Fine Print - Corey666

Hey, I don't think this is that odd. The beginning piece sounds like a transition from a previous song that leads into the second piece. A drastic change of view but the order of what you have started here does work. You could make the sections transition better but I believe this could turn into a heavy type of track. Dark sky trouble in our mind that blind the sight from covered eyes. Or as it is could go well for audio description to a painters tunnel of mixed thoughts. I receive many options of directions you could further develop the idea into, reminds me of the type of sounds I heard over at audiosparks art site. Keep adding to this beginning, the fine print reveals more than one would pick up right away.