Description : The try was to make an old punk song in a modern style. But i think it ends to something thats sounds like made by a 80´s indy band in a garage. I realy love that. The base of this version is free to use and work on. There is also the pella for download. This is my own workversion for the "free style and sound collabaration". All infos under https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/183303/free-style-and-sound-collaboration-for-all ---- loops used jet -- xyilent-xyilent-fast-bass-pluck.WAV -- jwkofficial-future-house-bass.WAV -- mrfunktastic-ein-haus-hard-arse-bass.wav -- soluna-deep-down-drums.wav and some selfplayed synth

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  1. Bindanox
    Bindanox on Fri 30th Sep 2016 - 2 years ago

    Interesting choice and use of the loops.
    Kinda hipnotic and trippy.The vocal snippet work really well in the track.
    Good work

    Nelson

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot for your friendly comment Bindanox.
    Being interesting is always something good.
    Good to know that you believe that the vocals work.

    stay tuned
    joe

  2. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Wed 6th May 2015 - 4 years ago

    Geeez, I've been kidnapped by aliens again! and this is what they're playing as they cruise the universe :p Good description 80's punk electro made in a garage, maybe on mars? :D Love the lyrics!! Hahaha no money come monday so go shopping anyway ;) thump the detective and run free! Good one :D you are a bad influence telling people to do bad things! ;)

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello phatkatz4

    thanks for this nice comment :)

    :) You are not the first one who told me that i have bad influences. A mother wrote mostly the exact same to an album i made once - ....he has an bad influence on the listener and his music let children, who listen to this, have a bad sleep ... - but she liked it anyway :)

    Nice to know that you like this one
    But i am still working on it ......

    stay tuned
    joe

  3. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Wed 6th May 2015 - 4 years ago

    hey joe! always a fan of your stuff man! I really like how you structured this song here, I mean: in placing different elements of the composition to get the efficiently differentiated track (if that makes any sense haha:).
    you know, I am in love with some particular album from Tangerine Dream https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aOHeg3XitM Few years ago I bought this old vinyl but couldn't really recognize the real value and power of this particular one then (it is still one of the less popular TD recordings I guess). All in all this is one I was listening the most from this excellent group!

    Your electronic is much heavier than that! German Electronic rules! haha

    I really enjoyed this one,

    Alex

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello Promenade2239

    I dont know if it realy make any sense but it sounds cool :)

    When i was younger i didn´t listen much to TD cause they where so "soft" :) ... in that times i was realy more into punk ebm and dark wave stuff ..... now i can enjoy also stuff they made ...... :) time makes you softer

    Nice to know that i done this one so the way that you could enjoy the listen :)

    stay tuned joe

  4. Bathers
    Bathers on Wed 6th May 2015 - 4 years ago

    Hallo joecramer

    Dein Song erinnert mich absolut an meine Jugend in den 80ern,dir ist eine tolle Mischung gelungen mit dem Sound von damals und moderneren Elementen.
    Danke für die Reise in die Vergangenheit :-)

    LG

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Danke für diesen freundlichen Kommentar.

    Ich bin ja noch dran an diesem Track aber höre es gerne das ich die richtige Richtung erwischt habe, denn genau das hab ich ja versucht zu erreichen. Hoffentlich gefällt dir der Song auch noch wenn ich damit fertig bin.

    stay tuned
    joe

  5. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Fri 1st May 2015 - 4 years ago

    i really like this and not at least you work. but i would have used some other drums, for telling the truty i got this song on my mind today, i think you could make a really solid song of this, but ofcause it need some work. listen to my new track i started to make drums with laptop keybord till i get a drum macnine :)

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    I am sure that i will do that.

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wenn ich montags morgens aufsteh
und ich schau, ich schau ins portmonee
(in mein schönes portmonee)
dann wird mir total schlecht
und die augen, meine schönen augen, tun mir weh
(die tun mir so weh)
wiedermal kein geld
muss denn das, muss denn das wirklich sein?
(muss das denn wirklich sein?)
-------------------------------------
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld
---------------------------------
Und kommt dann ein detektiv
und der schreit, der schreit nach polizei
(ey polizei, komm mal schnell her hier)
hau ich ihn eins auf die nase
und dann, ja dann, dann kämpfe ich mich frei
frei - ich kämpf mich frei - frei
-------------------------------------
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld
-------------------------------------
wohin ich auch seh
überall, überall auf dieser welt
(auf dieser wunderschönen welt)
OH - ich kann es nicht verstehn
die leute, die leute werfen rum mit ihrem geld
(auf dieser wunderschönen welt)
-------------------------------------
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
ich geh einkaufen
kaufen ohne geld

===========================

when I get up Monday morning
and I see, i see into my wallet
(my beautyful wallet)
then I feel sick
and my eyes, my beautiful eys, hurt me
(they are hurt me so much)
once again no money
must be this, musst realy be this?
(must realy be this?)
-------------------------------------
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money
---------------------------------
And should then appear a detective
and he cries, he cries out for police
(hey police, come quick here)
I´ll thump him one on the nose
and then, yes then, then I fight myself free
free - i fight myself free - free
-------------------------------------
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money
-------------------------------------
no matter where I look
anywhere, anywhere in the world
(in this beautiful world)
OH - I can not understand
the people, the people throw around with money
(in this beautiful world)
-------------------------------------
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money
I go shopping
I go shopping
I go shopping
buy without money

 


 

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