Stay Awake By A1b2i3n4 - GRMZ

Hey, Abin. This is a really nice track. I've listened to all the tracks you've posted and this one is definitely my favourite. I prefer tracks that have good melody lines and this track is very melodic. If you don't mind me making a suggestion, I think that your tracks are better when they have greater variation in volume level. If you look at the waveform display in Looperman, some of them are solidly jammed at the peak. I think that allowing more dynamics makes things more interesting. Perhaps not for the dance floor, but I'm not sure about that because I don't DJ.

On this track, I think the vocals are a bit too prominent in the mix. If you ever decide to remix this track, I'd drop them down a wee bit so they blend in a bit more with the backing instrumental track. And, I think they need some processing, although I haven't really figured out what that should be. Maybe a bit of delay/reverb, perhaps some doubling in parts. Worth experimenting to see if anything seems to work.

But, all in all, I really liked this track and wanted to give you a thumbs-up on it. Will be interesting to see what comes from your "remix" track. I can't do vocals at all, so I won't be attempting anything on that, but I will be watching to see what you get in response.

if your looking for a collab pm me i'd be interesting in hopping me i do chill out future bass and all sorts i just recently started my new sound cloud for making softer music so hmu on there :)

Link: https://soundcloud.com/flora-bass