 - 17 years ago
Description : This is the first good song I put together. The guitars are loops. I played the bass and some of the cymbals and smaller percussion in garage band. I wrote all the lyrics for it and sung them myself. Feel free to leave comments...good bad or indifferent haha

Comments (16)

If you have time take a listen and give PaulFranke some feedback.

6Hat
6Hat 7th Apr 2011 21:05 - 15 years ago
Cool track, very cool beat. The lyrics could be better but you probably know that. There is a glaring problem though. Listen to it, during the chorus ("she's my punk rawk chick") there's a gnarley discrepancy between the drums, guitar and vocals. They're not on, but i think you could get 'em to match up real easily. Listen to it, you'll hear what i'm talking about.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 21st Mar 2011 02:01 - 15 years ago
Yes sir, I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Faved

John
Music4Life
Music4Life 11th Feb 2011 18:47 - 15 years ago
The beat, I think was the best. The lyrics were ok.
CONEYISLANDRECORDS
CONEYISLANDRECORDS 2nd Apr 2009 12:00 - 17 years ago
I love it! Its got that Greenday feel about the vocals> cool ass song!
Jack_Spear
Jack_Spear 1st Apr 2009 17:22 - 17 years ago
nice style, i like this, well inspired!!
kp it up!
Delwood7
Delwood7 31st Mar 2009 20:02 - 17 years ago
Nice vocals... I hear Billie Joe from Greenday out of your voice
Filaofsoul
Filaofsoul 17th Feb 2009 18:28 - 17 years ago
LOL Nice fun song!! Great looping of the guitar!! I enjoyed this one!!!
DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman 19th Jan 2009 07:36 - 17 years ago
good ol punk rock. you definitely captured the feel of how punk used to be and the slight mis-timing of the guitar in parts adds to this rather than taking away. great !!
torrence528
torrence528 19th Jan 2009 02:44 - 17 years ago
nice track, its been a while since I heard some puck rock. Great job!!!!!
FaithInSound
FaithInSound 16th Dec 2008 16:49 - 17 years ago
i think i like the vocals best of all,really!
ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 30th Nov 2008 23:39 - 17 years ago
You sound like the early Curt Cobain/Layne Staley
but a bit softer

:-p

One suggestion is on the chorus guitar, it was a bit off (only by like a couple of seconds)

I like this a lot
definitely my style
Dennel
Dennel 30th Nov 2008 14:09 - 17 years ago
Great use of guitar samples and your vocals are really, really good. I guess my only crituqe would be maybe boosting the bass a little more on the track to anchor the guitar track. (I'm a bass player too) other than that, you've got what I call a "Power Punk Pop" thing happening, sort of like early (Green Day). Great job thanks for sharing, peace. D
Randall822
Randall822 25th Nov 2008 05:28 - 17 years ago
Hi Paul,

Saw you as a featured and so I decided to right then check out your tune..
Pretty good for using a loop. Just a little bit of timing issues, but still overall nicely put together. Your singing is decent too.
I have a few punk-rock type tune loops that I bought. Sometime soon here I'll make them into something and maybe you can add in vocals to them if you'd like to.

Nice job Paul,
Randy
PaulFranke
PaulFranke replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey Randy,
thanks for the input. I only use garage band on my Mac so timing is sometimes hard to fix. I have been working on some new vocals to go along with tracks I downloaded from this site. If you write any kind of song I'm down to write some lyrics and do the vocals. just let me know.

Paul
a.k.a SHIMMY SHANKS
ChaseManhattan
ChaseManhattan 22nd Nov 2008 21:22 - 17 years ago
this is cool because not many people attempt punk rock anymore. you definitly got the style going. cool. a few mess ups on the guitar but the voice is good
Chud37
Chud37 21st Nov 2008 14:10 - 17 years ago
ROCK is not something im majorly into although i do like the odd selection of bands. What surprised me was that you can actually sing. I've not heard a good singer on looperman yet lol. You remind me a whole lot of meat puppets, you should have a listen to them. They have a lovely, lazy style which you should try and pick up on i think, it would suit you.

But I am impressed. rei4real is right the guitar goes out of time at around 50 seconds. Just go through and listen to those two only and make sure it lines up. I've wanted to do something like this for a while as my friend is an amazing electric guitar player, but Im just not into rock really. Maybe one day!
rei4real
rei4real 21st Nov 2008 13:01 - 17 years ago
this is great!!!!
something like this I had in mind while recording this loop ...
excellent work ...
only on some points it runs a little bit out of time ...
apart from that great track!!!
and very very good vocals ....

peace, rei

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